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Subject: FanFiction please Read.
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

I always liked that part too, and I thought it would be good to explain where they got the stuff if they never left the room. I've done a lot of things like that over the course of the story, like Roy being that guy in the video who dies. I think it helps validate the story.


P.S. 500th post! Woot woot!!!

[Edited on 5/4/2006]

  • 05.04.2006 3:22 AM PDT
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0 is a hero.
1st is the worst (no offense OmniosSpartan, sorry.)
2nd is the best!!!!

WOOHOO!!!!

502 post!!!!

WOOT WOOT!

  • 05.04.2006 2:53 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Posted by: Lockout117
0 is a hero.
1st is the worst (no offense OmniosSpartan, sorry.)
2nd is the best!!!!

WOOHOO!!!!

502 post!!!!

WOOT WOOT!



Not the most mature post I've ever seen, but hey, at least he's posting.

  • 05.04.2006 5:59 PM PDT
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Can you read my fanfic Rainman? KASTLE: Criminal Minds? I could really use some feedback, especially from a really good writer like you. Thanks.


Also, about the mature thing, I was just hyper at that time. I'm already work in networking. Probably one of the older people on B.net who acts like a child. lol.

  • 05.04.2006 6:05 PM PDT

No soldier should be honored for doing what is expected
of him. He is after all, just doing his job.

Posted by: the green grunt
(|__/) This....This is bunny
(x..X) Keslo Killed it
('') ('') what a nice guy

you are not the first one lol.

  • 05.04.2006 6:46 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Posted by: Lockout117
Can you read my fanfic Rainman?



Already did, check your thread.

  • 05.05.2006 3:15 AM PDT

Don't follow in my footsteps; I walk into walls
my 360s blog

When's the next update so I can tell the Fanfiction readers something?

  • 05.05.2006 1:13 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Posted by: Mat Parker 116
When's the next update so I can tell the Fanfiction readers something?


Here you go.

Not to say he wasn’t busy. The training regimen he had worked up was a real winner. His men were qualified on every ground weapon in the Corps and almost every vehicle. Dominique had been trying for two weeks to qualify on the Scorpions so he could train the rest, but he just kept failing the written portion. Fiurah agreed to tutor him on the down low, and Simmons was sure he would pass by the end of the week.
When his promotion had officially come through, Simmons was ecstatic. He immediately promoted O’Donnell and Dominique, and Fiurah now actually reported to the newly christened Company Commander, which was convenient. His first choice for an XO was naturally Silva, but Simmons was delighted to hear he had been promoted also. After a week of searching, Doctor Halsey sent him a message recommending one ‘First Lieutenant Simon Puller’. Simmons accepted the advice and put in the request immediately. Within the hour, Puller was on Simmons’ doorstep reporting. He said some Doctor had approached him and told him how would he like to XO a brand new ODST company. Naturally he accepted and here he is. Simmons was muffed that the doctor would send him advice after she had already made the decision. It was her style to make the decision without his knowing or ask him well in advance. Clearly she knew something he didn’t. Maybe it had to do with that whole Harvest rumor…

  • 05.05.2006 2:09 PM PDT

No soldier should be honored for doing what is expected
of him. He is after all, just doing his job.

Posted by: the green grunt
(|__/) This....This is bunny
(x..X) Keslo Killed it
('') ('') what a nice guy

right, the next thing we know, they will be sent to Harvest.

  • 05.05.2006 2:35 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

I can say with certainty, that they're not going to Harvest. Rest assured.

  • 05.05.2006 4:42 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Expect wimpy updates for a while, I'm behind in my writing.


