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Subject: Halo 4

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

Posted by: ZYPHER8 Iz BaK
for all of the people that came in here and posted stories of your own, or "gave revisions", or shot him down.. it is not your place to go and do that. he simply posted a story that he made, hoping that people would like it. he didnt ask you to make it better, he didnt ask you to argue over his post. ajw or whatever the hell your name is, you arent cool. nobody gives a -blam!- what you think. and just because you know eeeeeeeeeeeeeverythinggggg about halo, doesnt make you better. so -blam!- the haters. he can update what he feels makes sense.
GOOD OP


Wow, you're an idiot for mistaking advice and feedback as hate. He asked us how he could make it better by giving him criticism and that's what I did.

  • 10.29.2009 3:55 PM PDT

ityler


Posted by: ajw34307
Posted by: ZYPHER8 Iz BaK
for all of the people that came in here and posted stories of your own, or "gave revisions", or shot him down.. it is not your place to go and do that. he simply posted a story that he made, hoping that people would like it. he didnt ask you to make it better, he didnt ask you to argue over his post. ajw or whatever the hell your name is, you arent cool. nobody gives a -blam!- what you think. and just because you know eeeeeeeeeeeeeverythinggggg about halo, doesnt make you better. so -blam!- the haters. he can update what he feels makes sense.
GOOD OP


Wow, you're an idiot for mistaking advice and feedback as hate. He asked us how he could make it better by giving him criticism and that's what I did.



well first off, there were worse criticisms than yours. and you were all "you know next to nothing about the halo universe" and i just thought that was messed up. cuz he put work into that, he didnt need people saying it wouldnt work. so no offense or anything. but put yourself in his shoes, whether you know alot or not about halo, he probably thinks that story was freaking awesome, and though a little inaccurate..i think it would be a pretty fun game.

  • 10.29.2009 3:59 PM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

Posted by: ZYPHER8 Iz BaK

Posted by: ajw34307
Posted by: ZYPHER8 Iz BaK
for all of the people that came in here and posted stories of your own, or "gave revisions", or shot him down.. it is not your place to go and do that. he simply posted a story that he made, hoping that people would like it. he didnt ask you to make it better, he didnt ask you to argue over his post. ajw or whatever the hell your name is, you arent cool. nobody gives a -blam!- what you think. and just because you know eeeeeeeeeeeeeverythinggggg about halo, doesnt make you better. so -blam!- the haters. he can update what he feels makes sense.
GOOD OP


Wow, you're an idiot for mistaking advice and feedback as hate. He asked us how he could make it better by giving him criticism and that's what I did.



well first off, there were worse criticisms than yours. and you were all "you know next to nothing about the halo universe" and i just thought that was messed up. cuz he put work into that, he didnt need people saying it wouldnt work. so no offense or anything. but put yourself in his shoes, whether you know alot or not about halo, he probably thinks that story was freaking awesome, and though a little inaccurate..i think it would be a pretty fun game.


'Tis the burden of those who see nothing else in the game other than the story.

  • 10.29.2009 4:04 PM PDT

ityler

your grammar bugs me

edit:though there is nothing wrong with it

[Edited on 10.29.2009 4:07 PM PDT]

  • 10.29.2009 4:07 PM PDT

Wow that sounds really good. I do think that the extra spartans is cool but how. The attack on earth is really good but more details and i say that humanity is losing badly just like in halo 3. I also like how you brought in the odsts. I think that at least one continent should get glassed just to show how bad earth is losing. THEN bring in chief. It would be cool if you could some how bring back the flood but then again that seems kinda cheze. I also like how you brought back the elites but it should be like the elites dont just show. Mabey they r attacked a little to. Here you can bring up the playing as an elite like in halo 2 except in halo 4 its more of a space battle because the elites have no planet. I say that all the spartans that invade the main ship die just to make it memorable and let chief take down the chieftan. Some how bring cortana into it all.

I wrote a lot cause i think this is really good and it could be even better you dont have to use my suggestions thats just what i think would be cool. Really Awsome work
THis is could be like the halo 4 game. that would be sick!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 10.29.2009 4:12 PM PDT

ICE ICE BABY

I have the entire story planned out in my head. I just dont have enough time to type it now and I wana do it all at once.

