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Subject: FanFiction please Read.
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Posted by: Primum Agmen
and with a nice handy link


Thanks to the nice people for their contributions. Now, no more whining about needing a 'clean' document.

[Edited on 4/27/2006]

  • 04.27.2006 12:07 PM PDT

Don't follow in my footsteps; I walk into walls
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Seriously if I see a 'needs to be in a clean doc' post bad things will happen

  • 04.27.2006 2:42 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Quite understandable. So, anybody ready for the next chapter? Good. If you're lucky, it'll be out this weekend.

  • 04.28.2006 3:21 AM PDT
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PM me when the next chapter comes

  • 04.28.2006 4:07 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Posted by: camoflage
PM me when the next chapter comes


I won't promise I'll get around to it.

  • 04.29.2006 4:37 AM PDT

Don't follow in my footsteps; I walk into walls
my 360s blog

cool

  • 04.30.2006 12:58 AM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Posted by: Mat Parker 116
cool


What's cool?

  • 04.30.2006 4:08 AM PDT

Don't follow in my footsteps; I walk into walls
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life in general

  • 04.30.2006 5:55 AM PDT
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Mat..........life isnt cool with all the polution and im thinking about steallingh that ferret part of your sig

  • 04.30.2006 6:11 AM PDT

Don't follow in my footsteps; I walk into walls
my 360s blog

lol next chapter soon Im being honded for updates

[Edited on 4/30/2006]

  • 04.30.2006 7:19 AM PDT

Don't follow in my footsteps; I walk into walls
my 360s blog

seriously people love this on fanfiction your famous here are some of the reviews:

this is cool

awesome

please update soon this rules

go simmons

great story

[Edited on 4/30/2006]

  • 04.30.2006 11:17 AM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

I wouldn't count on it, I had to work today, and I'm probably not going to get around to it.

  • 04.30.2006 12:10 PM PDT
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its awsome

  • 04.30.2006 5:49 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

I'm gonna try and get the next part up tonight, just don't get your hopes up too high.

  • 05.01.2006 3:27 AM PDT

"I hope nothing, I fear nothing, I am free"
"A person needs a little madness, or else they never dare cut the rope and be free." - Nikos Kazantzakis
"The ink of the scholar is more holy than the blood of martyrs" - Hasan al-Basri
Black Chapter, for all religious and political debate that doesn't fit in the Flood.

Mokay, well, i'll keep an eye on this page while doing other things then :p

Not quite sure what though... FF7 is still downloading...

Hmm...

*walks off to find something to do..*

-Primum

  • 05.01.2006 7:36 AM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

I'm thinking flashback chapter coming up. Not sure what I'm going to do with it, I just know we need more of Simmons' past to help characterize him.

  • 05.01.2006 12:18 PM PDT
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Posted by: Mat Parker 116
seriously people love this on fanfiction your famous here are some of the reviews:

this is cool

awesome

please update soon this rules

go simmons

great story


you forgot sweet

  • 05.01.2006 1:45 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

0800 Hours, September 9, 2525(Military Calendar)
/Epsilon Eridani System, planet Reach

UNSC Priority Transmission
076452B-74
Encryption Code: Blue
Public Key: file/access Delta
From: Spartan 104 Personal Data Pad
To: Captain Mathew Simmons
Subject: Help
Classification: Open

/Start File/
Captain, we need your help. Since our augmentation, CPO Mendez has been shuffling us around more training grounds then any of us cares to remember. Tomorrow he’s dropping us in the Titanium mines near your barracks. We need a lot of gear that we just can’t get on our own. We don’t like to admit it but occasionally we do need help. We had a team meeting and we decided you were our best bet. John says that if you do this we’ll call it even for that one time on Jericho VII. We need some black fatigues and face paint, plenty of rope, and anything else you can think of. Thanks in advance sir.
Fred
/Press Enter to Continue/

1200 Hours, September 10, 2525(Military Calendar)/
Epsilon Eridani System, Abandoned Titanium Mines, planet Reach

“Gear check.” Simmons whispered as they crouched outside the tunnel entrance.
“Rope, check.” Dominique had a huge quantity of rope wrapped around his body and most of it was thick enough to lift a good thousand kilograms.
“Fatigues, check.” O’Donnell was carrying three duffels full of black fatigues and Fiurah had some more with the rest of the gear he was carrying. Four was enough to carry everything Fred had asked for, especially since Dominique was carrying enough for two people, so Simmons had arranged for Lieutenant Puller to lead the company tonight. The new XO was a bit green, but he was very competent. A long run would keep everyone from noticing that Charlie Company was one CO, one Navy Corpsman, a First Sergeant, and a Sergeant short of a whole company.
The march into the tunnels took an hour and a half, and when they left, the gear was hidden quite cleverly. Simmons reminded himself to send Fred a message to tell him where the equipment was. Aside from the stuff requested, Simmons had managed to procure a radio, some flashlights, and a case of fifty candy bars from the PX. After all, Simmons had thought, they may never get a chance to be kids again.
By the time Charlie Company made it back to their barracks, their Captain was back in the lead and no one was the wiser, but the five who had been in on it all the time. In the short time that Lieutenant Simon Puller had been around, Simmons had begun to enjoy his command. The kid was from Luna, and the first time he saw Simmons he said some Navy teacher told him to say hi. It took Simmons a while to get it, but according to the look on his face, it remained a mystery to Puller. Apparently Keyes had had a change of venue in the time they had been apart. Good for him, Simmons thought.
The next day the radio that communicated with the one left in the caves periodically transmitted machine gun fire and brief words of thanks. Seemed CPO Mendez got more than he bargained for with that bunch. That was the last Simmons heard from the Spartans for quite a while.


[Edited on 5/2/2006]

  • 05.02.2006 3:11 AM PDT
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Looks Like I Came Back On The Right Day .. Keep It Up Mate .. Good Work .. Is This A
Tie In To The Books Where The Spartans Managed To Get Rope And Equipment When They 'Never Left The Room'?

[Edited on 5/2/2006]

  • 05.02.2006 10:42 AM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Posted by: hunta slaya
Is This A Tie In To The Books Where The Spartans Managed To Get Rope And Equipment When They 'Never Left The Room'?


You bet ya. I'm trying to push the 'Simmons is a Spartan' idea. They're like his little siblings, and he's helpin' them out. I'm thinking CPO Mendez may just pay Simmons back for that...

  • 05.02.2006 1:23 PM PDT
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nice chapter

  • 05.02.2006 1:51 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Posted by: camoflage
nice chapter


My pleasure.

  • 05.02.2006 5:32 PM PDT

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Its up on fanfiction now

  • 05.03.2006 1:10 AM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Good to know.

  • 05.03.2006 3:15 AM PDT

"I hope nothing, I fear nothing, I am free"
"A person needs a little madness, or else they never dare cut the rope and be free." - Nikos Kazantzakis
"The ink of the scholar is more holy than the blood of martyrs" - Hasan al-Basri
Black Chapter, for all religious and political debate that doesn't fit in the Flood.

Niiice, always a funny part of the books... I know a guy who managed to do that in an army combat exercise, scared the hell out of the opposition dropping on their heads, tying them up and never being spotted...

*fades into shadows like he was never here*

- Primum

  • 05.03.2006 4:02 PM PDT