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Subject: check out the intro i made yesterday

Vendettaboyz HONKY TRONKY

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VB Intro Video

  • 12.27.2009 12:22 PM PDT

It's not bad, some of the editing is nice but alot of it is a bit over the top. I'd advise you to make an intro for each video you do as each will have it's own distinct feel and rhythm. Not bad for a general template though

  • 12.27.2009 1:15 PM PDT

Vendettaboyz HONKY TRONKY

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thanks dude i might just keep the red twitching text and the beggining of it.

  • 12.27.2009 4:33 PM PDT

Honestly... It's lame. Looks like the intro to some sort of horrible ScFi romance comedy tv series from the 70's.

  • 12.27.2009 9:45 PM PDT
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J D O S H

I like it but it's all too over the top, and I just would want you to get on with the actual video.

  • 12.28.2009 3:04 AM PDT

Vendettaboyz HONKY TRONKY

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not bad for a begginier right.

  • 12.28.2009 12:16 PM PDT

//OB:PWNED!//
//END TRANSMISSION//

Actually i would be considered a beginner and even that's pretty bad!
Sorry, but it was random and spaz.
Nothing made much sense and it just seemed like you bashed the keyboard and it created some effects.
Try to keep each piece of text similar instead of just random effects and fonts.
Maybe some nice (semi) climatic music to introduce and create an atmosphere for the audience, then al you have to do is make a good video (or machinima) with good cinematography (mise-en-scene if you can make that work) editing and sound, then it would be quite amazing.

  • 12.29.2009 12:17 AM PDT