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And so here at the end of my life, I do once again betray a former master. The path ahead is fraught with peril. But I will do all I can to keep it stable - keep you safe. I'm not so foolish to think this will absolve me of my sins. One life hardly balances billions.

Prolog

The Covenant-Human war is over. The Elites and Humans have allied, and peace has ruled for 10 years. However, one day, a massive fleet of ships attacks one of Sanghelioses colonies. The planet is utterly destroyed, along with it's inhabitants. A small scout team is dispatched to the planet, only to find it being glasses by brute ships. They have evidently evolved from their past ways, working together, and using repurposed Covenant ships and technology.


Ok! That is just a little bit of it, I hope to make this a fun and enjoyable FF for you guys to read. Thoughts? Comments?

EDIT: I will not be working on this, I will be working on another FF that in my opinion will be better than this. sorry guys.




[Edited on 02.21.2010 12:17 PM PST]

  • 02.20.2010 7:51 PM PDT
Subject: The Brute-Elite War (FF)

When I die please bury me deep!
Place an MA5 down by my feet!Don't cry for me, don't shed no tear!
Just pack my box with PT gear!
'Cuz one early morning 'bout zero-five!
The ground will rumble, there'll be lightning in the sky!
Don't you worry, don't come undone!It's just my ghost on a PT run!

yeah alright but it could do with some more description and some editing

  • 02.20.2010 10:29 PM PDT

Posted by: ElementalRunner

Posted by: Commander Stroll
Still using a pump-action shotgun over 500 years in the future I see.

omg not realistic stop game production plz

I look forward to reading this, post first chapter A.S.A.P!

  • 02.21.2010 4:04 AM PDT