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Subject: FanFiction please Read.

Quae caret ora cruore nostro?
P.S. I love you.

Posted by: Rainman89
Its there, its just under Mat Parker's name because I was too lazy to do it myself.

Could someone please post a like because I cant find it. Keep up the good work Rainman.

  • 05.28.2006 3:05 AM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Premium Agmen has the link in his sig on pg 23 of this thread.

  • 05.28.2006 4:40 AM PDT

"I hope nothing, I fear nothing, I am free"
"A person needs a little madness, or else they never dare cut the rope and be free." - Nikos Kazantzakis
"The ink of the scholar is more holy than the blood of martyrs" - Hasan al-Basri
Black Chapter, for all religious and political debate that doesn't fit in the Flood.

Hey, don't go dissing clancy, the man's books are good, he messes up his facts sometimes.. but what can you do..

It's primum agmen... lol tis latin, but yeah, linkage in my signature :)

btw what is with short chapters? popular demand states longer chapters less often, if makes the story seem more cohesive and less broken.

- Primum

  • 05.28.2006 5:29 AM PDT
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ok i dunno what your all on about, but hey guys check this beast out:

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Its a huge master chief on ebay, bid quick!!

i love you bungie

  • 05.28.2006 6:03 AM PDT

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read the forgotten spartan by rainman89

I suggest we talk no more about this Tom Clancy thing lest this topic get locked. All I'm saying is that it's really goofy and I find it offenssive to everything I satand for.

  • 05.28.2006 8:09 AM PDT

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read the forgotten spartan by rainman89

By the way skip when's the next chapter?

  • 05.28.2006 11:26 AM PDT
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I Like Your Story

  • 05.28.2006 12:53 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

My bad to Primum. Dead languages rock. And from now on you will recieve absolutely nothing in the way of story updates until I conclude an entire chapter. So let it be written, so let it be done. (The one who can trace that quote to its origens, ie:movie, character, actor, will receive a prize.) And now the thrilling conclusion of whatever chapter number it is that we're up to now.



“That’s right, Captain.”
“We’ve got to contact Reach security, there’s a shooter out there!” Simmons was flabbergasted that this man could just sit and smoke while a sniper shoots outside and four ODSTs storm inside.
“I know. The shooter is one of my men. I just wanted to make sure you met me here.”
“I think we deserve an explanation, Petty Officer.” This man was probably off his rocker, and Simmons wanted his story before he had his men cuff and bind him.
“By all means. There is going to be a war Captain. A big one. The biggest one mankind had ever known, and you’re going to be on the forefront. The Spartans are the UNSC’s greatest asset, and you are the Spartan’s greatest asset. I wanted to see how sharp you really are, and I see here you even managed to fight my redirection of the drop pods. That took skill most people don’t have.” Mendez had begun messing with a data pad, casual as you please. “Your record is superb, and your men are were all hand picked for the ODST program, which, according to your personal logs, you correctly recognized as one of Dr. Halsey’s pet projects. I’m impressed Captain. And I’ve been impressed by very few people in my life. Doctor Catherine Halsey, Lieutenant Jacob Keyes, seventy-five young children who exceeded my every expectation, and yourself. These people may well decide the fate of mankind. Whenever you can, protect and aid these people. That is your mission. For your men, the Marine Corps, the UNSC, and everyone and everything you hold dear, keep these people close to you. If you do this, humanity will owe you a debt of gratitude.” Then the Chief put out his cigar, stood up, and put out his hand. Simmons took it, and they shook once. “Good luck Captain.”
With that, Mendez shook the hands of each of Simmons’ men and left the room. The ODST’s followed the Chief outside, where he had arranged for a Pelican. Simmons’ keen eyes noticed a rifle in the dark recesses of the passenger bay, and attached to it was a familiar face. Silva. Apparently he was as deep in Black Ops as Simmons now. Good for him, Simmons thought. Mendez took off with a wave to the Marines, and they were left alone in the field. Simmons returned the wave, as Fiurah ran up behind him.
“Hey, we found you. We got a call from HighCom that your pods had malfunctioned. Sorry it took so long to get here.” Fiurah was eager to hear the story, but Simmons was eager to sleep. He shrugged the Corpsman off with a wave, not even noticing how crestfallen Fiurah was at being dismissed. He would have to make it up to him later.
“Lieutenant Puller, let’s get ‘em home.” With that, the group headed back to base.


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  • 05.28.2006 5:25 PM PDT
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sweet so does this mean Simmons gets to kill cov's now?

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  • 05.28.2006 5:49 PM PDT

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read the forgotten spartan by rainman89

Ok skip it's a little less short now. Umm I'm pretty sure that's from the Bible. I'm positive it's in a Metallica song... so what just because I'm an atheist doesn't mean I can't read the Bible.

  • 05.28.2006 6:32 PM PDT
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wonder where u got the name simmons from..... jk. good work rainman

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Its from Metallica's song Creeping Death...good song...

