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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Oh, I could never ask that.

HOw about 400 copies? lol

900 posts.

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  • 07.08.2006 8:20 AM PDT
Subject: FanFiction please Read.
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This is my first post
first off your story is awesome
second there are some errors but nothing to worry bout and please give us some action soon
also please refrain from using profanity in the story because there is nothing more annoying then seeing -BLAM- in the story
i know it for those readers with virgin ears but it is annoying
SPELLING ERRORS SUCK


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  • 07.08.2006 11:00 AM PDT
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Amen......i hate it when people swear. It is an immiture and very bad way of expressing yourself.

  • 07.08.2006 12:38 PM PDT
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The Covenant will never win....Unless I play on thier side.

Ill be friends with anyone who 1. Likes Halo games and 2. Hates Sony!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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If it turns you into a snob at least you'll be a snob with good writing talent.

Posted by: SPARTAIN_117
Amen......i hate it when people swear. It is an immiture and very bad way of expressing yourself.

I think what you mean is immature.

  • 07.08.2006 12:46 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

I also don't swear. And usually refrain as much as possible in the story. But I grew up in a Marine Family. Swearing in the Military Happens. Full metal Jacket's opening 15 minutes was an R.Lee Ermey swear fest. I will take in consideration what you say, but it is just part of life. usually I just say the character used an explicative instead of using it.

  • 07.08.2006 1:09 PM PDT
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dude my Dad was a Tank Platoon Commander, but he never swears..........literally.

but thank you for refraining so far in the story and i hope that you will continue to do so.........it will definately win you more points with me and probably some other people too.



anyway......the big question. WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER??????

  • 07.09.2006 6:27 AM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

I am going out of town a lot right now. I have been with the story for about three days in the past two weeks. Sorry, but don't expect anything until after wednesday.

It'll be long though. Right now I'm looking at three times as long as the last one. And it will only get longer.

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  • 07.09.2006 9:21 AM PDT
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good........

  • 07.09.2006 1:26 PM PDT
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Dude, I started reading this halfway through the summer and it rocks! I wanted to read it all before I posted so I am now. Definitely try to get it published.

  • 07.09.2006 1:51 PM PDT
Subject: so whats w/ the change
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Posted by: Mukluk


The remaining spartens left of the book : HALO frist strike
are Fred, Linda.




And Will and Kelly. Ha Ha :)

  • 07.09.2006 2:36 PM PDT
Subject: WTF?
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Posted by: Rainman89
I'm going to finish it and rewrite it at least once or twice before I really start looking for a publisher. We're looking at two years before I get serious about publishing. Should I post the rewrite or do you want to be suprised when you see it in print?


If you really want to get this published, you have to go through Bungie first. They have to aprove all Halo material that will be published.

  • 07.09.2006 2:39 PM PDT
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Posted by: Rainman89
I belive the first one is the ark, but he has a few going right now.

also, in much sader news, I miss read SIr B's thread, we are like six months behind, actually.

NO big deal though, as most of the post were pointless, and its quality over quantity


Dear Rainman 89,
Please dont make fun of sir brilliant. Even though your fanfic is increadibly better, his fanfic, THE ARK, is like 130 pages long and is extremely well written too. You should read it, it makes a lot of good points, even though its a bit outdated with the Halo 3 trailer.

  • 07.09.2006 2:42 PM PDT
Subject: nice
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Posted by: SpartenSoldier
Honestly I wouldn't be surprised in a legitimate publisher took serious intrest in your book. The only trick is getting them to sit down and read the story. For you and your story the only hard part would be to get the publisher's attention in the first place and your great writing skills would take care of the rest.


Also he has to know about halo.

  • 07.09.2006 2:44 PM PDT

"I hope nothing, I fear nothing, I am free"
"A person needs a little madness, or else they never dare cut the rope and be free." - Nikos Kazantzakis
"The ink of the scholar is more holy than the blood of martyrs" - Hasan al-Basri
Black Chapter, for all religious and political debate that doesn't fit in the Flood.

