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The GRAND poll/thread "We want online co-op for Halo 3": http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=8204108

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Oh so at the good part you decide to rewrite...Lol..Well atleast tell us when you have rewritten chapters...(;

  • 12.02.2006 8:06 AM PDT
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Well hey it happens...it's alright though because when he is done with that part he will let us know how it's going...I hope.

Them covenant don't know what's going to hit them though when the story gets back to them...man, I feel like I'm waiting for the last episode of my favorite shows and then the show gets cancelled...lol.

  • 12.05.2006 1:09 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Not cancelled, just on Hiatus.

  • 12.05.2006 2:42 PM PDT
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I just spent over six hours going through this thread and I must say: "wow". Most fan-fiction makes my eyes bleed, but you sir have managed to capture a universe that is dear to me and build on it with quality material.

I am most impressed by your writing, while usually any sort of writing about a universe NOT created in a book makes me cringe (it's strange, but I just plain find it painful) I found myself raptured by the plot, characters and presentation. My only problem was your story's conflict with Orion project. However now I endorse your story, heck I wish it was part of the Halo universe! As an afterthought, it makes sense that a batch of Spartans would be created before the Spartan IIs. The UNSC had greatly improved the augmentations since the Orion project and likely would need some guinea pigs to perfect the new techniques on. They take some grown marines and augment them before they started on the more valuable children they selected. Since the Spartan IIs were augmented from an early age they could reach better performance, but adults would likely still work out.

I find your writing top notch, in fact I wouldn't have been surprised had this been the work of a professional author. I may not be the best reviewer, but my parents were both English majors and I read War and Peace at the age of 13. Just to show you some of the writers you're up against. ;)
You are brilliant at making memorable characters, every interaction seems human and you really show that everyone has a personality.

My hat is off to you sir.

Or rather my headphones ;)

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  • 12.05.2006 5:44 PM PDT
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The Covenant will never win....Unless I play on thier side.

Ill be friends with anyone who 1. Likes Halo games and 2. Hates Sony!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Join the UNSC spec ops

English majors huh? What collage? Just curious. I finished an English major course in collage with top of the class grades online early last week. Too bad it wasn't my course but I did win $100 from my mom on a bet that she would get a better grade than me. Hmmmm.


On topic: How is the update coming along any major problems that I or someone else could help with because I'm sure we are willing.

  • 12.05.2006 6:01 PM PDT
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That does sound like some pretty tough critics though...English majors?!? I never found myself to enjoy reading but one boring day at work and the internet sure did change that.

I didn't mean that it was going to get canceled because that would not be a good thing at all...we got your back Rainman, just let us know if you need anything.

  • 12.06.2006 8:39 PM PDT
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*sagechoach roles across the forum*
wow no new chapters in almost 3 weeks
this makes me sad :(

  • 12.07.2006 11:44 AM PDT
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That's the sad life of school, it takes up time...but since the break is coming up I'm thinking that the Skip will get some revisions done.

About that Skip are you going to post it all once you're done with the entire edit or are you going to give us some tid-bits of information?!?

  • 12.08.2006 5:24 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

I'm still on the fence about that. What do you guys want?

  • 12.08.2006 6:24 PM PDT
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That is a good question...I was thinking about sending it in parts to get the forum up and running again because most people just check for an update and if nothing new is going on then they go on with their day.

But then again, I personally would like it to come in one uninterrupted piece because it would be like reading an actual novel...

Maybe if you would post some of your mini-fics to keep the forum going I think we could handle not having the real story for awhile...whichever is easier for you though Skip.

  • 12.08.2006 7:59 PM PDT
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Semper Fi
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The GRAND poll/thread "We want online co-op for Halo 3": http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=8204108

Support it and you will support online co-op for Halo 3!


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Just going to give you Guys Heads Up while he's rewriting, Look through the forums and look for a story called,''If I Were Your Hero.'' It is absolutely one of my top stories i've read,at first it's peachy but then it just get's out of control (In a good way).

  • 12.10.2006 5:26 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Yeah, I definetly suggest that fanfic, it's the only other one I ever read any of.

  • 12.11.2006 3:44 AM PDT
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sorry dude. im just so into this story im not stopping to type. its great though. i need more, lots more

  • 12.11.2006 6:15 PM PDT
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Semper Fi
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The GRAND poll/thread "We want online co-op for Halo 3": http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=8204108

Support it and you will support online co-op for Halo 3!


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Also a story by Mr_Clark, a really good one,and another by Seraph Z..

  • 12.12.2006 1:55 PM PDT
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I guess I've just been looking at the wrong fics these past few weeks...I found some that were just started but it was nothing compared to Rainman's. I'll look into those fics too, but I'm still putting this one on the top of my list, so you gotta get something on here Skip...if you don't mind sir, I need a good writing to keep me going until you have this edited.

  • 12.12.2006 3:49 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

This is a script I had to write for Drama. enjoy

I know that it is not that good, but I wrote the thing just to get the grade so...

  • 12.12.2006 4:04 PM PDT
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The cunning warrior attacks not the body nor the mind, but he attacks the heart.
"Peace settled by violence will not last. We should be the only ones to die."
-Heero Yui

I've read all except the new book, and there was no Simmons. SO there could be ONE more Spartan...but I thought that people over the age of 14 couldn't be a Spartan. How did Halsey pull that off? She never ceases to amaze me.

  • 12.12.2006 5:42 PM PDT
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Yeah, this is a story about how the Spartan program began...Simmons was a test subject along with other members of his squad, but was the only one to survive. This set the ground work for Dr. Halsey to continue research by having a successful test subject.

Rainman chose to look into the beginning of the augmentation process and give a perspective on how it continued later on with the younger test subjects.

  • 12.13.2006 4:05 PM PDT
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Well Rainman, I'm glad that you put a lot of effort into something that you like to do...your skit was pretty funny though, it reminded me of a Monty Python skit...any update on the fic?!?

  • 12.13.2006 4:23 PM PDT
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dude this has got to be the best thing i have read in my life. i appreciate you taking the time to write. i hope you continue your writings. i congragulate you.

  • 12.13.2006 4:34 PM PDT
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again, amazing, absolutely amazing. ive been reading this for three days after school, and each day durning school its the only thing i can think about, i love it.

  • 12.13.2006 4:37 PM PDT
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Well...it's official you are hooked like everyone else...but now you have to wait for the Skip to finish the rewrite also.

It's alright though because if you thought that was good you're definitely going to like the edited version (I know I will)...

  • 12.13.2006 5:14 PM PDT
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Ya thats true if you dont like the rewrite there is most likely some thing wrong with ya. I went and checked out the If I were your hero that is a sweet peice of work but i still think the skip has him beat. I dont know guess im kinda semental about the one i started reading first. Keep up the good work skip looking forward to the rewrite.

  • 12.13.2006 6:38 PM PDT