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Subject: [Story] The Spartan Four Project (Part Fourteen Is Ready!)
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please make part 17 good BUT FAST i cant wait dude i love it keep it up :D

hey by the way did you get a litle inspired from the halo legends episode where the girl meets her clone?

not saying youre a bad writer just wondering.

  • 04.27.2010 8:50 AM PDT
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Posted by: thefluud83
please make part 17 good BUT FAST i cant wait dude i love it keep it up :D

hey by the way did you get a litle inspired from the halo legends episode where the girl meets her clone?

not saying youre a bad writer just wondering.


Thanks man :) I've actually never watched halo legends.

  • 04.27.2010 1:23 PM PDT

How'd you find me?

Dude, the one with Daisy sucked. I just kept cracking "2001" jokes.

  • 04.27.2010 1:27 PM PDT
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Posted by: kingwrench
Dude, the one with Daisy sucked. I just kept cracking "2001" jokes.

Ya.

  • 04.27.2010 3:06 PM PDT
Subject: [Story] The Spartan Four Project (Part Sixteen Is Up!)[Part Links!]

Soffish for everyone!

Art and Halo = my life... pretty much.

OH SNAP

  • 04.27.2010 4:56 PM PDT
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When is it coming out?

  • 04.28.2010 10:06 AM PDT

An assassin will always carry on, even after death.

Cortana would probly be a bit messed up by then

  • 04.28.2010 10:16 AM PDT
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No matter how many seals are killed by sharks a year, it never seems to be enough :D

Posted by: Skulblaka
Cortana would probly be a bit messed up by then


That's why she didn't say anything when Dante came in, or radio the ship. And thats why the light in the chip was flickering.



[Edited on 04.28.2010 12:56 PM PDT]

  • 04.28.2010 12:52 PM PDT
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Tonight, most likely.

  • 04.28.2010 12:58 PM PDT
Subject: [Story] The Spartan Four Project (Part Eighteen Is Up!)
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P.17



The squad stood on the bridge, surrounding the figure in the cryotube. Canine crossed his arms. "You're telling me that this is 117? The Master Chief?"

Dante nodded. "No doubt, it's stenciled on the side of his helmet."

"God damn."

"Can we unfreeze him?" Shadow asked.

Saline shrugged. "We could, but I don't see a reason to do so. We're going to jump soon, and he would only use up food on the journey back."

"We should wait to jump," Boomer said, "We need to make sure we don't get stuck in slipspace again."

Shadow nodded. "There's a reason to wake him up. He could help our Chief to salvage everything possible form that cruiser wreck while we check out the Slipspace Drive."

"Alright," Saline said, "Let's thaw him." She kneeled down next to the cryotube, and tapped it's controls. "There. It'll be about ten minutes, considering we aren't in a cryo-station."

"Alright." Shadow said, sitting down. Saline jumped onto his lap, eliciting an "Oof!" and a smile from Shadow. Their relationship was understood on both ends. He wrapped his arms around her stomach, and she placed her hands over his.

"We are about to meet a legend guys," Canine said, sitting down on the cryotube containing 117, "Anyone else pumped?"

Saline turned to Canine from flirting with shadow, and raised her eyebrows. "I'm sure 117 loves that spectacular view of your ass."

"Damn right he does." Canine replied. Everyone but Dante laughed.

"Who's going to break the news?" Boomer asked.

Canine turned his head to the Russian, "About?"

"The UNSC collapsing."

"We don't even know if it's true."

"It's true." Shadow said as he toyed with Saline's black hair that fell half way down her neck.

"Because the pretty ONI lady said so?" Canine teased.

"Because she risked her life to tell us."

"I think it would be best if the Chief told him." Saline commented.

Canine nodded. "Yeah, have the Chief tell the Chief." The Cryotube began to beep, and Canine jumped up off of it.

"Sh1t!" Saline shouted, jumping off of Shadow's lap and kneeling down next to the pod, "His vitals are pinging all over," She looked up at the squad with a worried face, "We have to cancel the thaw, it's to risky. Something's off, he has to be thawed in a Cryo-station." She canceled the thaw, and a hiss signaled the tube reactivating. Everyone looked disappointed, but not Dante, no, he looked sad.

Boomer stood, "We should get to fixing the slipspace drive."

Shadow nodded, "Canine, you stay here to let the Chief out and in while he gets food. We'll decide where to go while fixing it."

"Whoa whoa whoa," Canine interjected, "Why not stay here for a while? I mean, we could all use a break."

"What?"

"I'm just saying that we could hang around, take a brea-"

"You're saying we go AWOL?" Shadow said in a confirming tone.

