- Deidg Nactal
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- Exalted Mythic Member
Keep it up - forgive me if my crit sounds harsh - i go to an art school (MICA). Your graphite work is impressive, but you might want to try getting more variety in your tones. Make the darks darker and the lights lighter - right now they blend a little. Shape is a little off, but it's cosmetic, you could fix that pretty easily. Just take a step back and mark where things need to be.
As for general advice, try using vine charcoal and toning the page entirely with some kind of middle tone. Then go in with an eraser and carve out the lights, and shade the darks with the charcoal.