- last post: 01.01.0001 12:00 AM PDT
May 7th, Jacob Whitman is finishing loading his camping supplies onto the flatbed of his F250. It is almost time for his yearly camping trip to the Lookout Mountains. This was his 8th year in a row, he had been going ever since he turned 19. It was nearing 7:00PM, and wanting to be all refreshed for his 7 hour trip tomorrow, Jacob satisfied with his work, walked into his house, got ready for bed, at 8:21, he fell asleep. little did he know, this would be the last good sleep he will ever get.
For the undelined part, should i leave that out and start to suprise the reader? or leave it in?