- last post: 01.01.0001 12:00 AM PDT
Also, your grammar and punctuation are great, 98% of the time (a lot better than most people in today's world). You don't repeat mistakes however, which leads me to believe that you know how to correct these things, which is a great thing. I am sure that you are just like me, that when you write something long that you tend to speed read threw your checking and you miss a few things. As I said before, I do the SAME thing all the time. Anyway, great story, keep it up man!