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Subject: Storm Front teaser...
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WyIdfyre: 'lol, who the hell would even wear those?'
AuSam: 'lol, who the hell would even have sex with dogs?'

-K-

The HEV was heating up fast, Lt. Jackson was sweating in the harness as the pod hurtled towards ground zero. The heavy ceramite sides of the pod were buckling and tearing away with ear-pearcing screeches as gravity doubled in the atmospheric pocket. The heat of re-entry was past unbearable, and the descent velocity was too high, if the chute didn't set out soon it would be too late.
Another chunk of plating burst of the side of the HEV, its insides were now totally exposed to the cold air around it, the temperature dropped and chute flourished out from the top of the pod, the worst part was over.
The pod impacted with the ground, rocks flew up, something struck Jackson in the head, darkness engulphed him.
He came to, he didn't know how long later, but in his last moments of sentient thought, he wished he hadn't. They engulphed him...

Enjoy, and be prepared for the full Storm...
-K- =)

  • 12.18.2009 10:03 AM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

I suggest you put this in Microsoft Word and correct some of your grammar and punctuation.

Spacing is also needed between paragraphs, it makes it look much smoother.

  • 12.18.2009 10:09 AM PDT
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WyIdfyre: 'lol, who the hell would even wear those?'
AuSam: 'lol, who the hell would even have sex with dogs?'

-K-

Sorry,
I know my grammar and punctuation 'ain't too good on this one, I'm multitasking at the moment etc...
A game of Thing Thing arena 2 basically!
Mmm, I know what you mean about paragraph spacing, but when I tried to copy and paste from MS word I got the old script error message, something to do with using fonts and unnusable symbols.
It confuzzled me greatly...Especially when I use exclamation marks here alot!
-K-

  • 12.18.2009 10:12 AM PDT

Posted by: Kalriq
Sorry,
I know my grammar and punctuation 'ain't too good on this one, I'm multitasking at the moment etc...
A game of Thing Thing arena 2 basically!
Mmm, I know what you mean about paragraph spacing, but when I tried to copy and paste from MS word I got the old script error message, something to do with using fonts and unnusable symbols.
It confuzzled me greatly...Especially when I use exclamation marks here alot!
-K-


why did you put an apostrophe before ain't?
Just a question.

  • 12.18.2009 11:11 AM PDT
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WyIdfyre: 'lol, who the hell would even wear those?'
AuSam: 'lol, who the hell would even have sex with dogs?'

-K-

Grammar!
I believe there is one before 'ain't,
Actually...
Hmmm, is 'aint actually a word?
I really don't know, BTW if anyone knows how to remove that funny code in word which doesn't allow you to directly copy and paster, please tell me.
-K-

  • 12.18.2009 12:12 PM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

Copy & paste your text here. This allows it to be copied & pasted on B.net.

  • 12.18.2009 12:21 PM PDT