Canine rubbed the back of his neck, "Well I wouldn't call it AWOL, it's just-"

"Without E18 and 117, a lot of people are going to die, and you're suggesting that we sit around and take a break?"

"Calm down bro."

"I'm not your bro, I'm your commanding officer, and your starting to sound like a god damn worthless deserter."

"I-"

"No!" Shadow yelled, standing up, moving Saline aside, and getting right up into Canine's face, "You're no better than a god damn Innie! If we stay, a sh1t ton of people are going to die, all because of us!"

"I almost fucl<ing died back there Terry! Back on that asteroid, a high powered sniper rifle missed my head by less than a fucI<ing an inch, and punched clean through the building behind me! I don't know about you, but I don't want my brains painting an Innie wall! Is that what you want?! To be dead on the road with half your goddamn head gone?! Is that what you fucI<ing want?! Is it you s-!"

Shadow interrupted Canine with a punch to the side of his face. He spat as Canine hit the floor, splitting his chin. "Next time you talk to me like that, I won't be as generous." Blood poured from Canine's wound as he watched it fall to the ground. The ODST jumped up, and tackled Shadow to the ground, relentlessly smashing his fists into his CO's face.

Blood poured from Shadow's nose, making his face wet and slippery as Canine's fists slammed down on him. E18 recovered from the shock, and grabbed Canine from behind, pulling him off of Shadow. "Get the fucI< off me you freak!" Canine screamed, kicking his legs as he tried to break free from the Chief.

Shadow wiped the blood off of his face, and looked at Boomer. "Keep an eye on Canine while you monitor the Chief's scavenging." Boomer nodded, and him and Saline went off to the engine room.

Saline found a toolkit, took out a screwdriver, and began to unscrew the covering of a metal box in the engine room. She popped the panel off, and examined the wires inside. Everything looked okay, so she screwed the panel back on, and kneeled down next to the drive. It was small for a slipspace drive. Whoever the innies got this from had access to some revolutionary military technology.

Saline opened up the drive, and began to examine it. "We're alone you know."

"I'm aware," Shadow replied, "Can I help you with this?" He asked, referring to the slipspace drive.

"Not with this," She said as she began to tweak something, "But with something else"

"When everyone goes to sleep we can, but as of now, we have a job to do."

"Fineeeeeee," She dragged out, "Ah, there you are you son of a b1tch." She pulled out a cracked blue cylinder, examining it.

Shadow's eyes widened, "That little crack stuck us in slipspace for two months?"

"Yes. There should be a spare around here."

After a brief search, Shadow found a spare. "Found one."

Saline walked up to him, and took it from his hands, examining the cylinder. "Bingo." She said, moving back to the slipspace drive and installing the blue object.

Boomer entered the room. "The Chief's back with provisions. Are we ready to jump?" Saline nodded, and boomer went on to a second question, "Where are we going?"

"Earth." Saline replied immediately, "The war is most likely on a wide scale now. If there's anywhere that the UNSC still has, it's Earth." The three left the engine room, and stepped onto the bridge. Canine was hugging his knees in the corner, and the Chief was leaning against the wall, looking down at the cryotube containing 117.

Shadow took a long look at the nearby planet. Something about it gave him the creeps. He charted it, and turned to the main controls. "Jumping now." He entered a series of commands, and the ship jumped. Everyone seemed a little uncomfortable to be back in slipspace, but at least they were going home.

Saline sat down at the table, and rounded everyone up. "Now that we're not going to die, it's time to tell the rest of the story."


[Edited on 04.29.2010 8:20 PM PDT]

  • 04.28.2010 4:16 PM PDT
Subject: [Story] The Spartan Four Project (Part Seventeen Is Ready!)
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WTF NOOOOO DONT LEAVE 117 >:(
hopefully you could make a return for him? :3

[Edited on 04.28.2010 4:34 PM PDT]

  • 04.28.2010 4:33 PM PDT

How'd you find me?

Okay another great part! Whoooo! Sorry. Just depressed my story is so unpopular. It makes me sad.

  • 04.28.2010 4:35 PM PDT
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Posted by: thefluud83
WTF NOOOOO DONT LEAVE 117 >:(
hopefully you could make a return for him? :3


They're bringing him, they just cant take him out of cryo yet. So no worries :)


And king, your story is kickass. You're on the top forum topic list, wich means that people are reading and saving it, but they just don't comment often.

  • 04.28.2010 4:39 PM PDT

How'd you find me?

Why not? It makes me feel unimportant and unnoticed. I even specifically said in one post to comment!

