Been a member since 05 xD.
1. Story was NOT copied in any way.
2. I thought I would google search to see if anyone had already written a story like this.
3. After noticing someone has I stopped.
4. The product you see in front of you is where I stopped.
5. This is not about originality in any form or fashion.
6. This is me asking if you think I can write.
7. The story that is similar to mine is found on Halo.Bungie.ORG
Now on a side note, I just wanted to see if was a semi decent writer or not. Thanks for the feedback.