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Subject: The Forgotten Spartan-Chapter Twelve, part 1, after considerable delay
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no that doesn't seem to hard to get

  • 04.03.2006 2:33 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

We'll need something to post about until I deign it appropriate to post the next part. Any ideas? Just make sure it's about the fanfic in some way.

  • 04.03.2006 3:00 PM PDT
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i don't have any ideas right now but if i get one i will post it

  • 04.03.2006 3:08 PM PDT
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Rainman my friend has a world war 2 jeep and we are going to make it a paintball tank any halo designs you can think of

[Edited on 4/3/2006]

  • 04.03.2006 4:19 PM PDT

"I hope nothing, I fear nothing, I am free"
"A person needs a little madness, or else they never dare cut the rope and be free." - Nikos Kazantzakis
"The ink of the scholar is more holy than the blood of martyrs" - Hasan al-Basri
Black Chapter, for all religious and political debate that doesn't fit in the Flood.

Hehe always good to hear about other amigoes... but anyway, posting off topic is just gonna get us a warning off dmbfan, so there isn't much point trying that one to bump the activity :)

Sorry I haven't been posting much, got a coursework deadline of friday, so i'm working as hard as i can to get everything finished by then before my lovely 2 week break, 3 weeks of practically nothing, then 3 months or so of rest :D

Life, as they say, is very good.

Keep up the good work man, nothing like good writing to read at a break from work.

- Primum

  • 04.03.2006 5:13 PM PDT
Subject: FanFiction please Read.
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This is Brilliant i read the first few chaprters and thought it was an outake of one of the original three books. Keep up the great work.

  • 04.03.2006 6:54 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Well, I'm certainly going to keep writing. Or am I? Yes. As to it being an outtake from the books, that would be weird wouldn't it? If I'm luckier than luck itself, then I'll get it published at some point, and then it won't be an outake of anything. That would be so cool, to see "Halo:The Forgotten Spartan" on a shelf in a bookstore with my name on it...

  • 04.04.2006 3:17 AM PDT
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This Is More Like It .. :-D .. Keep With The Posting

  • 04.04.2006 12:38 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Posted by: geffgorman
right....


Anyone know what that means?

  • 04.04.2006 1:32 PM PDT
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if you had a book made i would buy as soon as it came out

  • 04.04.2006 2:09 PM PDT
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This story is great so far. KEEP IT UP!!

  • 04.04.2006 3:21 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

So far its about 100 pages, and all the Halo books are about 300 pages, so I've got a lot of work still to do. Simmons has a lot of people to kill between here and there. I think its about time for another large scale engagement. But since I'm writing more than I've posted, you won't see it for a while.

  • 04.05.2006 3:31 AM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

I'm particularly proud of this part. Enjoy!


The LT went over to Linda and gave her some directions. Then Simmons meandered over to Silva, had a few words, and strolled on toward the man John and Fred had pointed out.
“Hello Lance Corporal. Here, take a glass of water.”
“Thanks sir. Thanks a lot.” The man was young and he was eager. But he was also dangerously naive.
“Now Lance Corporal Lister, I wanted to personally thank you for the information you gave me. Now here’s a demonstration of what I’m going to do with it.” He raised his hand and gave Linda and Omni the ok. Their shots rang out and hit Silva and all his men in seconds. Their gear went off, and their screams of annoyance took the smile from Lister’s face. Then a great red dot from a laser sight appeared on the Lance Corporal’s head.
“Do you see that, Lance Corporal?” Simmons pointed to the retching men trying to take off their beeping equipment. Lister was sweating bullets now and his face was full of the realization that he had just sold out his men, and the men of Bravo Company. Simmons brought his face close into the shaking Marine’s, so that their noses were almost touching. “That is what happens when people talk. This may be an exercise, but those men are as good as dead, and it’s your fault. You are in a position of authority Lance Corporal. Learn this lesson well, and teach it to the men under your command.”
With that, Simmons stepped aside and a blank shot rang out, and in an instant Lance Corporal Lister was looking for his MILES’s off switch with the rest of Silva’s men. On his way back to the platoon’s CP, Fred came running up alongside the careworn Lieutenant.
“What did you do that for LT?”
“Because Fred, people need to learn that war is serious, and there’s going to be a real fight to win someday.”
The young Spartan stopped walking and thought about that. His face hardened and he realized Simmons was right. From that day on, Spartan 104, Fred, never thought of war as a game again.
The Bravo’s morning assault was entirely successful, resulting in the capture of the woods without a single casualty. This success was largely in part to the fact that Simmons and the men had already been picked up by the morning’s first Pelicans. The Spartans rode in a separate Pelican to a separate installation, and Linda was tempted to take down a few Bravos from the air, but under Simmons’ orders John held her back.
Silva and his men were untied and Silva was chewed out thoroughly by his superior, and in turn Silva chewed Lister out. And so the last uncaptured flag on Reach fell to the Spartans and the 89th Drop Jet Platoon.

