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Subject: Brutal Scene and more like this

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There is absolutely no way someone could survive an Energy Sword jammed into their gut/chest. Spartan or not, it won't happen. I also don't like the idea of having your armor half torn off. Its high tech armor, not Goku's clothes from DBZ.

I do, however, like the idea of being dragged by Covenant through one of their facility's detention sections, and having the freedom to look around at numerous scenes of carnage.

Get dragged by your arms, though, not legs...

  • 11.15.2009 8:07 AM PDT

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Posted by: MLG Cheehwawa
There is absolutely no way someone could survive an Energy Sword jammed into their gut/chest. Spartan or not, it won't happen. I also don't like the idea of having your armor half torn off. Its high tech armor, not Goku's clothes from DBZ.

I do, however, like the idea of being dragged by Covenant through one of their facility's detention sections, and having the freedom to look around at numerous scenes of carnage.

Get dragged by your arms, though, not legs...
Okay how about the energy sword is only dug in a bit into your stomach, and your armour should be torn half of even if it hi-tech armour it wouldnt stand a chance against the mighty swing of gravity hammers. There is a part i missed it goes...

You and your spartan team mate scouted the area looking for vehicles and turrets and anything suspicious for the attack. While scouting ahead you here a mighty roar as you turn around your team mate lies dead in front of you and see 2 brute chieftans running towards you swinging like crazy they hit you hard knocking chunks of the armour of they grab you them try to tare the armour of but they only get half way though.

  • 11.15.2009 8:12 AM PDT
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what i think would be cool is they chain you against a wall and put an enery sword over each arm and over the neck so you cant move without getting body parts sliced off. then they let you take control and you cant move your arms or legs untill back up arrives

  • 11.15.2009 8:13 AM PDT
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It would make more sense if the executioner was a Brute.
Thats what i first thought was but i then i thought an elites energy would be a more brutal way to finish of a enemy the whole idea was to give him a slow painful death not just a slam with a gravity hammer or maybe instead of an elite it can be a brute shots blade instead? Or maybe a whole new melee weapon?

And Energy Sword isn't actually brutal- infact, it's kinda elegant like a Lightsaber. The most brutal way would be with the back of the Grav Hammer, where that massive blade is- like what that Chieftain did to Romeo in ODST- now that was harsh.

elites kill people with energy swords as a sign of respect to the enemy

  • 11.15.2009 8:40 AM PDT

Posted by: GuiltySpark569
Elites aren't bloodthirsty..

  • 11.15.2009 8:42 AM PDT

It would be good to see a little more violence but what Halo 2 did good to me in place of this would to show the other side of the story the coveanant side i would love this to happen in reach killing some of those BLAM Marines you know the ones.

  • 11.15.2009 8:43 AM PDT

I am a Halo 3 Failure.

I think instead of a Hammer or Sword, it should be an Honor Guard Pike, ripped from the hands of an Elite by a Brute, now that would make more sense.

  • 11.15.2009 8:49 AM PDT
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Yes, so many times in Halo were it would be very dark and gory.

[Edited on 11.15.2009 9:09 AM PST]

  • 11.15.2009 9:09 AM PDT

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hmmm, reminds me of CoD MW's first scene as the hostage....

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  • 11.15.2009 9:13 AM PDT

May I point out, stabbing somebody with an Energy Sword is like stabbing them with a Lightsaber.

You can't stab them into a wall with it, then let go and have the person stay in place. They would sink, and the Energy sword would slice them more.

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Posted by: Cmdr DaeFaron
May I point out, stabbing somebody with an Energy Sword is like stabbing them with a Lightsaber.

You can't stab them into a wall with it, then let go and have the person stay in place. They would sink, and the Energy sword would slice them more.

then they sould chain you with the spiker or something and a brute should swing at you with the blade of the gravity hammer

  • 11.15.2009 9:47 AM PDT

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For some reason I can't imagine spartans screaming, could you imagine chief in his manly voice screaming, IS HE GOING TO MAKE IT?

