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Subject: Halo 4

ICE ICE BABY

A strike force of seven spartans boarded the Chieften's cruiser. The cruiser was the most heavily fortified ship, this mission would be all but impossible. The spartans slowly but surely made their way up towards the bridge. On the way they encountered four hunters in a small corridor. It was unwinnable. The only way to win would be to distract them and flank them. They succesfully flanked them but the three decoy spartans were killed in the process.

They finally made it to the bridge where the Chieften was waiting.

"DEMON! You have caused only pain and suffering for the covenant race. Your life will end today by my hand.", the Chieften growled angrily.
"Give up. We have you outnumbered and outskilled.", shouted one of the other spartans.

Without warning the chieften flung himself at the cocky spartan and crushed him with his gravity hammer.

"Now there are only three. Care to give up yet" asked the Chieften.

He flung himself at another spartan. This time he dodged it and the chieften swung at the ground. He turned around grabbed the spartan and flung him at a wall. He then jumped at the other spartan and killed him easily. While still on top of the other spartan Chief began firing his pistol at him. The chieften jumped up and quickly grabbed his hammer and charged the Chief. He pinned the Chief on the floor and was inches away from pressing the hammer deep into the Chief's skull when the spartan who was flung at the wall shot him with his magnum a few times which grabbed the Chieften's attention for a moment and at this moment Chief shoved the spiked part of the hammer deep into the Chieften's chest. The Chieften looked down at the hammer then back up at the Chief.

"You you be beat me.", the Chieften studdered.

Then he collapsed to the floor. The Chief got up and along with the other spartan went and looked out the window at the battle. The elites had destroyed most of the Covenant fleet. They had taken heavy losses themselves but thanks to the skilled firing of the AA grid they won.

In the weeks that followed the UNSC had no problem finishing off the rest of the Covenant with the help of the Elites on the ground and in the sky.

"Chief, we have finally finished the Covenant for good. Now both of our races shall be at peace. You helped free us from the prophet's grasp and we have repayed the favor. I hope we can live in harmony from now on.", said the Arbiter.

The two surviving spartans were awarded numerous medals. They were the reason Earth had survived and the Covenant extinguished. They will always be remembered

Note: I was still not as specific as I could have been. The next version if there is another one will be even more specific. Especially the Earth fights because this is a plot overview. Next version will be more specific on the fights

Please comment and critique but please don't put links to your stories. Make your own thread.

Comment good or bad but not snarky

[Edited on 10.29.2009 10:12 PM PDT]

  • 10.29.2009 10:08 PM PDT
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actually sounds pretty awesome.

  • 10.29.2009 10:29 PM PDT

wow thats alot of text!!!!!!!

  • 10.30.2009 12:48 AM PDT
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:)

ahh. interesting.

  • 10.30.2009 2:14 AM PDT
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Posted by: Sp4rt4n119
Thank you sir, that was an epic rendition of this topic.


Posted by: Xx KNOX xX
and how!

The VAST majority of Covenant troops were either killed in the explosion of the Ark or are lying on the destroyed relic bleeding out.

On top of that, The Spartans and Halsey were all presumed dead, no one knew they went through the portal.

No.

  • 10.30.2009 9:20 AM PDT

Will test for snacks!

KOTOR. JOIN.

Three spartans killed by hunters, then two more by one Chieftan? Me no like.

  • 10.30.2009 9:41 AM PDT

The Covenant had overrun parts of Europe and Asia with ease and large portions of South America and Africa and even parts of Asia. they overrun parts and Asia amd even parts of Asia thats amazing

[Edited on 10.30.2009 9:59 AM PDT]

  • 10.30.2009 9:58 AM PDT

ICE ICE BABY

wow ss u have become more and more of an a hole. Im begining to think ur the traitor

  • 10.30.2009 10:01 AM PDT

that hurt i was just pointing it out for you

  • 10.30.2009 10:07 AM PDT

ICE ICE BABY

That was just snarky. I'm making another edited version tonight. Well I'm editing a little bit of it but also adding more detail. Gimme some suggestions

  • 10.30.2009 10:26 AM PDT
Subject: Halo 4: The Return

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

How about you put it into an actual story than a mixed and unclear idea?