  • 04.28.2010 4:43 PM PDT
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Posted by: The Munchies
Posted by: thefluud83
WTF NOOOOO DONT LEAVE 117 >:(
hopefully you could make a return for him? :3


They're bringing him, they just cant take him out of cryo yet. So no worries :)


And king, your story is kickass. You're on the top forum topic list, wich means that people are reading and saving it, but they just don't comment often.

Wheres that i didnt see a part where they took apart the cryo chamber and carried it onto the ship >_> <_< >_<

  • 04.28.2010 4:48 PM PDT
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Posted by: thefluud83
Posted by: The Munchies
Posted by: thefluud83
WTF NOOOOO DONT LEAVE 117 >:(
hopefully you could make a return for him? :3


They're bringing him, they just cant take him out of cryo yet. So no worries :)


And king, your story is kickass. You're on the top forum topic list, wich means that people are reading and saving it, but they just don't comment often.

Wheres that i didnt see a part where they took apart the cryo chamber and carried it onto the ship >_> <_< >_<


Dante saying, "You're not going to believe this." Is basically the end of a scene. Then it cuts to them standing around the cryotube that 117 is in on their ship. Dante brought it in. I thought it would be understood, but i dunno.

And king, don't worry about it. Just keep goin. I mean look at wolver, he TOWERS over me. Being on the top forum topic list is already a great achievment.

[Edited on 04.28.2010 5:02 PM PDT]

  • 04.28.2010 5:01 PM PDT
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Posted by: The Munchies
Posted by: thefluud83
Posted by: The Munchies
Posted by: thefluud83
WTF NOOOOO DONT LEAVE 117 >:(
hopefully you could make a return for him? :3


They're bringing him, they just cant take him out of cryo yet. So no worries :)


And king, your story is kickass. You're on the top forum topic list, wich means that people are reading and saving it, but they just don't comment often.

Wheres that i didnt see a part where they took apart the cryo chamber and carried it onto the ship >_> <_< >_<


Dante saying, "You're not going to believe this." Is basically the end of a scene. Then it cuts to them standing around the cryotube that 117 is in on their ship. Dante brought it in. I thought it would be understood, but i dunno.

And king, don't worry about it. Just keep goin. I mean look at wolver, he TOWERS over me. Being on the top forum topic list is already a great achievment.

Ok ty for clearing that up.

  • 04.29.2010 9:29 AM PDT

An assassin will always carry on, even after death.

Posted by: kingwrench
Okay another great part!

This really is a great story

[Edited on 04.29.2010 10:32 AM PDT]

  • 04.29.2010 10:32 AM PDT
Subject: [Story] The Spartan Four Project (Part Eighteen Is Up!)
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WARNING: Secksual themes. If you don't wish to read it, then skip from ("Yes sir." Shadow said. Saline and the ODST watched as Dante went down the hall to the bunk, and disappeared out of sight.) to the last paragraph.




P.18



Saline took a deep breath. "Whoever is on the inside has gotten a lot of countries to join. The person must have been chiseling away at the UNSC since before the war. All the guy has to do is flip a switch, and bang. He has the men, the ships, the resources, everything. It's possible that this person also has gotten a large portion of the Elites to join the cause. The war is probably on by now. You need to know who to trust, nobody but each other. If you let your guard down, you're dead. This isn't like the Human Covenant war. This is based on deception and betrayal."

"You're ONI," Canine said, "All smoke and mirrors, as the saying goes. How do we know you're not weaving an elaborate plan to use us, then kills us." Everyone turned their heads to Saline.

"You don't." Saline said.

"She's on our side." Shadow assured.

Canine threw his arms in the air. "Jesus Shadow! You have zero proof of that. You're just saying it because she's your girl, and that's something that could get us all killed!"

Dante winced, and looked down at the table. "Leave him alone."

"Oh, of course Mr. Spartan! You have to be right, you got cut up, sliced, and mutilated into a freak that can flip a tank! You're not even human!"

"That's enough." Boomer said, standing.

Canine got to his feet, "You're all idiots! You trust a girl who just walked in here, how do we know she's even ONI?!"

Everyone looked towards a hiss noise, and saw Spartan E18 attaching his helmet. Everyone fell silent. Dante was smart. Fully clad in MJOLNIR armor, he was a figure of great authority. "Everyone settle down. This isn't a time to argue. Is that all you have to say Lieutenant?"

Saline nodded, "In a nutshell."

"Dismissed." The Chief said. Everyone but Saline and Shadow headed for the bunks. Dante stopped in his tracks, and turned to face the two still sitting at the table, "Are you two alright?"

