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Subject: Defence. (A Halo 3 Machinima)
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On August 30, 2552, 314 Covenant Spaceships came out of Slipspace intent on destroying the Planet Reach.
Eventually Hundreds of Covenant dropships land on Reach. This is the Story of the 501st Orbital Drop Shock Trooper Battalion defending Military Reservation 01478-B.
They will face their fears and Hopefully make it out alive.


Thanks to Belly391, GBR Rusty, BASSHUNTER007, SmirkyConnor97 and Pheonix586 for their awesome acting skills and Oddprune for his Awesome Voice Acting!

Ignore the ODSTs Sheilds they are there because we filmed this on Slayer and couldn't get rid of the Sheilds because then the Elites will look stupid.

This is my first proper Machinima so please keep that in mind when you Comment.

Please Rate and Comment.

Constructive Critiscsem please

[Edited on 09.13.2009 12:16 PM PDT]

  • 09.13.2009 11:25 AM PDT
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I'm one with the warrior inside. The evidence can't be denied. The entire world will stare. Into this battlefield tonight. As I stand before you with a warrior's heart now. I can feel the strength that will Ensure my victory this time

This belongs in the Halo 3 Forum...

  • 09.13.2009 11:29 AM PDT
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Posted by: magog_rules
This belongs in the Halo 3 Forum...


No Because its about Reach

  • 09.13.2009 11:30 AM PDT

*wrong forum*

And that was terrible. When you scream in the machinima, ACTUALLY scream.

  • 09.13.2009 11:42 AM PDT

ok u mother-blam!- dick u try making a machinima wiv £30 and wiv great voice acting and a baby asleep next to u next time u give negative feed back go -blam!- urself

[Edited on 09.13.2009 11:53 AM PDT]

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Posted by: sas_oddprune
ok u mother-blam!- dick u try making a machinima wiv £30 and wiv great voice acting and a baby asleep next to u next time u give negative feed back go -blam!- urself


^^He did the Voices BTW^^

Flame him not me!

  • 09.13.2009 11:57 AM PDT

great lozza go and start a flame war y dont u

  • 09.13.2009 11:59 AM PDT

Avatar was awesome! If there is to be a Halo movie, make sure James Cameron gets the job!

Read the Halo: Reach form rules! No advertising!

  • 09.13.2009 12:08 PM PDT

Machinima.com Director and for Realm
http://www.youtube.com/user/HemisphereCinema

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i don't think you aren't allowed to even post videos in the halo3 forums or reach forums try the gallery forums

  • 09.13.2009 12:12 PM PDT

That was so bad that Machinima.com wouldn't touch it.

  • 09.13.2009 12:13 PM PDT
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Posted by: Plasma3150
That was so bad that Machinima.com wouldn't touch it.


Thats what she said, -blam!-

  • 09.13.2009 12:14 PM PDT

machimana remake

  • 09.13.2009 12:15 PM PDT
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Posted by: mini Watson360
machimana remake


Get a life

  • 09.13.2009 12:16 PM PDT

I hunt for the Prophet of Contentment, the San 'Shyumm that murdered my son, and stole his birthright, his Energy Sword. They call our species Heretics. They claim to all that our tongues sting, our words a vile poison that feeds on the unworthy. I have seen the true face of Heresy. The head of a gallant warrior lay on the ground. His neck scorched and blistered, scarred by his own blade. I shall retrieve the weapon, and drive it through that bastard's heart! Punishment for his sins is nigh.

Needs better voice acting, and more attention paid to Canon (yes you broke it).

  • 09.13.2009 12:41 PM PDT

Posted by: sas_oddprune
great lozza go and start a flame war y dont u


What a hypocrite. Also, LRN2ENGLISH.

  • 09.13.2009 12:55 PM PDT

Yes, really

that....

that was just awful.
im sorry, but really? 1 guy, like 10 characters, all of which are screaming, but you insist on whispering.
1/10

on a good note, the camera skills where ok, but move around less for your characters. if you were getting shot at you wouldn't be running in a circle.

  • 09.13.2009 12:57 PM PDT

Perception is everything.

I'm sorry dude...but the voice acting killed it. Also, I don't think defense has been spelled defence since the constitution.

  • 09.13.2009 2:22 PM PDT

You can get a ban from advertising you know.

  • 09.13.2009 2:36 PM PDT
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Well I'm not lisitning to half of you because there mostly just
"OMG WTF BBQ THIS IS-blam!-"

You are all -blam!-. This is my first Machinima and my friend (sas_oddprune) tried to record this with Audiocity and a Baby sleeping next to him! Why the -blam!- Can't anyone be nice on Bungie.net. I wouldn't mind if you said it was crap, and then give Constructive Critasism.

I'm leaving this -blam!- thread to die!

Go -blam!- yourselfs!

  • 09.13.2009 11:13 PM PDT

Your Face!

SIP FTW Btw, You must Join or The Governator will Come after you!

http://www.bungie.net/fanclub/sip/Group/GroupHome.aspx

this is very good considering it is your first Machinima, Good luck with part two.

  • 09.14.2009 12:02 AM PDT

Perception is everything.

