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Halo 4

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  • 10.28.2009 8:35 AM PDT
Subject: Halo 4: Fall of mankind

That actually sounds pretty epic

  • 10.28.2009 8:41 AM PDT
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wooow man really cool & nice story!! but it's kinda short but still cool though

  • 10.28.2009 8:42 AM PDT

oh death was never enemy of ours

maybe the main fighting could happen somewhere else on Earth, but...yea...its a good story

  • 10.28.2009 8:42 AM PDT
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btw u didn't mention Cortana :(

  • 10.28.2009 8:42 AM PDT

Yes, I'm a furry. And yes, I like men. So what?

Split it into three paragraphs and I'll read it. I read the same line like three times

  • 10.28.2009 8:45 AM PDT

Stop PMing me if you are group recruiting.

Holy crud, that isn't a wall of text, that's a planet!

  • 10.28.2009 8:51 AM PDT

The internet is a bad place.

Though most of your sentencing was bad and somethimes hard to understand,it does sound like a decent and possible story.

It would be nice to have to play as an ODST one time and spartans another.
Maybe they find The Spirit of Fire to?

  • 10.28.2009 8:51 AM PDT
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okay, but it completely destroys canon. Maybe it could be some kind of "alternate universe" kinda thing, like what the new star trek movie was.

  • 10.28.2009 9:05 AM PDT
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That actually sounds pretty epic

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oh, wait! howzaboutz a level in seattle, and it could be set in bungie studios!! that would be EPIC!!

  • 10.28.2009 9:06 AM PDT

The internet is a bad place.

Posted by: masterchef1
oh, wait! howzaboutz a level in seattle, and it could be set in bungie studios!! that would be EPIC!!


Think of the possibilities...
Maybe you could be playing halo 4 while playing halo 4 in halo 4...

  • 10.28.2009 9:08 AM PDT
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I'm one with the warrior inside. The evidence can't be denied. The entire world will stare. Into this battlefield tonight. As I stand before you with a warrior's heart now. I can feel the strength that will Ensure my victory this time

The remnant of the Covenant in Halo 3 were all on the Ark when the Replacement Installation 07 fired. That means that all of the Covenant are DEAD!

  • 10.28.2009 9:11 AM PDT
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cool


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  • 10.28.2009 9:14 AM PDT
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Posted by: Rob004
Posted by: masterchef1
oh, wait! howzaboutz a level in seattle, and it could be set in bungie studios!! that would be EPIC!!


Think of the possibilities...
Maybe you could be playing halo 4 while playing halo 4 in halo 4...


ow, ow my head hurts! make it stop! make it stop!

  • 10.28.2009 9:20 AM PDT

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Posted by: masterchef1
oh, wait! howzaboutz a level in seattle, and it could be set in bungie studios!! that would be EPIC!!


You see a ship glassing everything but Bungie studios stays untouchable. You investigate it and find Marty hiding there with a violin. You must escort him to safety, but Marty keeps running at the Covenant with his violin. Every now and then he plays some random Halo tune and talks to you about this game they did 500 years ago...

Overall OPs story sounds ok, if Brutes didn't go all berserk once their plans were ruined.

  • 10.28.2009 9:22 AM PDT
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Posted by: masterchef1
oh, wait! howzaboutz a level in seattle, and it could be set in bungie studios!! that would be EPIC!!


You see a ship glassing everything but Bungie studios stays untouchable. You investigate it and find Marty hiding there with a violin. You must escort him to safety, but Marty keeps running at the Covenant with his violin. Every now and then he plays some random Halo tune and talks to you about this game they did 500 years ago...

Overall OPs story sounds ok, if Brutes didn't go all berserk once their plans were ruined.


maybe there couyld be an achievement if you save him:

Martydom, 10g
saved marty from the covenant.

  • 10.28.2009 9:26 AM PDT

I am flatterd that you botherd to look at my signature.

here is a bit of info (only to help I don't want to be an ass)

Lord hood most likely will already be dead.

because 50 years later after the halo3 events marines visit the Museum and talk about chief and how he was never seen again...

what if this story of yours takes place..60 years later...chief is in cryo in a crashed ship on a strange forruner planet.

just throwing out some ideas is all.

