By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.
Posted by: ZYPHER8 Iz BaK
Posted by: ajw34307
Posted by: ZYPHER8 Iz BaK
for all of the people that came in here and posted stories of your own, or "gave revisions", or shot him down.. it is not your place to go and do that. he simply posted a story that he made, hoping that people would like it. he didnt ask you to make it better, he didnt ask you to argue over his post. ajw or whatever the hell your name is, you arent cool. nobody gives a -blam!- what you think. and just because you know eeeeeeeeeeeeeverythinggggg about halo, doesnt make you better. so -blam!- the haters. he can update what he feels makes sense.
GOOD OP
Wow, you're an idiot for mistaking advice and feedback as hate. He asked us how he could make it better by giving him criticism and that's what I did.
well first off, there were worse criticisms than yours. and you were all "you know next to nothing about the halo universe" and i just thought that was messed up. cuz he put work into that, he didnt need people saying it wouldnt work. so no offense or anything. but put yourself in his shoes, whether you know alot or not about halo, he probably thinks that story was freaking awesome, and though a little inaccurate..i think it would be a pretty fun game.
'Tis the burden of those who see nothing else in the game other than the story.