[Edited on 10.30.2009 11:53 AM PDT]

  • 10.30.2009 11:53 AM PDT

ICE ICE BABY

How the hell is this not a story?

  • 10.30.2009 12:26 PM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

It is an idea, how many stories do you see writen like this? You have excerpts of dialogue but have the plot told directly.

  • 10.30.2009 12:40 PM PDT

Shortly after the events of Halo 3, Shortly after Halo 3 after the death of the Prophet the Covenant were in frantic confusion. With no worthy Prophet to take the throne a powerful Brute Cheiftain took the throne by force using promises of a better and stronger covenant. He said that the brutes should not be the ones blamed for their current suffering or for the war.
is this a metaphor to hiler and n@zi germany the cheiftain being hitler, halo 3 being world war 1, and the covenant being germany

[Edited on 10.30.2009 1:24 PM PDT]

  • 10.30.2009 1:20 PM PDT
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Some can come away from reading "War and Peace" thinking it a simple adventure story, while others can read the ingredients on a gum wrapper and unlock the secrets of the universe.

Wrong Forum buddy.


EDIT: Me no like most of it. Way to many mistakes of all kinds, inconstancies, and goes against logic (all important) and canon. I mean, D.C. would be a nice historic park in the future, nothing more.

[Edited on 10.30.2009 1:23 PM PDT]

  • 10.30.2009 1:21 PM PDT

ICE ICE BABY

How do you know its a historic park? You are correct about that SS i got the idea from that. The mistakes i blam partially on the converter thing that converts MS word into bungie and partially because I typed it at 1 AM. I am aware that this is the wrong forum but too late o well. ajw, how is this not a story? It has a plot, a conflict, characters etc. I even added dialogue. Tell me how it isn't a story and how I could make it better.

  • 10.30.2009 1:39 PM PDT

Five years older and wiser
The fires are burning, I'm fire, never tire
Slay warriors in the forests, and on hire

Posted by: Barthvader76
"Sir even with the chief I don't think we can stop them. He must also free the squad of spartans that went through the portal on Onyx.", stated the officer.
"Of coarse. Seven spartans and two more brilliant commanders to inspire our troops. It's a long shot but it's the only shot we've got. Deploy a ship immediately." Lord Hood commands.
"The ship will be to where the Chief's beacon is, which appears to be near some sort of Forerunner planet, within the next ten minutes.", states the corporal.


Ok thats when I stopped reading. WTF how did they know about Onyx? How did they know about the portal? How did they know about the other spartans?

What did the UNSC publish Ghosts of Onyx and made it compolsary reading for every marine.

  • 10.30.2009 2:07 PM PDT

Ok thats when I stopped reading. WTF how did they know about Onyx? How did they know about the portal? How did they know about the other spartans?

What did the UNSC publish Ghosts of Onyx and made it compolsary reading for every marine.

ok how about they just go to find the chief and when they tell him the chief says they need to go to onyx and get the other spartans

[Edited on 10.30.2009 2:18 PM PDT]

  • 10.30.2009 2:18 PM PDT

ICE ICE BABY

I like the idea. I need to find a way to take out the sentinels without EMP

  • 10.30.2009 5:52 PM PDT

Five years older and wiser
The fires are burning, I'm fire, never tire
Slay warriors in the forests, and on hire

Wait Wait Wait. How does the chief know they are there? Did he read this book too? And how can they find the chief he's in slipspace...

  • 10.30.2009 5:58 PM PDT

ICE ICE BABY

Because they can. Im sure they can figure it out. Also its FICTION for christs sake w/e

  • 10.30.2009 6:01 PM PDT
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Join Sector 8b thats a awesome group, help us to save humanity

WE NEED YOU !!! FOR EARTH !!!

AWESOME !!!! you should be a writer thats just amazing

  • 10.30.2009 6:53 PM PDT
Subject: Halo 4: The Return

ICE ICE BABY

Shortly after the events of Halo 3, Shortly after Halo 3 after the death of the Prophet the Covenant were in frantic confusion. With no worthy Prophet to take the throne a powerful Brute Cheiftain took the throne by force using promises of a better and stronger covenant. He said that the brutes should not be the ones blamed for their current suffering or for the war.

