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Subject: FanFiction please Read.
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

jus tto let everybody know, i posted my new story(the first of many) here it is

  • 10.22.2005 4:05 AM PDT
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woot, go Simmons's

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  • 10.24.2005 4:00 AM PDT
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Dude this is as if im reading the 4th halo book u are seriously a talented writer get this thing published man i mean it u ... have too!

  • 10.24.2005 5:55 PM PDT
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I agree with jpry, this has to get published!

  • 10.26.2005 9:48 AM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Though i support the SIr_B movement, i don't know if i will ever attempt to get this published

  • 10.26.2005 2:15 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

okay, this is a story I wrote, it has NOTHING to do with my current fanfic, but i wanted you guys to read it


The past five generations of Lance Corporal Peter “Pesky” Robinson’s family had been snipers. He was proud of his heritage, that was assured, but he was more proud of himself. Having crawled ten miles from where his Warthog flipped he had reached the perimeter of a Covenant encampment, and had done so unnoticed. Loaded up with plenty of ammo for his S2 rifle, he prepared to wreak havoc on the enemy troops below.
Robinson sighted a blue elite in his scope. He waited and watched him pace, barking orders at the grunts around him. Once he was sure he knew the elite’s speed and pattern he flipped the safety off his rifle. He aimed for the alien’s ugly head, led the shot, and fired. The bullet hit its mark, and the elite’s shield flared and died as two more rounds hit his torso, and he fell to a heap on the muddy ground.
Robinson was sure the Covenant would send a scout looking for him, so he began to slowly creep to the left. He kept the S2 focused on the grunts below, but they were no immediate threat. With no one to guide them they were suddenly a pack of wild animals. Robinson spotted a veteran grunt; marked by his red armor, and used the last shot in the S2’s painfully small magazine. He ejected the clip and placed it on the ground with the four spent shells, and continued his slide to the left, encircling the camp.
As he found a good vantage point Robinson set down his rifle and checked his sidearm. It was special issue; an M6D. The gun was powerful, with 12.7mm rounds, but more importantly it had a scope, and would be useful once the Corporal ran out of ammo for the S2. That was, if he was still alive.
Once positive the pistol was loaded and ready he holstered it and slammed a new clip into his rifle.
Robinson had earned the name “Pesky” on the sniper courses on Reach. He never once got caught by his instructors, and hoped they had better eyes than the alien scum hunting him.
Robinson looked back at the Covenant camp. There were now two elites standing over their dead companion. Robinson noticed one was garnished in red armor, and decided to take him out first. Checking for wind he aimed at his target, which was standing perfectly still, and fired all four shots in his sniper rifle. The first three impacted on the alien’s shield, and slowly drained it, but the fourth cracked the alien’s protective chest plate and sent him spinning off the hill.
The second alien jumped back and tried to run of the hill, but it was too late; Robinson had reloaded and was able to land a shot in the base of the elite’s unprotected neck. As the elite tumbled down the hill the rest of the Covenant was in chaos. Robinson was able to down three more grunts before deciding to move once again. He policed his brass and began to slide through the thick brush. Thanking the fact that the Covenant had yet to catch him, Robinson took up shop in a small ravine.
Though he was now exposed, Robinson was sure he could hold off a Covenant attack. He un-holstered his M6D and turned on the 2x scope. His green eyepiece flickered to life and Robinson could see the entire encampment again. He waited for a group of jackals to turn their backs to him and he opened fire. He took down three before they were able to turn around and form a protective wall with their shields. Robinson swore as he pounded them with the remaining nine rounds, but knew he would not be able to take them down.
He set down his M6D and began to reload his S2, that’s when he heard the twig snap behind him.

  • 10.27.2005 4:15 AM PDT
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damn you rainman89...finish the story, "Don't make me take off my belt!"

  • 10.27.2005 8:32 AM PDT
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the stroy is awsome, you keep at it

  • 10.27.2005 10:59 AM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

I have good news, football season is over, and i will be writing tommorrow and the weekend, I will try to write as fast as possible

[Edited on 10/28/2005]

  • 10.27.2005 2:22 PM PDT
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Post dang it

  • 10.30.2005 1:30 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Here is the end of chapter nine, it is short but leads to one big ol' secret, one that you hopefully won't see coming...


“Congratulations, Lieutenant, you can beat children,” A voice jokingly said. Simmons jumped up and saw it was Dr. Halsey’s voice.
“Yes, ma’am, I can,” Simmons replied, happy Halsey would finally speak to him.
She turned to CPO Mendez, and he ordered the Spartans to retreat to their barracks.
“Doctor,” Mendez said, as he curtly nodded at Halsey. She nodded in response, and turned back to Simmons.
“Walk with us,” she said, “Please,” she seemed to add the last word out of respect, but Simmons didn’t know why. As they started to walk, away from the Medical Complex, The Doctor spoke again, “As you are well aware, the Spartan II project is in full swing, and will be completed within the coming months.”
“Yes, I am,” Simmons, said, “What does it have to do with me?”
Halsey stopped in her tracks, Simmons could tell the doctor was flustered, and she started to clean her glasses, as if that would somehow help her understand.
“What?” she said, placing her glasses back on the bridge of her nose. “Why would it not involve you?”
“With all due respect Ma’am,” Simmons said, as he prepared to uncap months of anger, “I have been hung out to dry, to no help from you, why should I care if your little experiment works or not? I am just a guinea pig.” He reminded her. Halsey was speechless, but Mendez was not.
“Son, you have been helped in ways you’ll never understand.” With that the Petty Officer walked away, as did the Doctor, and Simmons was left to trek back to his barracks alone, thinking about what Mendez said, and how Halsey had ever helped him

  • 11.01.2005 4:40 AM PDT
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Interesting, continue...