Simmons had made an extensive study into the logistics of his Company as soon as he received command. There was only one active ODST battalion in the whole UNSC, and here was Simmons commanding one of its six Companies. Charlie Company had been commanded by a Captain Ackerson a while ago, but he had left suddenly and they had been floating around lately. With Simmons in command they were getting back in shape. There were four platoons, the 89th, 90th, and 91st were standard ODST rifle platoons and the 92nd was the first ODST weapons platoon. Simmons kept direct command of the 89th, Puller headed the 90th, and while there was a Lieutenant in the 91st, he had quickly realized that Dominique knew more than he could ever hope to. O’Donnell was the Sergeant in the weapons platoon, and he got to write the Chapter in the Marine Handbook labeled ‘ODST Weapons Platoon.’ He took the job seriously, stopping at seemingly random intervals to write down notes in his little book.
The role of company commander weighed Simmons down considerably in the time department. He couldn’t find the time to report to battalion HQ, train his men, and live a life at the same time. But, he thought, I never had much of a social life anyway. Battalion Commander was a Lieutenant Colonel Cole. He had spearheaded the ODST movement a few years ago, and would tell anyone who would stand still about it. Simmons had been foolish enough to stand still the first day and got the whole story.
Cole believed he was the descendent of LTC Robert Cole of the ancient 101st Airborne. Fact was that he and his brother, Admiral Cole, were in fact related to the obscure hero, on their mother’s side. He said the idea for modern day paratroopers came to him in a dream and he started his crusade the next day. He needed a proposal to submit to the R&D people, but he didn’t know where to turn. Then Doctor Catherine Halsey busted into his office one day and slapped the whole shebang right on his desk. He got the program under way in no time and here we are. After the tale, Cole looked long and hard at Simmons.
“You know what, you’re that kid Halsey made me accept. Here I am with just twenty four platoons in all and in walks Halsey like the day she gave me the proposal, not so much as a knock. ‘I want this kid to command a platoon’ she says. ‘We’ll call it even’ she says. Well, I couldn’t say no, but I was skeptical. I’ve been working on this thing for three years, training guys, and I have to give up a command to a kid who’s never so much as heard of the ODST’s before. And now look at ya! Best platoon in the battalion and Company Commander in less than a year. Let me tell you personally. You earned this promotion. It wasn’t some gift from above. You’ve done good work thus far kid, keep it up.”

  • 05.06.2006 12:52 PM PDT
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Rainman good work. 1 thing though. I liked it better when you posted 1 whole chapter together. Its hard to follow this way.

  • 05.07.2006 8:21 AM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Hey, I like it better that way too, but I'm just posting what I write. But I can wait until I prepare the rest of the chapter to post, if it makes you guys feel better.

  • 05.07.2006 1:17 PM PDT
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yeah. I liked it better when you just posted the entire thing all at once. You should stick to what you originally did.

  • 05.07.2006 5:31 PM PDT
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Ya it was a lot better that way plus this way might confuse the weaker minds

  • 05.07.2006 7:18 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

The people have spoken. So let it be written, so let it be done.

  • 05.08.2006 3:11 AM PDT
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nice fic man cant wait to read the nexed chapter and i think you should post the chapter all at once for the weaker minded lol

[Edited on 5/8/2006]

  • 05.08.2006 5:03 PM PDT

Eat, drink, and be merry, for tomorrow we die.


read the forgotten spartan by rainman89

This is the best fanfic I've ever read. I don't care if it's fake. Well it's midnight so i'll read more tomorrow. I just finished page 9 by the way.

  • 05.08.2006 8:48 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Glad you liked it. Good to see some new faces on this thread.

  • 05.09.2006 3:10 AM PDT

Eat, drink, and be merry, for tomorrow we die.


read the forgotten spartan by rainman89

Well I just finished all of it. That was real screwed up when you made us thing simmons was dead. Anyway best fanfic ever so on so forth. Two things I would like to promote your fanfic in my signature and also I will send you a friend request in xbox live soon... my username is asskicker32294

  • 05.09.2006 7:53 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

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I would like to promote your fanfic in my signature


Be my guest.


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I will send you a friend request in xbox live soon... my username is asskicker32294


I'm never on Xbox Live anymore, so it wouldn't be worth you trouble, but okay.

  • 05.10.2006 3:23 AM PDT
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do u have a website with just the chapters listed instead of it just being in the forum? would be cool to have in a word file so i could read it on my phone....

  • 05.10.2006 4:52 AM PDT
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thats -blam!- good even if im from ger and dont understand some words

  • 05.10.2006 8:58 AM PDT

Eat, drink, and be merry, for tomorrow we die.


read the forgotten spartan by rainman89

Ok rainman. I already did it anyway.

  • 05.10.2006 12:16 PM PDT