  • 11.15.2009 10:05 AM PDT

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Posted by: TPGBaseOfSpades
I think instead of a Hammer or Sword, it should be an Honor Guard Pike, ripped from the hands of an Elite by a Brute, now that would make more sense.
Thats an awesome idea! After he steals it the brute looks at him and does a dirty face and the elite just looks away and just wonders of very angry

  • 11.15.2009 10:08 AM PDT

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Posted by: BootStrap
For some reason I can't imagine spartans screaming, could you imagine chief in his manly voice screaming, IS HE GOING TO MAKE IT?
That gives me another idea! As he goes to stab him to stops and says "Oo A silent one? I WILL MAKE YOU SCREAM!" Then the brute punches him them stabs him with the elites pike.

  • 11.15.2009 10:09 AM PDT

Um, if anybody screamed asking about the Spartans health, it would be your average Joe marine.

  • 11.15.2009 10:11 AM PDT

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Posted by: Cmdr DaeFaron
Um, if anybody screamed asking about the Spartans health, it would be your average Joe marine.


This. I really like your idea of the scene being more brutal, just make the spartans a little more manly :D

  • 11.15.2009 10:14 AM PDT
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Instead of trying to stab you with the energy sword how about they try to brand you with the trator thing, like what they do to arby at the begining of Halo 2.

  • 11.15.2009 10:25 AM PDT

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Okay guys here's the idea so far...

You and one other Spartan are went on a dangerous mission to scout the covenet stronghold for the attack later tonight, they are looking for any vehicles, turrets and anything of of the ordinary. After taking a good looks they dont see anything then you turn around to see the dead body of the other Spartan looking up at you with his visor smashed. You look up to see 2-3 brute chieftans looking at you wanting blood, now...
They charge and hit you twice in the stomach just missing you by a dead on hit, you hit the floor then one of the chieftans punch you in the face breaking your visor. They pick you up and drag you into the stronghold by your arms OR legs( you decide) When there in they punch you and kick you then try and brake of your armour but fail and only get half of it of and leave the over half in pieces. And take you into a theatre like part of the building ( I scraped the marine killing) Where you see brutes and some grunts cheering and grunting, then some elites looking are at you from the side in disgust. They drag you into the middle and spit of your head, they chuck you onto the wall and put chains around your hands and tie you against the wall. you look up to see the moons light shining down you, the brute chieftan walks up to you then takes a pike from the elite and gives him a dirty look, then the elite walks of in anger. The brute them looks back at you, and starts to raise the pike, he turns his attention back to you then thrusts the pike into your stomach but he stops, looks up at you and says "Aaa A silent one have we? I WILL MAKE YOU SCREAM!!" The chieftan shouts right in your face. Then he jams the pike in your stomach but not the full way though because a siren goes of and elite, brute and grunts all grab there guns and get to battle positions. The brute looks at you and says "I'll be back later..." He grabs his gravity hammer and runs into the battle happening outside. You look down towards the pike as the bleeding starts to stop. A grunt runs in front of you and starts to dance and chant you cant get me now! Not so tough now are ya? You here the slam of a door and the grunt looks across to be met by a perfectly placed bullet to the head, you look see a squad of Spartans running across and looking at you and says "DUDE? what the hell have these basterds done to you?!?!" He unlocks the chains and pulls out the pike as the other spartans secure the flanks. They call down a pelican to get you back to safety. Your screen goes black as you enter the pelican. You here the spartan saying something "Doc, is he going to make it?" The medic pauses and speaks slowly "It would be a miracle if he makes it back to the ship..." Silence...

You wake up in a the hospital inside a battle ship looking down on Reach, the other spartans (Out of armour) run up to you and say "HE MADE IT! Damn dude your one lucky son of a -blam!-!" The medic walks in and checks the heart monitor and says"Wow, he made a full recovery!" The spartan says "Come on dude we need all the men we got down there its getting hot..." They lift you up and walk you into a armoury and come to a GIANT steal door with a number pin pad on it. The spartan walkes over to the door and enters in the pin as all the bolts unlock and the door opens slowly. You enter to see a glass cabinet with spartan armour in "Thats your armour, we managed to fix it from since the stronghold" He then hands you a gun and says "Remember this baby?"
you say "Oh ya..." you get out the armour and try it on and walk outside the armoury the girl spartan looks at you and says "Looking gooood" A spartan runs in quickly and screams
"Oi! no time for flirting, marines on the ground are pinned down, ODST's where shot down, where there only hope!" You quickly get your AR and a few grenades from the pack and run of into a drop pod.

