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Subject: Attempted Murder

This is completely non-canon with the exception of using maps, equipment, etc.

John: Gotcha.

He pulls the trigger and hits his target dead on. John quickly moves away to avoid being spotted.

Matt: So another success i see?

John: Yeah, no problem. I'm waiting to see if someone will actually see me kill someone.

Matt: At this rate, that could be a while.

Meanwhile at the New Mombassa Police Department.

Lt. Brady: We've got another assassination at the Wind Power Station 7. I want you to go investigate immidiately. Jake your in charge.

[Edited on 10.05.2009 5:54 PM PDT]

  • 10.02.2009 9:55 PM PDT
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No matter how many seals are killed by sharks a year, it never seems to be enough :D

Looks pretty cool. Just a few formatting issues. If you are doing the dan: hey i have a ball It has to be like

Dan: hey i have a ball.

steve looked at him strangely

Steve: MY BALL

In an instant steve had killed dan.

  • 10.03.2009 11:39 AM PDT

Jake: Alright my special ops team, your with me with staking out the crime scene. Bravo, blockade the city nobody gets in or out. Gamma squad, patrol throughout the entire city and check houses. Let's go!

Meanwhile back at John's house.

John:I'm not sure how much longer I can keep this job going. They've blockaded the city. I'll probably lay

John is intterupted by a loud knock on the door.

Voice behind door: Open up! New Mombasa police!

John goes to open the door.

Officer: I have a warrant to search your house.

John: Why do you want to search my place?

Officer: We have reasons to beleive that you are linked to the series of murders. I'm sure you have heard of them.

John: I have heard of them but I am not a part of them in anyway!

Offficer: Look, you're an ex-ODST and are a trained sharpshooter. It's not my orders to search the place. I'd rather be back at the office.

John: Fine search the place, you won't find anything anyways.

Officer: Alright move in, let the probes search.

Three moniter probes come in to search throughout the building.

Officer: Probes, report.

Probe: Highest priority Sniper Rifle. The case hasn't been opened and the rifle is an old model.

Officer: Alright, let's move on. Sorry to bother you sir.

Onve the officer leaves, John closes the door and pulls a switch that reveals a teleporter. John proceeds to walk through the teleporter that leads him into a large, open workspace.

John: Matt! Where are you?

Matt: I'm over here.

John: It's definetly time to lay low. The police searched my place today.

Matt: I couldn't agree more.

Suddenly John's Dumb AI approaches John and Matt.

AI: Sire, you have another mission. A General is moving through the Wind Power Station 7 in an armored convoy.

John: Well, maybe one more time wouldn't hurt.

Matt: Good Luck.

  • 10.04.2009 5:22 PM PDT

Pretty cool. Although you might want to describe the characters.

  • 10.04.2009 6:06 PM PDT

keep this up maybe a machinama video seires?

  • 10.05.2009 1:03 PM PDT

Posted by: TW InKoGnIto
Pretty cool. Although you might want to describe the characters.

thanks what i will probably do is put in on the first post make a list of the characters and a brief discription of them. Most of the characters you won't see much or will be explained later though.

  • 10.05.2009 5:50 PM PDT