  • 04.07.2006 7:01 AM PDT
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"And so the last uncaptured flag on Reach fell to the Spartans and the 89th Drop Jet Platoon."
That part just did not fit in but other wise it is GREAT!

Also have you though of posting the entire thing on a different website like FanFictione.Net uninterrupted so new reader can read it without having to search though every page.


[Edited on 4/7/2006]

  • 04.07.2006 11:32 AM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

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"And so the last uncaptured flag on Reach fell to the Spartans and the 89th Drop Jet Platoon."
That part just did not fit in but other wise it is GREAT!



I liked that part, but that's just me. As for posting it somewhere else, feel free to do it under my name, but I don't really want to.

  • 04.07.2006 5:14 PM PDT

No soldier should be honored for doing what is expected
of him. He is after all, just doing his job.

Posted by: the green grunt
(|__/) This....This is bunny
(x..X) Keslo Killed it
('') ('') what a nice guy

uurrgghh!! Sliva must win!!!

  • 04.07.2006 10:06 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Nope. Silva is second fiddle to Simmons. Get used to it.

  • 04.08.2006 6:34 AM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

C'mon, we were doing so good. Don't stop posting now. So, when Simmons becomes a Captain, should he promote his buddies? (O'Donnell and Dominique)

Oh, and here's a relatively uninterupted post of the story. You may have to join the group to see it, but its an open group, and its about football. Link

[Edited on 4/8/2006]

  • 04.08.2006 5:02 PM PDT

No soldier should be honored for doing what is expected
of him. He is after all, just doing his job.

Posted by: the green grunt
(|__/) This....This is bunny
(x..X) Keslo Killed it
('') ('') what a nice guy

how about one of them get busted to private for fighting?

  • 04.08.2006 5:30 PM PDT
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Beautiful story Rainman89! I read it all in one night and caught my attention quite well (which is a strong feat). It took me several hours but I just enjoy Halo related stories. Keep up the good work!

  • 04.08.2006 10:23 PM PDT
Subject: FanFiction please Read.
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Posted by: Sergeant Keslo
how about one of them get busted to private for fighting?


Hadn't thought of that. Maybe, maybe...

  • 04.09.2006 4:35 AM PDT
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it took me about a week to read all this and i must say Rainman you are amazing

you know i considered took post my own fan fic but i was all like "My fanfic is gunna be blow away by much better ones like Rainman's" yeah so........

Over all this is great man i havent read this much chapters that are fan ficanal since the time i went to read the halo books.

Dude gimme some breating room i dont know how much more my brain can take with this amazing stuff.

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Your only flaw is that i noticed that your story isnt broken into paragraphs or was it intensional is it was forget what i said.

Amazing do i have to go on is i did id be here all week posting how great this FF is wow if read many FF id have to say this is the best of the best

What even better is you thought this idea from scratch i gotta give you double props for that if this were me it would take me about 2-3 months to think of this

Honestly id say this FF has no flaws although i really wanna see what happens to Simmons.

A final word |Don't rush take your time I'm not going anywere|

I gotz lotsa patiants so take all the time in the world- Did i metion this guy is so smart he made a genious get jelous

(^.^) WOW (^.^)

  • 04.09.2006 9:59 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

It looks a lot better in the Word document where I write it. When it transfers to the thread, it doesn't come out great. That's why you don't see all the paragraphs.

  • 04.10.2006 3:21 AM PDT
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sorry i havnt been posting in a while, ive head to do things in the real world and had some homework. could you please have another look at my story please.
anyway, i want blood! i want promising blood (look up the meaning for covenant). i want to read about simmons, in the words of a stupid nerd: siriously "pwn" and "own" some hunters.
and, make one of simmons marines have a nice romantic relationship with kelly or grace. linda dosnt seem like the loving type.
-POAP

  • 04.10.2006 5:57 AM PDT