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When's it coming I'm getting emails

  • 06.14.2006 5:40 AM PDT
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Posted by: Mat Parker 116
When's it coming I'm getting emails



that doesnt make sence.




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  • 06.14.2006 6:27 AM PDT

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I collate the novel on fanfiction and its popular

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Posted by: Mat Parker 116
I collate the novel on fanfiction and its popular


wat duz tat meen? (seriously)



-Spartan

  • 06.14.2006 6:38 AM PDT
Subject: FanFiction please Read.

Rely good! how uch more?

  • 06.14.2006 1:36 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Posted by: SPARTAIN_117
Posted by: Mat Parker 116
I collate the novel on fanfiction and its popular


wat duz tat meen? (seriously)



-Spartan


He posted it on fanfiction.net, SO he gets harrased, too.

  • 06.14.2006 1:51 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

I have a busy day today, But tommorrow should be free for writing, might be done by tommorrow night.

  • 06.15.2006 11:09 AM PDT
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Hey Mr. Rainman......do you have Halo PC (because this is in the H2 Xbox fourm)??




-Spartan

  • 06.15.2006 2:10 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

I don't know how it applies, but I do not have Halo for PC.

  • 06.15.2006 2:57 PM PDT
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Posted by: Rainman89
I don't know how it applies, but I do not have Halo for PC.


[OFF SUBJECT:]

(well you should probably have put the post in the fourm that you were most connected to. No disrespect intended)


Anyway for Mr. Rainman, and all the other HPC players on this thread, there is a new mod coming out for Halo PC. CMT (Custom Map Team) has redone all of the campeign and has added new skins, texures, weapons, better AI, and weather to the original Halo campeign. The best thing is that they stayed on the original story line and none of that has changed. If anyone is interested please visit here.

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Anyway how is it goin with the story is the next chapter almost ready to post? PLEASE HURRY!!!! (did i mention that this needs to get published??)



-Spartan

  • 06.16.2006 5:29 AM PDT
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rainman im waiting for the next chapter every freakin day plz hry!

  • 06.16.2006 6:20 AM PDT
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I just started reading your fanfic a few days ago and I love it. I know that you must be getting tired of people saying "this rocks" and "this is l33t", but it is. I read quite a bit and I am impressed at the amount of thought and voice you have put into this writing. If you ever do plan to go somewhere with this, then you should add a bit more detail. I am not saying that it does not have a lot of detail already, but most books that end up being published have an excessive amount of detail . . . maybe even too much at times. Yours however, seem to have the right amount of detail or there lacking. I have seen that you have been asking for advice, so the only tweak that I can make is maybe extend the story a bit by writing about the characters inner feelings more. Besides that, you have just the right amount of detail.

P.S. Great story!

  • 06.16.2006 9:27 PM PDT
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Also, your grammar and punctuation are great, 98% of the time (a lot better than most people in today's world). You don't repeat mistakes however, which leads me to believe that you know how to correct these things, which is a great thing. I am sure that you are just like me, that when you write something long that you tend to speed read threw your checking and you miss a few things. As I said before, I do the SAME thing all the time. Anyway, great story, keep it up man!

  • 06.16.2006 9:32 PM PDT
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763!

  • 06.16.2006 9:33 PM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Thanks for the advice. I do try to add detail, but It is a little hard when being pressured for updates.

Nah... I'm just kidding, I'll try to add a little more.

  • 06.17.2006 4:39 AM PDT
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Posted by: Rainman89
Thanks for the advice. I do try to add detail, but It is a little hard when being pressured for updates.

Nah... I'm just kidding, I'll try to add a little more.


Don't feel occupied to do so on my account, it is your writing.

  • 06.17.2006 2:35 PM PDT

Eat, drink, and be merry, for tomorrow we die.


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If only halofreak were here he would know what to do.

  • 06.18.2006 7:25 AM PDT
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Semper Fi
Perry USMC-My Gamertag
The GRAND poll/thread "We want online co-op for Halo 3": http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=8204108

Support it and you will support online co-op for Halo 3!


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I've read all your posts and haven't messaged you till i got to the end. It's an awesome book I tell you. I promise you that if you find a publisher they will automatically like it. I'm serious.Your rich just not knowing it yet! But great book,and i was wondering if there will be a sgt.johnson ever coming in since i seen Jacob Keyes...just maybe he isn't a sgt. yet.....

[Edited on 6/18/2006]

  • 06.18.2006 12:52 PM PDT

Eat, drink, and be merry, for tomorrow we die.


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You know something skip you get alot of these suggestions. Are your going to try too get this published when you're done writing it?

  • 06.18.2006 6:19 PM PDT
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I think I am convulsing waiting for this chapter. O.o

  • 06.19.2006 2:12 AM PDT
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that was awesome

  • 06.19.2006 3:59 AM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Posted by: RedWingPredator
I think I am convulsing waiting for this chapter. O.o


Update today. I promise. And when I think its done, I will try to get it published. I may eventually release an edited version to you guys. I figure this story needs a rewrite or two.

  • 06.19.2006 4:36 AM PDT

Eat, drink, and be merry, for tomorrow we die.


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Well writing from my school's computer lab I can only hope that when I get home at 12:45 there will be an update. And if there's not I'll feed my cat and play Perfect Dark Zero.

  • 06.19.2006 8:02 AM PDT
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um Mr. Rainman.................its like 5:30 EST and THE UPDATE IS STILL NOT OUT!!!!!!!!!!!! Please hurry with as least haste as possible.




-Spartan

  • 06.19.2006 2:20 PM PDT