- DemoNTraiTz
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Actually i would be considered a beginner and even that's pretty bad!
Sorry, but it was random and spaz.
Nothing made much sense and it just seemed like you bashed the keyboard and it created some effects.
Try to keep each piece of text similar instead of just random effects and fonts.
Maybe some nice (semi) climatic music to introduce and create an atmosphere for the audience, then al you have to do is make a good video (or machinima) with good cinematography (mise-en-scene if you can make that work) editing and sound, then it would be quite amazing.