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Subject: [Story] Halo ODST: Dropping Into Hell(Part 16 is out!)

I am a god! I am prescient!
I am religion!
I see the future, I see the past
Follow me, follow the vision.
I have become the ultimate power, I am protection.
I am messiah, I am a tyrant.
i show the path to redemption to man and the universe!

Posted by: kingwrench
You lucky son of a b*tch! What did you think of part 17?

I thought "hmm, needs something more. Maybe a continuation of the story. We could give it a name too, something previously unused in this story. Hmm... Part... Part.. 18. Part 18! Yea."

  • 05.19.2010 3:54 PM PDT

How'd you find me?

Another reader! You guys are as rare as Unicorns!

  • 05.19.2010 4:12 PM PDT
Subject: [Story] Halo ODST: Dropping Into Hell(Part 17 is out!)
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Posted by: kingwrench
You lucky son of a b*tch! What did you think of part 17?


Very niceeee. Good characterization, development of Red and Rich's relationship, and a smooth read. And I have a feeling you have more readers than you think. Besides, the reach beta is up, people are playing that and talking about it. When stuff like that happens the gallery gets a little quiet.

[Edited on 05.19.2010 4:16 PM PDT]

  • 05.19.2010 4:15 PM PDT
Subject: [Story] Halo ODST: Dropping Into Hell(Part 16 is out!)

I am a god! I am prescient!
I am religion!
I see the future, I see the past
Follow me, follow the vision.
I have become the ultimate power, I am protection.
I am messiah, I am a tyrant.
i show the path to redemption to man and the universe!

Posted by: kingwrench
Another reader! You guys are as rare as Unicorns!

Oh I've been reading your story since it was only a couple posts long. I'm reading most of the stories being updated, I just rarely post on here.

  • 05.20.2010 1:07 AM PDT

An assassin will always carry on, even after death.

Actually, i think i just got shot. *looks down and sees bullet hole through stomach*

Yup. But the will of me wanting more stories will keep me alive! ME WANT STORIES!


Looks like its only life treathning with me. Kingwrench, its good to see you got a medic for your story.

  • 05.20.2010 11:09 AM PDT

How'd you find me?

Posted by: precurser
Posted by: kingwrench
Another reader! You guys are as rare as Unicorns!

Oh I've been reading your story since it was only a couple posts long. I'm reading most of the stories being updated, I just rarely post on here.


What the -blam!-?! I've been writing "If you're reading, please comment!" You didn't notice that?

  • 05.20.2010 3:29 PM PDT

I am a god! I am prescient!
I am religion!
I see the future, I see the past
Follow me, follow the vision.
I have become the ultimate power, I am protection.
I am messiah, I am a tyrant.
i show the path to redemption to man and the universe!

Posted by: kingwrench
Posted by: precurser
Posted by: kingwrench
Another reader! You guys are as rare as Unicorns!

Oh I've been reading your story since it was only a couple posts long. I'm reading most of the stories being updated, I just rarely post on here.


What the -blam!-?! I've been writing "If you're reading, please comment!" You didn't notice that?

I suck at complimenting people, so it would have been better for me not to.

  • 05.20.2010 10:56 PM PDT

An assassin will always carry on, even after death.

kingwrench-hurry. I'm one part ahead of you

  • 05.23.2010 10:08 AM PDT
Subject: [Story] Halo ODST: Dropping Into Hell(Part 17 is out!)
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By Kingwrench: As she left the room, she turned back around.


Looks like they're going to be late, or maybe just Red LOL!
(Sry I had to.)

PS. You might wanna come out with the next part before we start a riot.


[Edited on 05.23.2010 12:45 PM PDT]

  • 05.23.2010 12:44 PM PDT

An assassin will always carry on, even after death.

*Starts shooting people*
RRRRRRRIIIIIIIIIIIOOOOOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTTTTTT

  • 05.23.2010 1:10 PM PDT
Subject: [Story] Halo ODST: Dropping Into Hell(Part 17 is out!)

How'd you find me?

Sweet! Now I have 6 guys running around my thread! I don't think I can deny them the next chapter ant longer...

EDIT: Oh,-blam!-! I left the last line out of Part 17! -blam!-!

[Edited on 05.25.2010 4:20 AM PDT]

  • 05.25.2010 4:18 AM PDT

An assassin will always carry on, even after death.

Get the next -Blaming- part out now.
You know what I'll do:
The next day Richard woke up to see Reach glassed. Then the Covies spotted his ship and everyone died

  • 05.25.2010 11:09 AM PDT

How'd you find me?

No! That makes no sense! This story is not going to end so soon! Also they're invisible! It would be impossible to find them! Rah Brooklyn rage!

  • 05.25.2010 12:50 PM PDT

An assassin will always carry on, even after death.

Covenant Shipmaster: Did we just hit something?
Some other guy: Yes its an invisable prowler.
Covenant Shipmaster: Why didn't we shoot them.
*Kingwrench runs in*
Kingwrench: ARRRGH.
*He kills the Covenant, ending the war.*
Kingwrench: Thats for not going around my invisable ONI prowler... Now for Skul.

*I run away*

  • 05.25.2010 1:00 PM PDT

How'd you find me?

It's not a prowler, it's a stealth carrier! Small difference!

  • 05.25.2010 6:06 PM PDT
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*Lights moltov cocktial* 18 NAO!.................*Explodes in hand.* AHHHHHHHHHHHH! IM ON FIRE! PART 18 SAVE ME!

  • 05.25.2010 6:32 PM PDT

How'd you find me?

Just for that, Part 18 is letting you burn.

  • 05.25.2010 9:13 PM PDT

An assassin will always carry on, even after death.

Part 18: sudden death

Everyone spontanusly died from a heart attack.

THE END

Munchies your saved.

PS I am ahead of you Kingwrench. Yet still very few readers...

  • 05.26.2010 11:15 AM PDT

How'd you find me?

So? I don't have the time I used to.

  • 05.26.2010 12:47 PM PDT

An assassin will always carry on, even after death.

Nearly next part?

  • 05.31.2010 12:45 PM PDT

How'd you find me?

Uh... sure! (lying through my teeth)

  • 05.31.2010 1:39 PM PDT

How'd you find me?

I've started yet another fic, and I also want to work on Shar, so Part 18 might come out a bit later than I thought. Just hang in there guys!

  • 05.31.2010 6:58 PM PDT