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This was quite the satisfying update, even void the fullness of news. It was quite a treat to re-read CJ's old Soapbox post. He's quite the story-teller! Though, I still can't understand why he would object to his wife's ingenuity in self-cooling. We have lots of air conditioning down here in Florida and I don't complain in the least when my wife has a similar idea!
Thanks for the new screenshots. Firefight looks more enticing by the minute!
And a very special thanks to Uncle Eric and all else involved for purifying my inbox!
Hopefully the ultra top-secret World Domination strategic planning symposium location fully employs the use of air conditioning, to maximize a productive working-weekend, bearing more fruit and less whining.
Posted by: Phoenix1330
Your improper sentence that read: 'Preferably one covering grammar and punctuation," would be better written as a full sentence. A full sentence, in a form such as this, "We would prefer that the book you read is one covering grammar and punctuation," would be more acceptable.
I concur with Phoenix's edit of the Weekly Update. The sentence "preferably one covering grammar and punctuation" is incomplete. A correction to the sentence could read "The book should preferably be one covering grammar and spelling."
In addition to the obvious and aforementioned slight in grammar, there was also an improper use of punctuation in the opening paragraph to your query. Don't worry though, kids get contractions mixed up all the time. Actually, you didn't even need it in the first place.
[Edited on 08.01.2009 1:05 AM PDT]