Thats what i got so far. Thanks for reading.
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  • 11.15.2009 10:39 AM PDT
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Elite's arnt that evil they are noble holy warriors and respect their foes when In combat perhap's if the brutes threw him in a pool of insane jackles than eat him that's more halo type

[Edited on 11.15.2009 10:46 AM PST]

  • 11.15.2009 10:45 AM PDT

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Posted by: Captian Awsome
Elite's arnt that evil they are noble holy warriors and respect their foes when In combat perhap's if the brutes threw him in a pool of insane jackles than eat him that's more halo type
Thats more Gears of war type. And theres a new version its a brute instead.

  • 11.15.2009 10:47 AM PDT

You have no rights, play nice.

I don't think a spartan would say dude. It just doesn't fit in the context. Also, when the doctor says "Wow, he made a full recovery!" Instead, you could say something such as, "His vital signs check out. He's made a full recovery." And again, with the spartan screaming, it just doesn't seem like a spartan would scream. How bout he walks up to your spartan, pats him on the back and says "Hey you two, cut the love. We got work to do."

  • 11.15.2009 10:54 AM PDT

Plus the fact two Spartans wouldn't flirt. Given how close they were raised from the age of six, they all consider each other brothers and sisters.

+ The reduced sex drive from the augmentations.

  • 11.15.2009 10:57 AM PDT

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Posted by: Sn1pa N00B751
I don't think a spartan would say dude. It just doesn't fit in the context. Also, when the doctor says "Wow, he made a full recovery!" Instead, you could say something such as, "His vital signs check out. He's made a full recovery." And again, with the spartan screaming, it just doesn't seem like a spartan would scream. How bout he walks up to your spartan, pats him on the back and says "Hey you two, cut the love. We got work to do."
ya i know what you mean. Thanks for reading. I made him say dude because it kinda added a character if you know what i mean.

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Posted by: Cmdr DaeFaron
Plus the fact two Spartans wouldn't flirt. Given how close they were raised from the age of six, they all consider each other brothers and sisters.

+ The reduced sex drive from the augmentations.
It wasnt a am in love with you thing, its more of a sarcasm way of speech is a friendly joke style.

  • 11.15.2009 10:58 AM PDT

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Posted by: Sn1pa N00B751
I don't think a spartan would say dude. It just doesn't fit in the context. Also, when the doctor says "Wow, he made a full recovery!" Instead, you could say something such as, "His vital signs check out. He's made a full recovery." And again, with the spartan screaming, it just doesn't seem like a spartan would scream. How bout he walks up to your spartan, pats him on the back and says "Hey you two, cut the love. We got work to do."
Ya i like that. How about after that he leads up into a room looking over Reach as you walk in you go and look over Reach and then it plays that epic yet slow music to go with it as it shows the true scale of Reach. You turn around and walk back to the table where the squad leader presses a button underneath the table and on comes a holographic projection of the battle field on the table. The leader points to a deep cave in the side of a cliff and says "This is where the last transmission came from, they reported alot of covenet and a phantom forced them to retreat into the cave. And squad of ODST'S was dropped down to try and bust them out of there but they where knocked of course by a anti aircraft gun. He then points to the outskirts of the battlefield and says "Scout these areas for any ODST's the more of you the better your chances are. This isnt going to be easy they reported alot more covenet the usual. There pointing everything into that cave its alot more serious then i thought. Watch out snipers took out majority of there men. He tried to get in air support but anti aircraft guns ripped them apart. Your there only hope. He then points to the cave as it comes into colour and zooms out to show the battle, the pelican drops you off way out of anti air craft guns. the driver drops you of and says "Good luck" Then in a faint voice he says "Your going to need it..."

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  • 11.16.2009 1:33 PM PDT

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