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"Immersion is playing Half-Life and not noticing your house is burning down."- Paul Barnett

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Times of trouble have swept the universe, rogues, Godsends and daemonic minions. Few are the ones who take a stand. But to those who do, or did, this post is dedicated to you. This is your story...

Chapter 1: In the beginning...

19 years since the last great war. While nations are less powerful, they do remain. Specificly an empire by the name of Gorgoroth, led by a soldier by the name of Excommunicado. One morning Ex arises from his sleep and walks out of the depths of the Black Citadel to see...a bloody horizon. War is coming. Feeling bitter towards all his former allies and foes Ex sets out to meet them in combat. Who will challenge him?

No serious threat arise, until a general named lieut_pat rises again. He mobilizes his army, preparing for times of war. An alliance proposal is sent to Ex, which is turned down.

Days pass, with nothing but minor skrimishes. But on the 3rd day that will all change...

So, how'd I do?

Tomorrow, Chapter 2!

  • 07.30.2004 7:38 PM PDT
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pretty good can you put me in there.

  • 07.30.2004 7:39 PM PDT
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"Immersion is playing Half-Life and not noticing your house is burning down."- Paul Barnett

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On the third day, this is only Chapter 1.

  • 07.30.2004 7:42 PM PDT
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Okay i would just like to see what you make of my character. thanks

  • 07.30.2004 7:43 PM PDT
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old

  • 07.30.2004 7:54 PM PDT
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it may be old but put me in if you can too

  • 07.30.2004 8:00 PM PDT
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"Immersion is playing Half-Life and not noticing your house is burning down."- Paul Barnett

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guys, this is the story of Laser Wars, if you want in, go post in the LW thread.

  • 07.30.2004 8:05 PM PDT

It was a cold day near the southern base in Blood Gulch. Cortana and I were relaxing over a game of Go Fish, WHEN OUT OF NO WHERE 700 BANSHEES CAME FLYING IN!!! I GRABED MY SPARTAN LASER AND LET HELL REIGN DOWN UPON THEM. I HOPPED IN THE NEAREST WARTHOG AND TOLD CORTANA TO GET IN.

Put in something about me and my little band of bandits that make a citadel for me and how we are not huge in numbers, but where we lack in numbers we make up for in training. In otherwords were the elite crew. The marines. "The few, the proud, the marines" or something like that. Mabye its the seals. Oh well.

  • 07.30.2004 10:00 PM PDT
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"Immersion is playing Half-Life and not noticing your house is burning down."- Paul Barnett

The most awesome thing ever!

Two notes to all, first, this is not a free story, its the storyline of Laser Wars Catacylsmion. Second, because of that, if you want in go post on that thread and when I write that page, you'll be in. Oh, days are pages for the purposes of this story.

Chapter 2: The fighting slowly begins...

lieut_pat and Ex have not been busy lately, just tiny battles. And for Ex that won't change. But by the work of supersniper, it will change for lieut_pat. supersnipers personal mech, the Madcat Mk. III, flys towards lieut_pat's base at an alarming rate. lieut_pat sends supersniper an ultimatium, turn back or be destroyed. supersniper ignores that and continues to come closer, only to be blown out of the sky by the force of 10 MAC Mark V guns. But he escapes in a lifepod. Oh well, thinks lieut_pat, I'm safe for now. He returns to the other task at hand, swearing HunTERminator in as an ally.

Meanwhile, supersniper is attacked by MasterGrunt44 on the hills around Pat's base. supersniper breaks Mastergrunts arm and Mastergrunt retreats.

Also, another new leader has risen, Fallen Seraph. He allies with Mastergrunt and waits.


Next, Chapter 3.

  • 07.31.2004 6:24 AM PDT

It was a cold day near the southern base in Blood Gulch. Cortana and I were relaxing over a game of Go Fish, WHEN OUT OF NO WHERE 700 BANSHEES CAME FLYING IN!!! I GRABED MY SPARTAN LASER AND LET HELL REIGN DOWN UPON THEM. I HOPPED IN THE NEAREST WARTHOG AND TOLD CORTANA TO GET IN.

this is great for me because Ive only read page 60 n beyond

Great job. Truley an enjoyment to read.

  • 07.31.2004 7:29 AM PDT
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"Immersion is playing Half-Life and not noticing your house is burning down."- Paul Barnett

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Thanks for the post, Pink. Oh guys, this'll be my last post of the day on this thread today.

Chapter 3: Do we really know what we're starting?

After being shot down by lieut_pat's defense systems supersniper returns to his flagship and begins to repair his mech. It's only a matter of time before he rises again...

Elsewhere Sniper Joe and Cannon 117 join up with Mastergrunt and Fallen Seraph. They wait for the return of supersniper, to eliminate him once and for all.

After carefully examining recon photos of supersnipers mech, lieut_pat realizes the potential of having an ally with that kind of weaponry. He sends an alliance proposal to supersniper. Will it be answered??


Next, Chapter 4!

  • 07.31.2004 8:46 AM PDT
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No.

  • 07.31.2004 5:56 PM PDT