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WOOT 400th Post! So Where Is The Rest Of This FanFic My Friend?

  • 04.10.2006 1:56 PM PDT
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Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Posted by: poo on a plate
sorry i havnt been posting in a while, ive head to do things in the real world and had some homework. could you please have another look at my story please.
anyway, i want blood! i want promising blood (look up the meaning for covenant). i want to read about simmons, in the words of a stupid nerd: siriously "pwn" and "own" some hunters.
and, make one of simmons marines have a nice romantic relationship with kelly or grace. linda dosnt seem like the loving type.
-POAP


You'll get your blood. As soon as 2525 rolls around, Simmons and the boys will do some damage for the human cause. While I'll admit there's some room for romance in the story, I wouldn't bank on it being one of the Spartans.

Chapter 15
1200 Hours, May 15, 2525(Military Calendar)/
Epsilon Eridani System, Reach Military Complex, Planet Reach

The amphitheater at the Naval Academy on Reach was packed with young men and women filled with the excitement that follows the tough times at the academy. In the back sat a Lieutenant who was reminiscing of his own times at the academy. After Simmons’ graduation, Dr. Halsey was waiting for him and Amacus. Now it was the other way around.
“…You have done all that we asked and more. I congratulate you all on your success.” Dr. Halsey sat down and the announcer resumed the ceremony.
“Valedictorian,” he droned, “Ensign Fhajad.” The crowd cheered and the shaking ex-Spartan was wheeled to the stage. After the excruciatingly long list of names and the throwing of the hats, the newly christened Ensigns and Second Lieutenants were dismissed.
“I’m surprised to see you here Lieutenant.” Dr. Halsey had spotted Simmons from the stage and sought him out.
“Why should you be surprised, you sent for me.”
“I thought you’d have been sick of me and my summons by now. Oh, Lieutenant, I think you know Ensign Fhajad.” She gestured to the Spartan she had been conversing with before she found Simmons.
Simmons saluted promptly and replied, “Congratulations Ensign.”
“Thank you sir,” he replied as he returned the salute to the best of his ability. Then he turned and resumed his conversation with the Doctor. “You need to delay the tests ma’am. The CPU interface and the optical crystal aren’t ready yet. You’ll probably kill the subjects.”
Simmons had no idea what they were talking about, but this was obviously an appeal to the Doctor’s conscience, which must be going mad lately, since he calculated her personal death toll at… fifty odd subjects killed, a dozen wounded. How can she sleep at night? Simmons wondered. If she had a conscience, she had it under control.
“Nonsense Fhajad. The AI simulations say it’s going to work. And the Lieutenant here is going to prove it.”
“What is it now Doctor?” he asked with a grin.
“I need you to test my Mjolnir armor again,” she said in a whisper, though there’s no way anyone could hear them over the chattering cadets.
“Again? …I knew that wasn’t an ODST drop suit. What is the Mjolnir armor for then?” He was eager to fill in the gaps in his limited knowledge.
“It’s for the Spartans. But maybe, if you’re good, I’ll let you keep one.” Her usual sarcasm was laced with something else. There, just behind her eyes. What was that? Apprehension? Fear? Simmons didn’t think the Doctor was capable of such emotions.
“Don’t do it Lieutenant. You might live to regret it. Oh, before I forget, can I ask you a question sir? If you could select any field in the Navy, what would you pick?”
“A friend asked me that once. My answer’s still the same. Astrogation.”
“I can’t serve aboard a ship sir, but thanks any way. Maybe I’ll do astrophysics…” Fhajad then left to celebrate with his fellow cadets.
“Do you accept my offer Lieutenant? I think you’ll enjoy it.”
“Fine Doctor. I’m in. I’m glad you asked my opinion this time though.”
“We’ll be in touch Lieutenant.” With that, Doctor Halsey turned on her heel and slipped into the crowd.


[Edited on 4/11/2006]

  • 04.10.2006 3:18 PM PDT
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great chpter Rainman

  • 04.10.2006 5:03 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Posted by: OmniosSpartan
you misspelled HEEL in the last sentence.



My bad. There you go.

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Posted by: Rainman89
“Valedictorian,” he droned, “Ensign Fhajad.”


hey is this a new character or did u just spell his name in 2 different ways?

  • 04.11.2006 7:59 AM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Where did I spell it different? It's supposed to be Fhajad the Spartan again.