AJ u did come on a little strong but it doesnt bother me i thank u for ur criticism it will make a better story but u did come on a little strong but no harm no foul.

For anyone who doesnt know yet the 6 other spartans come from Dyson Sphere. I still need a way to free them since all of onyx was basically made of sentinels and they are still there ummm how in the hell can u beat them?

Also the brutes would not fight the elites anymore. Its UNSC's fault that the covenant failed not the elites. Also the jakals would stay with the brutes because I would imagine they pay the best

I NEED SOMEONE TO TELL ME HOW TO EITHER SNEAK PAST, DEFEAT, OR W/E TO TRILLIONS OF SENTINELS AND ACESS THE PORTAL TO THE DYSON SPHERE!

  • 10.29.2009 4:54 PM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

Onyx Sentinels have highly powerful shields that stop fast moving projectiles, so unless you plan on having someone who is able to throw rocks in space then I'd say you're in a wee bit of a pickle there.

The Elites played the biggest part in the fall of the Covenant, were it not for the Great Schism in Halo 2, Humanity would almost certainly have been defeated.

Try and think of a solution to the Onyx situation, something likely to happen...

  • 10.29.2009 5:04 PM PDT

They call me the Sandwich King

"It's not a matter of who shoots who, it's the matter of who gets in the way of the bullets." - IRON WOLF 412

"The power of the mind can overcome any obstacle." - IRON WOLF 412

Trample the weak, Hurtle the dead.

with all the battles that seem to happen and and if you added some of the missing details in your story it seems like those events could happen over the course of 2 games.

  • 10.29.2009 5:13 PM PDT

Link

love it

  • 10.29.2009 5:18 PM PDT
Subject: Halo 4: Fall of mankind

Posted by: Dallas Green
I make a legitimate thread on the most logical choice for the next Bond actor, and you take that away from me by creating a parody thread indirectly connecting my thread to yours.

I hope your kids have bad influences and develop bad personalities. I wish this with all my heart.

Woah...that's an amazing, well thought-out idea. Kudos.

  • 10.29.2009 5:24 PM PDT
Subject: Halo 4

My Halo 4 storyline is better, in my opinion. My storyline adds variety to the Halo universe, while I feel that yours is recycled and repetitive. No offense.

Halo4




[Edited on 10.29.2009 5:39 PM PDT]

  • 10.29.2009 5:34 PM PDT

Jesus, just say that the Sentinels ran out of power after a while, not being connected to any planet based power source. That's what I did anyway.

And also, what the hell? Why has no one told you yet that this doesn't belong in this forum? It's not in any way related to the upcoming game Halo: Reach.

Post it in the Bungie Universe Forum if it's just an idea, or in The Gallery Forum if you're making it into a full fledged fan fiction.

If it stays here, a moderator will lock it, and probably been you. Trust me.

[Edited on 10.29.2009 6:18 PM PDT]

  • 10.29.2009 6:16 PM PDT
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i wish bungie members would interact in the forums more so the could tell us whats gonna go down.

  • 10.29.2009 6:17 PM PDT




Posted by: BIGFT 13
i wish bungie members would interact in the forums more so the could tell us whats gonna go down.


Employees arent allowed to post in this forum. No chance of disclosing previously withheld information this way. While to you employees of Bungie are Gods, they have bosses just like everyone else.






[Edited on 10.29.2009 6:20 PM PDT]

  • 10.29.2009 6:19 PM PDT

ICE ICE BABY

I found the solution to it EMP pods. Also I must advize that I am moving this thread. Not officially but I will but the edited version on the Bungie Universe so please move to there and post. Feel free to reply to this post because I will be checking both. After the new edition I will revise it again and put it on the gallery but most likely after tonight this post will be erased and all that will be left is a link to the new one but post on here too.

  • 10.29.2009 6:36 PM PDT

ICE ICE BABY

The edited version is up have a look

  • 10.29.2009 10:10 PM PDT
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when you fight for washington dc, you should have to defend an old looking white house for a few minutes

  • 10.29.2009 10:34 PM PDT

ICE ICE BABY

but they don't need to defend the whitehouse it has no meaning.

  • 10.30.2009 9:14 AM PDT