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Posted by: SlayersBane
Posted by: Lozza
Well I'm not lisitning to half of you because there mostly just
"OMG WTF BBQ THIS IS-blam!-"
You are all -blam!-. This is my first Machinima and my friend (sas_oddprune) tried to record this with Audiocity and a Baby sleeping next to him! Why the -blam!- Can't anyone be nice on Bungie.net. I wouldn't mind if you said it was crap, and then give Constructive Critasism.
I'm leaving this -blam!- thread to die!
Go -blam!- yourselfs!You want criticism? Okay. First, you need to actually listen to it instead of going on a freaking rampage. Think you can handle that? Okay, moving on. This was your first machinima. Great, that means you can only get better from here (hopefully) Camera angles weren't bad. Voice acting...I realize you didn't do them, but pay attention. It was horrible. Make sure your friend knows that. "Oh, well he was recording them in audiocity(properly known as Audacity) while the baby was sleeping!" You can say that...in fact, you did...but the thing is, machinima is film. Now I want you to imagine the set of Saving Private Ryan. Our soldiers are running up the beach of Normandy, dodging bullets to save their lives. Suddenly, a soldiers guts are brutally ripped from him due to a bullet wound to the stomach. Then you hear him whisper: "ahhh....ahhh...mama...mama...ahhh...ahhh."
Do you think people would take that seriously? No. You may say, oh well that's a movie. I have a machinima. It's different. Well, as stated before, machinima is film, and if you want anybody to take you seriously, you have to put effort into it. Now we come back to the excuse of "Oh, there was a baby beside him!" See, that's why you do your voice acting on time in a space where you can work alone and put your best effort into it. If he can't do the job well, then get someone else. "Oh, well he's my friend!" Well, are you willing to let him ruin your machinima just because he's your friend?
Also, try to control your temper while in the forums. It's not that hard to do. You don't have to respond immediately. You have time to get your point across in the most readable way. When you type out of anger, you babble, you spell incorrectly, and you drive people away from your machinima. I hope you take this into mind.
Thanks I agree with your points there!
See thats all I wanted, isted of 1 line answers, some poeple who are clever and tell me about it