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Subject: FanFiction please Read.
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I'm pretty much in the same boat, but some of the others that I started reading i got bored with real fast...it was like I had read them somewhere else or like I was reliving the game.

  • 12.13.2006 7:44 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Thanks to all the positive responses, and thanks Scarface for giving the plot synopsis when I wasn't here.

The rewrite is coming along slowly, but I am making progress, and hey, what else is christmas break for?

  • 12.14.2006 3:36 AM PDT
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Well that is what we are here for...to encourage your good writing skills.

You are welcome for the plot synopsis, plus it gives you all the more time to write when you don't have to answer a lot of questions about your perspective.

MMmmmm...Christmas break. I like the sound of that and I am now officially done with school until Jan. 16th after a SOC-101 final.

  • 12.14.2006 2:06 PM PDT
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sweet dude. but when are the new chapters going to be in. or are there going to be any

  • 12.15.2006 8:45 PM PDT
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Christmas break is here!
*jumps around and cheers*
skip, the best present you could give to us is a part of the rewrite or a new chapter
please, I'v been a good little boy *sniff sniff*

  • 12.18.2006 8:04 AM PDT
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That is what everyone is hoping for...how was the tests Skip?!?

  • 12.18.2006 12:02 PM PDT
Subject: If I were your hero
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It really has been great so far hope to read some more, I'v been on the edge of my seat for a while waiting to see whats going to happen but I was wondering were I could find "if I were your Hero" I cant seem to find it can someone help?

  • 12.19.2006 11:02 AM PDT
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You and the many other readers here...but if I'm not mistaken I believe that what you're looking for is in New Mombasa as well...it might be further back in the pages but i could be wrong.

Skip any intel on the rewrite?!? How far?!? How much?!? Anything would be greatly appreciated.

  • 12.19.2006 1:28 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

No real news yet, it's still mainly just grammar and a little fleshing out.

  • 12.19.2006 3:32 PM PDT
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thats better than nothing skip

  • 12.22.2006 9:58 PM PDT
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sorry i havent been here in a while since we were told that no new chapters till after rewrite but have there been in the last month??

  • 12.23.2006 2:56 AM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

No, I don't think so.

Anyway, some plot fleshing out took place yesterday. Nothing was decided, but several ideas were thrown out, so that's progress.

  • 12.23.2006 4:59 AM PDT
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This'll probably be the last time I'm on the internet until next year, so happy holidays and good luck on rewriting.

  • 12.23.2006 8:31 AM PDT
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Well this will be the last time im on the net for a while allmost read all of if i were your hero but still hopeing that skip will finish the rewrite soon. Would really love to read some more. But hey every idea throwen out means one less thing to ponder on. Merry christmas to all

  • 12.23.2006 9:58 AM PDT
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Well for those who won't be back on 'til after Christmas I will talk to you next time and Skip how is the schedule looking for the break?!?

  • 12.23.2006 11:43 PM PDT
Subject: FanFiction please Read.

Eat, drink, and be merry, for tomorrow we die.


read the forgotten spartan by rainman89

So after you finish the rewrite up to the point where you left off, you'll start putting out new installments.

  • 12.25.2006 2:59 PM PDT
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Posted by: Spartan69139
Uhm.....I think Spartan 'I''s are the Spartan warriors of Sparta. If I remember correctly,'Fall of Reach' compared how the Spartan-II's were like the ancient warriors of Sparta. Also,if there was some 'Spartan-I cyborg',why wasn't there ever a mention of one in the Halo universe?
they were slightly. in the graphic novel, there are some reports, i wont spoil it, but, go read it

  • 01.05.2007 7:24 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

No rela news on the rewrite, but that doesn't mean nothing is happening. It just means I don't want to tell you what I have done right now. Sorry, secrecy is fun.

On another note; I have created a new group, and would love for you all to join- Utopia Parkway

  • 01.07.2007 12:26 PM PDT
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Well Happy New Years to everyone...I'm late but you'll get over it...who is still talking about Spartans?!? I'm a little lost on why that topic keeps coming up for...

Anyways, secrecy is only fun for the one keeping the secret....but if you can answer me one question Skip, how far into the rewrite are you?!?

  • 01.11.2007 9:03 AM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

In actual rewriting (changing the plot, not just wording and grammar) I am on chapter two. It's almost done. (chapter two, not the story)

  • 01.12.2007 7:02 AM PDT
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That ain't too bad, if you're re-doing the entire plot along with grammar...that's what I thought you was doing was rewriting the entire storyline. How long did it take to redo the first chapter...

  • 01.12.2007 2:37 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

To be honest, the first chapter wasn't rewritten per se. It was just fleshed a tiny bit, nothing major, however, a lot of Chpt. 2 is being taken out.

  • 01.12.2007 2:57 PM PDT
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Is any being added to it or just taken out?!?

  • 01.16.2007 4:22 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

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  • 01.16.2007 4:40 PM PDT
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It's been a little after the "holidays" so to speak, but I'm back. Rainman, you're making some pretty good progress with the story. Keep it up.

  • 01.16.2007 6:58 PM PDT