"Yes sir." Shadow said. Saline and the ODST watched as Dante went down the hall to the bunk, and disappeared out of sight.

"Are you ready?" Saline asked, looking at Shadow.

"Yeah." Saline stood up, took Shadow's hand, and led him to the showers. The room only had five stalls. It was an odd ship.

Saline pulled Shadow into one of the stalls, turned on the water, and pulled Shadow at her, kissing him. They began undressing each other, their soaked clothing articles making a smacking noise as they hit the white tiled floor. When they were completely undressed, Shadow backed up against one of the stall's walls, and lifted Saline up to his waist, causing her to take a sharp intake of air. After a moment, he spun around, pushing her back against the wall in place of his.

The ONI officer kissed Shadow's neck as her breath washed across his skin. Then something hit him, and he stopped. "Sh1t." He said in an exhale as he put her down and turned away.

"What's wrong? Did I do something?"

The ODST slumped down against one of the walls in the stall, and ran his fingers through his wet hair. "No, you didn't. I just..."

"You're not into this."

"No, I am. I just, I don't, What Mike said, about not wanting to die. I can't stop thinking about it." He slouched further, sliding down onto his back.

Saline lay down next to him, pulling herself close to him. "You're not going to die."

Shadow laughed, "I'm an ODST. Saying I'm going to live is absolutely absurd."

"I won't let you die." Saline said, kissing him on the lips.

Shadow let out a long exhale. "I wouldn't mind so much if I knew I was leaving something behind. I just see my body face down in a pool of blood, and nobody caring. Would it really make a difference? I would be forgotten, leaving nothing to the world that would carry me on. If that makes any sense to you."

The two lay there in silence, the drops of water making tiny tapping noises as it hit their skin. Then Saline put two hands on his shoulders, pulling herself up so that they were chest to chest, "It does, and when all this is over, when we win, me and you can go somewhere nice and warm where palm trees grow, and be happy. We'll leave something behind Terry, I promise."

Dante left the sleeping quarters of the ship, and went to the bridge. He sat down next to the cryotube holding 117, and looked into the golden visor. "How did you do it? You saved the universe when I could barely make it out of an asteroid. I mean, I'm faster than you, stronger too, and I have a better suit. How the hell did you do it? What do you have that I don't? And the others didn't..." Dante was silent, then laughed, "God, I'm talking to a damn popsicle. I wish I was in cryo right now, then I wouldn't have to deal with how pathetic I am..." Dante took a deep breath, stood up, and headed for the sleeping quarters.



[Edited on 04.29.2010 8:18 PM PDT]

  • 04.29.2010 2:43 PM PDT
Subject: [Story] The Spartan Four Project (Part Seventeen Is Ready!)

wow. just wow.

  • 04.29.2010 3:02 PM PDT
Subject: [Story] The Spartan Four Project (Part Eighteen Is Up!)
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Posted by: Pashto96
wow. just wow.


Eh, I guess I'll ad a warning, and it can be skipped if the reader wishes. That's the only time something like that is going to happen in this story anyway.

[Edited on 04.29.2010 3:22 PM PDT]

  • 04.29.2010 3:12 PM PDT

How'd you find me?

I agree with Pashtosh on wow. You're not afraid to put some mischief into your stories, are you? And I noticed you said that ONI was smoke and mirrors. I also used that in my story. If it's a coincidence, I'll shut up.

[Edited on 04.30.2010 1:11 PM PDT]

  • 04.29.2010 4:01 PM PDT

Soffish for everyone!

Art and Halo = my life... pretty much.

I know its been forever and its still only half way but I hope Ive done him justice: Dante E18 Half Done

  • 04.29.2010 4:21 PM PDT
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Posted by: kingwrench
I agree with Skulblaka on wow. You're not afraid to put some mischief into your stories, are you? And I noticed you said that ONI was smoke and mirrors. I also used that in my story. If it's a coincidence, I'll shut up.


I hadn't seen a sex scene in a story here before, so I figured I'd go for it. It was a brilliant way to describe the ONI, what you said. If you don't want me to use it I can take it out. I put, "As the saying goes." In there too. I figured it would be cool to make it like that.

And devil, thanks man, nice job with that drawing. Keep it up bro, cant wait to see the final product :D!

[Edited on 04.29.2010 4:40 PM PDT]

  • 04.29.2010 4:40 PM PDT

How'd you find me?

It's fine. I just wanted everyone to know I said that. Ha, kidding. I don't care if you use it or not, it's just a phrase.

  • 04.29.2010 6:22 PM PDT