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"Find The Bomb?!
Find The Bomb?!
I'm Looking For The Flag!
What The Heck Is Assualt!?"
Me? Post in A Fanatic Fiction?
anyways, I must say it is quite well written, none of the obvious flaws and mistakes many people will accidentally throw into their story.
I generally don't find your story exciting (sorry I just don't) and there isn't really advice I can give on that, maybe it will pick up to me eventually.