- Alien Emperor
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Well the video quality it self is brilliant but there are far too many bars on the screen surrounding what you want to show, it'll take a while to get right but it's very important the video fits snugly a youtube box.
The sound recording quality isn't brilliant either, but it get's the job done.
The story is a bit iffy at points too and could do with some more thought. Things like having him standing by the radio at the start of the Machinima and seeing the recording might have been good. The overall tone of the machinima felt off too, and a bit eccstatic in places, they just saw men get shot down and yet their all cheerful and eager to run into battle and yet when they get there everything changes without any motivation.
The way the music enters could be improved too music dosen't usually fade in to begin with (2:25) it usually has a natural progression where instruments drop in.
You could do with getting more than 2 people to act in it too.
Overall it's pretty good for a first go, have a look here for some sound effects and ambience noises. If you can try and watch some of digital ph33r's old stuff. He did some good machinmas before arby and the chief
[Edited on 01.03.2010 1:31 PM PST]