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Subject: My first montage: Average Brigadier

King of the Idiots

Not the best, I know, but it's <3 for Bungie

  • 11.25.2009 12:37 AM PDT

ok so i will do you the favour of giving you some creative critism. this tage does have some good play, but the presentation is somply draging it all down.

first play : the whole time your sticking the hog before it falls off is not needed, it felt like it was going to be a long and slow placed montage and would stop veiwers in their tracks (not to mention the cheezy spiraling brig symbol before hand).

nextly you should think about how you cut your shots. to many started with no movement and then started going, you should even cut off a second of walk time to prevent this.

third, there was the snipe on the pit on the guy grabing opposite sniper...thats was nice, the 10 seconds before hand because you wanted to include the kill on the guy in green box...NOT NESSESSARY yeah i know we save that part for the sake of the saved film but waste of time in the tage.

finally, the most important part is the fact that you have NO transitions; even though they are not always needed, having none shows a sloppy preformance.

this could be a good minitage but you really need to work on your editing skills, i never had audio on but music is a big thing too. 2.5/5 (please redo with my suggestions i would like to see the result)

  • 11.25.2009 6:08 AM PDT