Posted by: Lozza
Well I'm not lisitning to half of you because there mostly just
"OMG WTF BBQ THIS IS-blam!-"

You are all -blam!-. This is my first Machinima and my friend (sas_oddprune) tried to record this with Audiocity and a Baby sleeping next to him! Why the -blam!- Can't anyone be nice on Bungie.net. I wouldn't mind if you said it was crap, and then give Constructive Critasism.

I'm leaving this -blam!- thread to die!

Go -blam!- yourselfs!
You want criticism? Okay. First, you need to actually listen to it instead of going on a freaking rampage. Think you can handle that? Okay, moving on. This was your first machinima. Great, that means you can only get better from here (hopefully) Camera angles weren't bad. Voice acting...I realize you didn't do them, but pay attention. It was horrible. Make sure your friend knows that. "Oh, well he was recording them in audiocity(properly known as Audacity) while the baby was sleeping!" You can say that...in fact, you did...but the thing is, machinima is film. Now I want you to imagine the set of Saving Private Ryan. Our soldiers are running up the beach of Normandy, dodging bullets to save their lives. Suddenly, a soldiers guts are brutally ripped from him due to a bullet wound to the stomach. Then you hear him whisper: "ahhh....ahhh...mama...mama...ahhh...ahhh."

Do you think people would take that seriously? No. You may say, oh well that's a movie. I have a machinima. It's different. Well, as stated before, machinima is film, and if you want anybody to take you seriously, you have to put effort into it. Now we come back to the excuse of "Oh, there was a baby beside him!" See, that's why you do your voice acting on time in a space where you can work alone and put your best effort into it. If he can't do the job well, then get someone else. "Oh, well he's my friend!" Well, are you willing to let him ruin your machinima just because he's your friend?

Also, try to control your temper while in the forums. It's not that hard to do. You don't have to respond immediately. You have time to get your point across in the most readable way. When you type out of anger, you babble, you spell incorrectly, and you drive people away from your machinima. I hope you take this into mind.

[Edited on 09.14.2009 1:01 AM PDT]

  • 09.14.2009 1:00 AM PDT
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I do not appreciate B.Net Group solicitation. If you ignore this and send me an invitation anyway, I will block communications with you.

Posted by: sas_oddprune
great lozza go and start a flame war y dont u

No one cares about the circumstances in which you recorded your lines. They watch a production for the entertainment value. Knowing that you couldn't actually yell because you have a baby next to you don't make it any more enjoyable. Next time, record your lines when you are not next to a sleeping baby.

I am a freelance voiceover talent / audio hobbyist, and I started out on a crappy, half-broken headset, but I could still get results out of it... especially with Halo and the ever-prevalent radio filters that easily mask bad quality.

I'm not trying to offend you... but you have to understand that regardless of your circumstances... your performance is either believable or it isn't... and if it isn't... it is much, much better for you to put it off and wait until you do have a believable one.

  • 09.14.2009 1:40 AM PDT

Fear my Pink Mist...

uhg...

  • 09.14.2009 4:59 AM PDT

Really this is against the rules to advertise.

  • 09.14.2009 5:08 AM PDT
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Posted by: SlayersBane
Posted by: Lozza
Well I'm not lisitning to half of you because there mostly just
"OMG WTF BBQ THIS IS-blam!-"

You are all -blam!-. This is my first Machinima and my friend (sas_oddprune) tried to record this with Audiocity and a Baby sleeping next to him! Why the -blam!- Can't anyone be nice on Bungie.net. I wouldn't mind if you said it was crap, and then give Constructive Critasism.

I'm leaving this -blam!- thread to die!

Go -blam!- yourselfs!
You want criticism? Okay. First, you need to actually listen to it instead of going on a freaking rampage. Think you can handle that? Okay, moving on. This was your first machinima. Great, that means you can only get better from here (hopefully) Camera angles weren't bad. Voice acting...I realize you didn't do them, but pay attention. It was horrible. Make sure your friend knows that. "Oh, well he was recording them in audiocity(properly known as Audacity) while the baby was sleeping!" You can say that...in fact, you did...but the thing is, machinima is film. Now I want you to imagine the set of Saving Private Ryan. Our soldiers are running up the beach of Normandy, dodging bullets to save their lives. Suddenly, a soldiers guts are brutally ripped from him due to a bullet wound to the stomach. Then you hear him whisper: "ahhh....ahhh...mama...mama...ahhh...ahhh."

Do you think people would take that seriously? No. You may say, oh well that's a movie. I have a machinima. It's different. Well, as stated before, machinima is film, and if you want anybody to take you seriously, you have to put effort into it. Now we come back to the excuse of "Oh, there was a baby beside him!" See, that's why you do your voice acting on time in a space where you can work alone and put your best effort into it. If he can't do the job well, then get someone else. "Oh, well he's my friend!" Well, are you willing to let him ruin your machinima just because he's your friend?

Also, try to control your temper while in the forums. It's not that hard to do. You don't have to respond immediately. You have time to get your point across in the most readable way. When you type out of anger, you babble, you spell incorrectly, and you drive people away from your machinima. I hope you take this into mind.


Thanks I agree with your points there!

See thats all I wanted, isted of 1 line answers, some poeple who are clever and tell me about it

  • 09.14.2009 11:20 PM PDT