  • 11.09.2005 3:37 AM PDT
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wierd...this begins in 2524, yet the SPARTAN II program began in 2517

http://halosm.bungie.org/story/halostory.timeline.html

the SPARTAN program started in 2491 LINK

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  • 11.10.2005 8:45 AM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

The augmentation took place in 2525, by my story the Spartan 1's were only used as tests for augmentation.So they were used one year in advance. Glad to see people care though, anything else?

[Edited on 11/10/2005]

  • 11.10.2005 8:58 AM PDT
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May I post my fanfictions here? They may not be as good. But maybe we could create make this a thread of our fictions.

  • 11.12.2005 4:15 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

how long are they?

  • 11.12.2005 4:55 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Sorry about the inactivity, but By saturday i plan to have chapter 10(it should be wicked sweet, with anb awesome suprise)done, so keep your eyes peeled

  • 11.16.2005 4:18 AM PDT
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no more writing ahhh im melting

  • 11.19.2005 9:14 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

wait, what?

  • 11.20.2005 3:24 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Here we go, the (belated) First installment of Chapter Ten. Its short but oh, so interesting...

Chapter Ten
1300 Hours, January 30, 2525(Military Calendar)
UNSC High Command (HighCom) Facility Bravo-5,
Sydney, Australia, Earth


Most officers were not allowed a private state room in a UNSC HighCom facility before they reached the rank of General, Major Ackerson, however, didn’t see himself as “most” officers. He amused himself with this fact again as he lit another one of his cigars, and put its successor in the ashtray sitting on his desk. It wasn’t his ashtray; it belonged to the general who previously occupied the room. Ackerson had convinced him that he deserved the room, and the senior officer gladly gave it up.
Ackerson’s door opened, and a petty officer walked in. She could barely see his face through the shadows, but she knew he had that horrible, snide look he always had on his face, and simply set a data pad on his desk. As she turned to leave she was fully aware that the Major’s eyes drifted lower and lower, until her slender frame turned the corner out of view.
He knew what the message would surely say, and decided not to read it. Ackerson never really intended for his plans to work, he simply wanted to keep Dr. Halsey on her toes. He wanted to remind her that he was not someone to play around with. He wanted to make sure that she knew he was still out there.
Ackerson had originally been paired with the Doctor on the SPARTAN project. From the moment he met her he disliked her, but he tried to keep that secret. They had luckily been focused on different parts of the project, and Ackerson only had to deal with her through memos and brief meetings. Ackerson had been assigned the project through an old ONI buddy, and had been expecting great rewards upon its completion. Dr. Halsey, however, wanted only to save the UNSC from crumbling. She believed all the recruitment crap spewed by the High Brass to keep numbers up, and more men and women joining the UNSC. Ackerson knew there was no threat of rebellion, or of any real disaster.
He kept that too himself and slowly watched Dr. Halsey go about planning her little freak show. Ackerson couldn’t wait for it to be over, so he could get himself a nice promotion, and then dump the project, and start on something useful. Of course, the good Doctor had something else planned entirely. Upon completion of the Spartan Is she proceeded to disobey direct ONI orders and attempted to save her precious subjects from their predetermined death. Ackerson had planned for this, and installed a toxin during one of the last augmentations. Happy his part was over Ackerson left Reach for Earth. It was only later that he learned Halsey had him kicked off the project only three months before completion, and that one of the Spartan Is had survived.

  • 11.21.2005 4:18 AM PDT
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nice, keep going....
please pm me when the next part comes out

  • 11.22.2005 5:46 AM PDT

It is the soldier, not the reporter, who has given us freedom of the press. It is the soldier, not the poet, who has given us freedom of speech. It is the soldier, not the campus organizer, who has given us the freedom to demonstrate. It is the soldier, not the lawyer, who has given us the right to a fair trial. And it is the soldier who salutes the flag, who serves the flag, whose coffin is draped in the flag that allows the protester to burn the flag.Father Dennis Edward O'Brien, USMC

Nice book so far rainman

Be shure to post it here

http://www.bungie.net/fanclub/officiafanficgroup/GroupHome.as px

  • 11.22.2005 1:31 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

I've got it in there Eagles5, if you haven't noticed I am an avid member there

  • 11.22.2005 2:15 PM PDT
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I like this stuff! Poison! what a twist!

  • 11.25.2005 8:28 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

yeah, I think it has good potential, glad you like it

  • 11.26.2005 8:06 AM PDT