He had no desire to reembark on the Journey as fortold by the prophets. The only thing that has come from the journey is suffering. Instead he wanted to punish the people whose fault it was, the humans. He promised that the covenant would rise up and strike down the humans while they recovered. And so the onslaught began

With full force the brutes and the rest of the covenant went from colony to colony destroying the feeble atempts from the humans to stop them. They had destroyed most of the colonies when the chieften ordered the fleet to move towards Earth.

"But chieften the last time we attacked Earth.", started one of his generals.
"The last time we attacked Earth we were listening to the Prophets.", said the Chieften.
"What will be different this time around?", asked the general.
"This time we will be on Earth solely to destroy the humans for what they have done to our proud race.", stated the Chieften.
"But what about the demon?", asked the general.
"If the demon were still alive we would have seen him by now.", the Chieften responded.
"Indeed sir. All ships are plotting a coarse for Earth. I must ask, are we going to glass it?" the general inquired.
"That would be quick and painless. No, we will invade the pathetic planet and cause as much suffering as possible.", the Chieften answers.
"As you wish sir. What if the demon does show up?", the general inquires.
"Are you questioning my judgement?", the Chieften asked angrily.
"Of coarse not sir. My apologies.", the general quivered.
"Leave me", growled the Chieften.

On Earth the humans have become aware of the Covenant's coordinates. Lord Hood is aware of the fact that without a defense grid set up the Covenant could come in and glass the planet without as much as a scratch on their fleet.

"What if we get the MAC AA weapons optimized?", an officer asks.
"Even with them up and running we couldn't do enough to stop the glassing.", states another officer.
"They haven't glassed a single planet after Reach what makes you think they would start now?", Lord Hood inquires.
"Are you suggesting that they are launching a full scale invasion on Earth?", asks one of the officers.
"They are bringing twice as more than enough ships to glass the planet. Why would they bring more when they could be destroying two planets at once?" inquires Hood.
"Well we have too few forces to stop them. There is nothing we can do.", says the officer.
"Sir. I am sorry to interupt but we have just picked up a homing beacon we believe to be the Chief's." states a corporal.
"Could it really be? Is it possible that he survived the detonation? We need ships out there as soon as possible to investigate wherever it is that he is.", Hood demanded.
"But sir any ships sent out would surely be intercepted and destroyed by the Covenant fleet.", says the officer.
"We will send one ship from one of the few colonies left." Hood states.
"Sir even with the chief I don't think we can stop them. He must also free the squad of spartans that went through the portal on Onyx.", stated the officer.
"Of coarse. Seven spartans and two more brilliant commanders to inspire our troops. It's a long shot but it's the only shot we've got. Deploy a ship immediately." Lord Hood commands.
"The ship will be to where the Chief's beacon is, which appears to be near some sort of Forerunner planet, within the next ten minutes.", states the corporal.
"Let's just hope he is still alive and so are the other spartans. God help us." Lord Hood said.

The ship sent to retrieve the Chief arrived to the Forerunner. The piece of the Dawn was floating in orbit. A squad of marines went in and retrieved the Chief and Cortana. Once back on board the Chief an Cortana were briefed about their situation. The ship immediately embarked to Onyx leaving the planet's exploration for another day.

Once they arrived at Onyx the Chief was informed of the billions of sentinels surrounding the portal which was all that was left of Onyx.

"How will we make it through?", asked the Chief.
"We won't. Only you and Cortana will go through. We will be sending out EMP pods to temporarily stun the sentinels so you can make it in and then again before you exit. We don't have enough pods for us to stun them then bring you in close then stun them again and get in close for the pickup. Getting you in quick is easier so we have made a few modifications to and ODST drop pod. I hope you know how to steer it.", said the ships commanding officer.
"Sounds like it's a do or die moment. Good thing I'm an expert at those now.", remarked the Chief

After they were loaded into the drop pod Cortana asked:
"What if we don't make it?"
"We'll make it", said the Chief

The EMP pods were launched and so was the Chief's pod. They hit their mark perfectly.
Thirty minutes later the chief notified the ship that he had the spartans, Mendez, and Halsey. The ship launched a few pods and started the decent. They continued to launch pods until they had retrieved the Chief, Mendez, Halsey, and the other spartans and had made it to a safe distance. The six new spartans and the two officers were briefed on the current situation.
During this time the onslaught of Earth had begun. The Covenant had overrun parts of Europe and North America with ease and large portions of South America and Africa and even parts of Asia. The ground forces were nothing compared to the Covenant forces.