Good pick up explosive :)

And the story is wikid...Cant get enough

Kudos Rainman

  • 05.29.2006 3:50 AM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Posted by: explosivediahrea
Umm I'm pretty sure that's from the Bible. I'm positive it's in a Metallica song


What, you mean the quote from the contest? I assure you its from a movie. Think way back. I'll give hints if you need them.

  • 05.29.2006 4:34 AM PDT

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read the forgotten spartan by rainman89

I'm serious that's from Exodus. Oh ofcourse! The Ten Commandments! I named the movie!

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  • 05.29.2006 11:39 AM PDT
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(best line of halo 3)"thought I'd try shootin my way out,mix things up a little".
rofl my waffles

Sweet.

  • 05.29.2006 11:55 AM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Posted by: explosivediahrea
Oh of course! The Ten Commandments! I named the movie!


I still need character and actor.

  • 05.29.2006 2:39 PM PDT

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read the forgotten spartan by rainman89

Oh Hell

  • 05.29.2006 3:28 PM PDT

Eat, drink, and be merry, for tomorrow we die.


read the forgotten spartan by rainman89

Charlton Heston as Moses?

  • 05.29.2006 3:42 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Think more Egyptian.

  • 05.29.2006 5:38 PM PDT
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OMFG this story is the pwnage i was thinking of making a story like yours with the spartans having a group of mariens that support them but yours is so much better keep going. Just a thought maybe have simmons and fred/john become friends or have simmons rescue fred or john from the covvies and the spartans begin to except him as part of the group. its up to you great book i look forward to reading more

  • 05.29.2006 8:21 PM PDT
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Holy Shizznizzle........i just read every single postin this thread...(alot of it completley useless) but the story was.....what's the word (*spinning the wheel of adjectives*).....THATS PHENOMENAL!!!!

no but seriously i just spent the last 7 hours at work reading all of that.
i just want to congragulate Rainman for the great read and to say keep up the great work!

  • 05.29.2006 8:58 PM PDT

"I hope nothing, I fear nothing, I am free"
"A person needs a little madness, or else they never dare cut the rope and be free." - Nikos Kazantzakis
"The ink of the scholar is more holy than the blood of martyrs" - Hasan al-Basri
Black Chapter, for all religious and political debate that doesn't fit in the Flood.

Couldn't tell you, i just recognise the metallica lyrics, had me singing creeping death to myself while reading the chapter.. hehe

good update dude :)

- Primum

  • 05.30.2006 2:29 AM PDT

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Reviews from fanfiction:
NoneAvailable
2006-05-29
ch 25, reply man this is getting really good.
NoneAvailable
2006-05-29
ch 23, reply the only person i can think of is the "good doctor" but that doesnt sound right..
NoneAvailable
2006-05-29
ch 22, reply ooh mysterious/dramatic. i likes it.

i feel like a douche...maybe i oughta stop reviewing so much?
NoneAvailable
2006-05-29
ch 21, reply aww dats so sweet.

and i really like how u weave parts of the books into ur story.
NoneAvailable
2006-05-29
ch 20, reply whoa, why so short?

ehh, i still love the story
NoneAvailable
viperlg72@gmail.com
2006-05-28
ch 19, anon. Y O U R S T O R Y R O C K S!

holy crap man i just wanna say ur story is freaking genius. theres sumthin about it o cant place my finger on but it just makes the whole thing flow. i've read all of it till tis point and i tink its simply amazing.

and i realy like ow u make simmons feel compassion for the crew/make the crew appear like actual human being and not jsut augmented demigds or sumthing like that which everyone else seems to love doing.

hope u hab a lot more on ur mind cuz to this point its freakin McNasty.
mchmstr39
2006-05-20
ch 23, reply Good story, keep it up. At one of the other reviewers, the Spartan I's were part of the Orion project.
Mr. 125
2006-05-13
ch 1, reply I have a question. Was this posted in the forums a while ago?
Otherwise, I believe I've read the second chapter before. Great job.
the_xxx_alpha
2006-05-12
ch 7, anon. man this one of the best stories i have found on fanfic, your an awsome writer, long and descriptive, nice job
bob
2006-05-11
ch 1, anon. you do know that the spartan "1's" were greek's from pree roman times... you do know that right?
Dark Lord Gullible
2006-05-08
ch 21, reply Nice, bit short chapters, eh?
Dark Lord Gullible
2006-05-03
ch 19, reply Really nice story. Can't wait for an update.
Vag
2006-04-30
ch 1, reply hey this is soo cool

  • 05.30.2006 2:41 AM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Sounds like we're making an impact over on FanFiction.

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Sorry that I haven't been on in a long while. Rainman your story keeps getting better and better. Nice job on getting people's attention with the alternate ending of killing Simmons.
Anyway have had to work and all that you know how it is.


Is it all right if I link your fan-fic to my sig under your name?



[Edited on 5/30/2006]

  • 05.30.2006 4:10 PM PDT