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Subject: Reach Art

Hey guys, sorry for those who hate me, but i am making a new topic.

I just wanna put up a piece of art i made which i made like 5 mins ago.
It's a fail but i still had fun doing, and i might even sneak a peek of some art i'm working on.
Here's the fail :P
http://www.truploader.com/view/706759

and here's a sneak peek, a long way to go, seeing as the stuff produced has not been layered yet and i've got the bg, fg, middle sections, maybe a dead body or two, some big explosions, overlays and some re-editing of lighting sources e.t.c.
http://www.truploader.com/view/625414
that is mine, no one can take it. You can display it with my permission and if you give me credit, but it you steal i'll sue!

I haven't done the origin lighting yet, not sure what it'll be, a failed generator, just a plain simple light, big explosion?
Anyway, constructive criticism and maybe some ideas for me to use.
Thanks!
:D

http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=39734099
click on that for a cool story, bro!

[Edited on 12.17.2009 11:58 AM PST]

  • 12.15.2009 8:29 AM PDT

http://liam887halo.carbonmade.com/

Nice top pic but how much is your own and how much is another image?
Well cant make heads or tail off the bottom pic but the plasma effects on the bottom look pretty cool or whatever they are?! If I knew what the bottom was maybe I could give some C&C.

[Edited on 12.15.2009 9:20 AM PST]

  • 12.15.2009 9:19 AM PDT

Yeah the bottom is quite not very decipherable. Think covenant though, think somewhat like a mixture between heretic and the covenant home world in H2.

Top image has 9 layers, some merely an edited pic of skully and others are paint brushed.
I know's there's not much to c&c on, but i would like to know what you think of the horns, fire/mouth/eyes and electricity.
K, thanks for commenting.

  • 12.16.2009 3:43 AM PDT

http://liam887halo.carbonmade.com/

do another image of the layers you have done compared with the original that way I can see exactly what you have done and how you can improve. Its usual for me to go over 100 layers on my big images and get carried away lol.

  • 12.16.2009 5:59 AM PDT

ehh, really? i just wanna continue my hand drawn stuff. It's gonna take long but if i do it now it'll be over quicker.

Anything you want me to try?

  • 12.16.2009 7:22 AM PDT
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really good!!

  • 12.16.2009 3:18 PM PDT

which one? Please evaluate.

  • 12.16.2009 3:25 PM PDT

"Find The Bomb?!
Find The Bomb?!
I'm Looking For The Flag!
What The Heck Is Assualt!?"

Sorry, but I've seen enough "skully" pictures by now, and strangely enough everyone names him skully.

  • 12.16.2009 5:10 PM PDT

You're not really good on evaluating are you?
Could you please give c&c on my second picture?

  • 12.16.2009 9:42 PM PDT

Eh, its alright. Could be done better though.

  • 12.16.2009 9:56 PM PDT

Heard of c&c?
Firstly you didn't state which one which makes you look retarded, secondly you didn't actually give any feedback of how it could be improved.
Now how about you go to school.

  • 12.17.2009 1:58 AM PDT
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Posted by: MichaelYEAHH
Eh, its alright. Could be done better though.

could be done better? not by you

  • 12.17.2009 10:10 AM PDT

Posted by: agent waffle
Posted by: MichaelYEAHH
Eh, its alright. Could be done better though.

could be done better? not by you


Zing!

  • 12.17.2009 11:57 AM PDT