Back near Onyx they were all briefed and ready for combat. The covenant had their entire fleet in orbit on the side of Earth nearest them to stop most reinforcements from coming.

"How will we make it past the Covenant fleet?", Cortana asked.
"The only way is to jump to hyperspace and to stay in hyperspace until we are on the other side of the planet.", stated the ship's commander.
"But the way the solar systems are alligned at the moment we only have a small window which is"
"I know, Cortana. The only way to the other side of the planet is to go right through the armada of ships. It is our only option. We have to get there as soon as possible.", stated the commander.
"Let's pray we don't hit any of them or all this will be a loss and so will Earth.", said Cortana

They managed to dodge the fleet by some miracle. Once they got ready to make their decent Lord Hood informed them of their first mission.

"The brutes are attacking Washington D.C. because they know we have more information there than anywhere else on Earth. If D.C. falls then the brutes will have all the information they need to defeat us. You seven spartans will be sent in along with few more squads and some vehicles to aid a large force of ODST who are defending it. Halsey and Mendez, the two of you will be commanding the fight." Hood stated.

The seven spartans were launched in drop pods to the surface where they met up with the ODST. They had created a perimeter around the three most important building there, the CIA building, the FBI building, and the ONI site. They held out for hours but eventually the brutes stopped coming. The spartans were immediately evacted and sent to London to stop the onslaught there.

They stopped the London attacks and many other Europe attacks. It was clear that within a week Europe would easily be the humans again. It took the humans longer to recapture Europe than it did for the brutes to capture what they had at the moment only because the brutes were vast in number at first. The Covenant had focused most of their attention on Europe but still lost because of the inspiration that fighting alongside a spartan gave to the marines.

After Europe the spartans helped win back the United States. After that they started on Asia when the brute chieften became aware of his defeat.

"We had this world conquered!", shouted the Chieften, "How could this possibly happen?"
"The spartans. They inspire courage and strength into everyone around them, especially those drop troopers.", his general said.
"I will not lose like the Prophet did. Order the ships to get into postion to wipe this pathetic planet from the face of the galaxy."
"But sir we still have troops down there."
"Did I ask for your comments? Do as I command or more lives will be lost."
"It will take several hours since we are all stationed on one side of the planet."
"Then what are you waiting for?"

An hour into the process it became apparent to Lord Hood what was happening.

"What if we send in ODST or Spartans to the ships?", asked one of the officers.
"There are far too many. There is nothing we can do now. Damnit! After all this the brutes will still win." Lord Hood said with a sense of defeat in his voice.
"Did someone call for some air support?", the Arbiter said over the intercomn

The whole room exploded in cheer. The Arbiter had gone back to the Elites homeworld and had rallied everything the Elites had and had returned. They were still outnumbered but not by much.

A space battle insued the like of which no one had ever seen. Lord Hood took this opportunity to get the MAC AA guns optimized. The AA was just what the Elites needed to sway the battle.

The elites avoided firing upon the Chieften's ship knowing that he would run if they did but staying close enough where he couldn't make a jump.


[Edited on 10.30.2009 10:52 AM PDT]

  • 10.29.2009 10:06 PM PDT
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ICE ICE BABY

Thank you for moving it bungie. I wish you guys could give some feedback but from what I've heard yall dont do that much

  • 10.31.2009 12:34 AM PDT
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Posted by: Barthvader76
"I will not lose like the Prophet did. Order the ships to get into postion to wipe this pathetic planet from the face of the galaxy."
"But sir we still have troops down there."
"Did I ask for your comments? Do as I command or more lives will be lost."
"It will take several hours since we are all stationed on one side of the planet."
"Then what are you waiting for?"


nice star wars knight of the old republic refernce

  • 10.31.2009 7:59 PM PDT

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