  • 10.28.2009 9:47 AM PDT

1st give this man a cookie

2nd you are a genius and you should defenatly go work at bungie!!

3rd if this would be the storyline of halo 4 it will be spioled now

4th EPIC............... enough said


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  • 10.28.2009 10:47 AM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

Shortly after Halo 3 after the death of the Prophet the Covenant were in frantic confusion.
With no worthy Prophet to take the throne a powerful Brute Cheiftain took the throne by force.

After his rise to power he forsaked the Covenants original Journey to activate a Halo and focused solely on punishing the humans for what they have done, since he is a brute and has no interest in going on a religious journey and only wants to cause pain to all mankind (which is incorrect).

He uses the entire force of Covenant to full out attack earth. After a while the Covenant prevail and take out earth's outer defenses. Even though the Covenant has sustained heavy loses they still have enough forces to Glass all of earth and wipe it from the face of the galaxy.

He instead tells all forces to invade Earth again but this time full force and in multiple locations.

The UNSC is struggling against the force and is losing but only slightly a battle (wtf?). Lord Hood is notified of a beacon located about where the Cheif was assumed dead. He sends a few ships from one of the remaining outer colonies to investigate.
They come back with seven spartans, one of which is the Master Cheif. The other six were trapped on Onyx but are now freed and are ready to fight (major plot hole and makes no sense). They are given more updated armor and nicer weapons. They are sent in to Chicago to stop the attack on the city which is being slowed only by a force of ODST's lead by Buck, Dare, Micky, Dutch, Romeo, and the Rookie (would be a higher rank). They are almost pushed out when a strike ost (ost?) pushed all the way out and overun when a large strike force headed up by four spartans flanks the force and overuns them.

The other three Spartans, one of which is the Cheif, are pushing a strike force of Brutes out of D.C. After they push them out of Washington they move on to Boston and the other force moves on to Los Angeles.
After they have cleared the Covenant out of most of from the United States' largest of cities they move on to Europe (Just like that, huh?). They get the Covenant out of most of the European cities and then the Brute Cheiftain decides that the only thing to do now is Glass the entire planet (why not do it in the first place?).

While the ships are moving into position the Arbiter and his force of ships return just in time and engage almost all of the ships into a heated space battle (Super plot-hole = fail). During this time Lord Hood gets the Anti-Air rail guns (MAC guns!) optimized and uses them to sway the battle in the Arbiter's favor.

Three of the Spartans, the Chief included, assault the Brute Cheiftain's main command ship. During the attack they face the Brute Cheiftain. During this final battle the Arbiter finishes off the rest of his fleet.
During the fight the Cheiftain manages to kill one of the Spartans but is defeated by the Cheif by way (way?0 of a Shotgun to the face multiple times. They have defeated the remaining Covenant forces and Earth is safe. Even though it has taken quiete a beating mankind prevails once again and is saved because of the Master Cheif and the other Spartans.


So, I've run over your story and picked out most of the grammar mistakes and silly plot-holes.

In, my opinion, it's the worst rendition of a Halo 4. What are you thinking? This isn't the 'fall of mankind' if they end up winning, is it?

There's no indication as to how the Spartans escaped the Dyson Sphere, no mention of Halsey or Mendez who are probably the most significant characters in Onyx.

I know this is how you'd like to see it but you clearly know next to nothing of the Halo universe.

  • 10.28.2009 11:11 AM PDT

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  • 10.28.2009 11:11 AM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

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China called they want their wall back


I managed to break the wall down into paragraphs, just to spare people's eyes.

  • 10.28.2009 11:15 AM PDT

FINISH THE FIGHT

Posted by: Y3Y00
wooow man really cool & nice story!! but it's kinda short but still cool though



well think about it there'd be multiple missions in EACH city which would spread out to about 20-25 missions


EDIT: and by the way I LOVE IT it would be epic as hell cool idea man

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  • 10.28.2009 11:25 AM PDT
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that would be kewl but maybe with some slight variations

  • 10.28.2009 11:34 AM PDT