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Posted by: cB4d93
Posted by: Silent Eli
you are a good translatorIdiot can be a hard language to learn, but once you get it down, everything becomes so clear! The whole world will make sense to you.
This reminds me alot of my story, and how nobody read it. :(
You should work on creating the Sangheili's dialogue more flowy and philosphical, along with more shock and disdain. Theywere stripped of all they had and the basis for the religion they have followed for centuries has been showed false by the Arbiter. Otherwise you did a good job. I'll check up on this.