I believe rainmans a reader of sir brilliant. personally, i started reading it, then got sidetracked because the plot doesn't really seem cohesive.. but maybe that's just me, and i think it is.

i'm a fan of clarks and rainmans, and whoever posted that pitch black one was brilliant.

anyway..

getting it publshed would take work and bungies permission, and would prob require joe staten going over it and filling in gaps.. but you never know..

twould be legendary though =]

- Primum

  • 07.09.2006 3:43 PM PDT
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The Covenant will never win....Unless I play on thier side.

Ill be friends with anyone who 1. Likes Halo games and 2. Hates Sony!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Join the UNSC spec ops

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Posted by: SpartenSoldier
Honestly I wouldn't be surprised in a legitimate publisher took serious intrest in your book. The only trick is getting them to sit down and read the story. For you and your story the only hard part would be to get the publisher's attention in the first place and your great writing skills would take care of the rest.


Also he has to know about halo.

Personally from reading this fanfic I would bet alot of money that Rainman is VERY educated about the Halo universe. If you read all the posts in this thread or even just the story you would realize that before you made this post.

  • 07.09.2006 5:36 PM PDT
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all i have to say is very very very very very good job







P.S. more more more and also you portray them very well

  • 07.09.2006 6:36 PM PDT

Eat, drink, and be merry, for tomorrow we die.


read the forgotten spartan by rainman89

Hey Prmium long time no see. About that swearing thing I disagree with all of you. I love Full Metal Jacket and most of Stanley Kuberick's work. But combat gets intense it gets stressful and it's dangerous. Besides cursing is sometimes the best way to express yourself. I think humans take themselves too seriously, it's just a sound that has been developed of thousands of years to create a system of expression. Anyway whens the next chapter?

  • 07.10.2006 11:12 AM PDT
Subject: lol
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Looking forward to your next update, good job man.

  • 07.10.2006 10:22 PM PDT
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Hey guys......



Join the UNSC spec ops !!!!!


we need members. We really just discuss halo 2 related topics and things like that. Created by our own Mr. Explosive!! klik on da linc too c mor.

  • 07.11.2006 8:41 AM PDT
Subject: link?
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Will someone give me a link to Sir B's fanfic please?

  • 07.11.2006 1:11 PM PDT
Subject: nice
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Posted by: Primum Agmen
I believe rainmans a reader of sir brilliant.
True.


Posted by: Primum Agmen

getting it publshed would take work and bungies permission, and would prob require joe staten going over it and filling in gaps.. but you never know..


I certainly wouldn't mind if they let me see the Halo Bible to better coincide with canon.


Posted by: Primum Agmen

twould be legendary though =]



Excellent use of the word "twould".

  • 07.11.2006 6:49 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Here's a link to Sir_b's story

oh, and I wasn't making fun of sir_B, I was just saying the posts in his thread, not his posts.

  • 07.12.2006 5:02 AM PDT

"I hope nothing, I fear nothing, I am free"
"A person needs a little madness, or else they never dare cut the rope and be free." - Nikos Kazantzakis
"The ink of the scholar is more holy than the blood of martyrs" - Hasan al-Basri
Black Chapter, for all religious and political debate that doesn't fit in the Flood.

Swearing in the military happens a lot, i should know, i just spent a week on an army base...

and for the usual question, when's the next chapter skip?

- Primum

  • 07.12.2006 5:54 AM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

THe update is being polished with love and care. It will be done soon.

  • 07.12.2006 10:43 AM PDT
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I have one thing to say.... I LOVE THE COPY AND PAST STUFF ON COMPUTER =D
Rainman your doing great. Keep working at it. im not completly sure but are you in a point and time where its Halo 2 area of halo 1 area? if so and if John 117 hasnt left yet for the first halo he encounters... well if you remember from reading the book ''The Flood" then you should remember about the part where John finds the lone spartan in the library level about 6 or so floors up was it? And John was amazed at how far he had got.... maybe that could be simmons, maybe like his demise...... perhaps? perhaps he dies just as John see's him? Just a little thought there... i know i might get ripped a new one by some of you guys. But Think about it. He cant live for ever.

  • 07.12.2006 3:00 PM PDT