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Subject: [Story] Halo: Goddess of War (Introduction available)

Honor Light Your Way, Our Blood Shall Forge A Thousand Generations!.

This is a PROTOTYPE story. It might not be going anywhere.


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I'll Make A Man Out Of You
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I don't care what you guys say, I love the song above. It's from the movie Mulan, and is probably my favorite song of all time. : ) Plus, thought it would fit this story perfect. You'll see as it unfolds.

Anywho, sorry the Introduction is so short, I was rushed. The parts will be a lot longer, I promise.

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Introduction

Sarah Williams was starting to miss her old life. Starting to miss her friends, her popularity, and her simple way of living.

But there was no turning back, the second she signed the enlistment forms, she sold her life to the ODST.

Drill sergeants barked orders at her, as they fired their weapons, and shouted insults. All in the means to frighten her.

Well, they were doing a good job. Sarah sobbed, and kept crawling through the barbwire, getting a nice collection on scars as she did. Bedraggled in rain and mud, she kept going. Kept pushing on.

Nearly twenty minutes after everyone else, Sarah finally cleared the obsticale course. After that, she and her fellow trainees followed Instructor Robbinson to the firing range. She was the only female there, and male trainees smacked her ass, and chuckled as they ran passed her.

This made Sarah mad, but she had to remind herself she was a soldier now.

"Aten-shun!" called Robbinson, standing in front of a firing range. Everyone, including Sarah, stood straight and saluted. "Today, you will prove to me your skills in shooting. Each of you will form a line at the four X's on the floor."

He pointed at the X's, indicating their location. Sarah intentionally got in the back of a the line she was in, and Robbinson let out a satisfying laugh as he approached her.

"You afraid, girl?" he asked Sarah.

Sarah stuttered. "N-- no sir!"

Robbinson got eye to eye with the female trainee, and chuckled. "I'm going to make a man out of you."

[Edited on 09.20.2009 8:07 AM PDT]

  • 09.17.2009 5:54 PM PDT
Subject: [Story] Halo: The Artifact (Prologue Available)
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Good stuff bro :D This will be another one of the stories i really look forward to reading :) You are only missing two Ys at the end of They. Keep it up man!!!

  • 09.17.2009 7:10 PM PDT

Honor Light Your Way, Our Blood Shall Forge A Thousand Generations!.

Thanks. Anyways, expect more to be out soon.

  • 09.19.2009 4:58 PM PDT

Interesting. Why does no one read my stories any more? Sadface.

Anyway, whining aside, this has potential, although, as with every ODST fan fiction, it has the risk of becoming unoriginal, predictable, and linear. Try to steer away from the route.

  • 09.19.2009 5:09 PM PDT

Honor Light Your Way, Our Blood Shall Forge A Thousand Generations!.

Oh trust me, I already got the plot from beginning to end. It'll be original, that I can promise.

  • 09.19.2009 5:11 PM PDT

Posted by: LIL Smurf DOGG
Oh trust me, I already got the plot from beginning to end. It'll be original, that I can promise.


You're more organised than me then; I just make everything up as I go along.

  • 09.19.2009 5:12 PM PDT

Honor Light Your Way, Our Blood Shall Forge A Thousand Generations!.

In truth, I will make minor details up as I go along, but as far as the major plot goes, I got it down.

  • 09.19.2009 6:31 PM PDT
Subject: [Story] Halo: Goddess of War (Introduction available)

Honor Light Your Way, Our Blood Shall Forge A Thousand Generations!.

Reserved.

[Edited on 09.19.2009 7:08 PM PDT]

  • 09.19.2009 7:04 PM PDT