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Subject: [FanFic] Halo: Aftermath (Chapter One is up!) - 29/09

"Find The Bomb?!
Find The Bomb?!
I'm Looking For The Flag!
What The Heck Is Assualt!?"

Me? Post in A Fanatic Fiction?

anyways, I must say it is quite well written, none of the obvious flaws and mistakes many people will accidentally throw into their story.

I generally don't find your story exciting (sorry I just don't) and there isn't really advice I can give on that, maybe it will pick up to me eventually.

  • 11.23.2009 4:34 PM PDT
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Yeah, it's only the third chapter. I'd love to just jump into all the action, but I can't.

It'll unfold though.

  • 11.23.2009 5:06 PM PDT
Subject: [FanFic] Halo: Aftermath (Chapter TWO is up!) - 29/09
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No matter how many seals are killed by sharks a year, it never seems to be enough :D

Awesome! I just read part two. I constantly wondered if this story was being continued. Then i saw it and was like yaaaaaaaaaaay! I was waiting for the next part. This is really really cool bro. Man, I cant wait to see what happens to cortana and chief :D Saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaved

  • 11.25.2009 8:45 PM PDT

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