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Posted by: JMO 137
How about:
As the UNSC prepare for an all out assualt, they are attacked.
The Convenant ruthlessly destroy and kill, and it is up to the Master Chief, to defend the planet Reach.
You may know the fate of Reach, but you do not know how it came to be.
This was the Master Chief's greatest battle, and his greatest loss.
Thats great although maybe more like;
As the UNSC prepare for an all out assualt, they Covenant stuck first.
They have come ruthlessly destroy and kill every living being on Reach, and it is up to the brave Spartan II's to defend the planet Reach.
You may know the fate of Reach, but you do not know how it came to be.
This was the Master Chief and the UNSC's greatest battle, and their greatest loss.
I think it flowed a bit better and kept more in time with Blue teams defence on the surface, including Spartan II's rather than just chief.
V2 will be up by tonight.
I might look for some nice screen shots from halo 3 which emphasize new aspects of gameply for the back,
I'm also gonna upload a sketchup model of it.