  • 04.11.2006 1:54 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

1600 Hours, May 15, 2525(Military Calendar)/
Epsilon Eridani System, Reach Military Complex, Planet Reach

“And be sure to keep them on the fitness regimen.”
“No prob LT,” Dominique answered.
“Oh, and if you see the Spartans again, use the same pairs as last time.”
“Ok boss,” O’Donnell replied.
Simmons was busy packing as he gave his orders out. The Doctor had given him six hours notice. Six hours. What was she thinking? As Simmons mused, Omni poked his head in the door.
“Hey boss, can I say something? Its about yesterday.”
“Yes Marine?”
“Its that Spartan girl, Linda. She’s amazing boss. She can see a grasshopper on a twig four hundred meters away, and if you asked her to, I think she could hit it. I’ve never seen anything like it sir.”
“While we’re on the topic, I think Sam knows more about those weapons than I do…” O’Donnell thought out loud.
“John’s no pushover either Lieutenant,” Dominique chimed in.
“Well, I’m glad you guys like the Spartans. We’re going to be seeing a lot of them.” With that Simmons waved off his men and hopped in his Warthog on his way to Fairchild Airfield.
The MP’s at the gate checked Simmons’ identification and thumbprint and he was ushered in. “Proceed to the passenger’s terminal Lieutenant.”
“Thank you Marine.” It turned out the ‘Passenger Terminal’ was a single prefab barracks, since the airfield specialized in fighter aircraft. In the terminal, Simmons sat down next to an eager young Second Lieutenant, who may well have graduated just hours ago.
“Sir!” the eager young Marine shouted.
“At ease,” Simmons said as he returned the salute.
“You headed to the Midsummer Night too sir?”
“How’d you know?”
“I think that’s the only outbound Pelican from here today.”
“Very observant Lieutenant. What are you doing on the ship kid?”
“I can’t tell you sir. My objective is classified.”
“I get a lot of that. Well, looks like its time to go.” The viewscreen flashed ‘Pelican Romeo Thirty Six Departing’ and Simmons and the new Marine ran out to the awaiting drop ship. Romeo Thirty Six was sitting on the pad out side the barracks burning its jets, and Simmons was forced to crouch up to the rear of the aircraft.
“Sir! I’m Chief Sanchez, and this is the direct route to the Midsummer Night! Take a seat and we’ll be off in a minute!” The Chief made last minute checks while Simmons and the Second Lieutenant strapped themselves into the crash seats and attached their duffels to the recessed D-rings in the floor. The door to the cabin was sealed, and Chief Sanchez was forced to ride in the back. As he cycled the hatch closed, the pilot’s voice came over the ship’s intercom.
“Romeo Thirty Six to Fairchild Control. Taking off from pad 9 and using orbital ascent pattern Delta.”
“Roger Romeo Thirty Six, radar is clear, you’re green to go.”
“The Captain likes to put the radio traffic over the intercom, so the passengers know what’s going on. It really helps the nervous fliers.” Sanchez explained. It appeared the young man next to Simmons was one of those nervous fliers.
“What’s your name kid?” Simmons asked.
“Lieutenant Roy, sir.” The young kid seemed about to lose his lunch right there at 50,000 feet, but he held it together.
“This your first trip to orbit Lieutenant?” The Crew Chief asked.
“Uh huh. Ohh…”
“My first time up, I blew chunks as soon as we hit zero gees. It floated around the cabin the rest of the flight, and it was a pain to clean, let me tell you.” Apparently Sanchez had prepared this story for just such an occasion. The concept of cleaning floating vomit didn’t appeal to Roy, so he resolved to hold it in.

  • 04.12.2006 2:38 PM PDT
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MMMM .. Nothing Like A Story Of Floating Vom At 00.08 Hours

  • 04.12.2006 4:09 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Yeah, that's quality literature, right there.

  • 04.13.2006 3:16 AM PDT
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Have read it all man and it is awesome!!!!!

I havent even read the halo novels and your writing makes me think that reading them will only dissapoint me as its not as good as rainmans writing :)

Keep it up man you deserve to becomea famous writer i am living off this stuff

Thanks for the entertainment man



:)

  • 04.13.2006 6:14 AM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Posted by: OmniosSpartan
give me more damn you! :'(



Calm yourself. I've got all Spring Break to write, so you'll get all you can handle and more.

  • 04.13.2006 1:53 PM PDT

No soldier should be honored for doing what is expected
of him. He is after all, just doing his job.

Posted by: the green grunt
(|__/) This....This is bunny
(x..X) Keslo Killed it
('') ('') what a nice guy

lol, just don't over do it.

  • 04.13.2006 8:27 PM PDT
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ok i've copied every chapter into a document and im going to read it but before i do i just want to know what the whole thing is all about and if any of it's true?

  • 04.14.2006 1:42 AM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Posted by: Phoenix_Arbiter
i just want to know what the whole thing is all about and if any of it's true?


Its a coming of age story in the Depression South...No, seriously. It's about a guy who never thought some Doctor could change his life forever. Luckily for them both, she did.

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i think i already posted, but, ohwell.
great story! keep it up!

  • 04.14.2006 5:48 AM PDT
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ITS GOOOOD

  • 04.14.2006 10:16 AM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Posted by: three musketeer
ITS GOOOOD


Thanks alot. Well, I hope you guys are ready for the next segment, cause its great. Too bad I'm not releasing it today. It really is a cryin' shame...

  • 04.14.2006 2:05 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!


bastard...... :) just kidding man.

I knew someone was going to say that.

  • 04.15.2006 4:00 AM PDT

It's well-written, but it's BORING!!!

  • 04.15.2006 9:10 AM PDT
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i like the realism of the stories ,u make it seam as it is official like it came straght out of Jason Jones mouth. congats.

no offense jason it wasa copliment

[Edited on 4/15/2006]

  • 04.15.2006 10:24 AM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Posted by: Flood_Master
It's well-written, but it's BORING!!!


Believe it or not, the military is not all about running and gunning, especially in peacetime. Just wait till the Covenant show up.

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I don't mean to rush you Rainman but it is getting boring around here

  • 04.17.2006 4:32 PM PDT