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Hey, Hey guys! I've just finished my first ever movie! Would you mind checkin' it out?

Please leave a comment ON YOUTUBE, or here.. Tell me what you think of it..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ovzx95Yd9mM

IMPORTANT: If the only thing you're gunna say is: "That sucked", then don't say anything.. I do not need comments like that, i need comments like this: "Not so good, the music was boring".. Just an example..

IMPORTANT: This is my very first movie, and i just want to say it's not that good, because i do not have the right equipment to make a movie.

For the first: I'm from Norway so my English isn't perfect.
Second of all: I do not have the best equipment for making movies, i use a built in webcam to record with, and Windows Movie Maker to make the movie with.
Lastly: This is my first ever movie, i will probably get better by time.. (Or maybe not, lol)

Please help me make my future movies better..


Kris


EDIT: Many people may find the beginning of the movie boring, because i talk alot about what has happened before. This will not, and i repeat, WILL NOT happen again. It was just to tell a little more about the story.


EDIT: My other threads:
Possible Armory parts for Reach
Music during Matchmakin searching


[Edited on 06.08.2010 6:04 AM PDT]

  • 05.24.2010 4:17 AM PDT

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Overall for your first movie I like it, really the only part I did not like is that it was very slow at the beginning.

  • 05.24.2010 4:32 AM PDT
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Yes, i know :P

But, as said.. it's just there to explain what HAS happened before.. it will not happen again :)

Thank you for feedback :)

  • 05.24.2010 4:39 AM PDT

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Funny how there seems to be a cloud man in the clouds.

Okay, the vocal need a more sense of urgency. They seem a bit non-spontaneous. Militarize your radio communications also. Use words like. Lima Bravo, are you there? Over. (example) Things like that will be more convincing. Get to know the phonetic alphabet. A= Alpha. B+Bravo etc.

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  • 05.24.2010 11:23 PM PDT
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Posted by: Delta 15t
Funny how there seems to be a cloud man in the clouds.

Okay, the vocal need a more sense of urgency. They seem a bit non-spontaneous. Militarize your radio communications also. Use words like. Lima Bravo, are you there? Over. (example) Things like that will be more convincing. Get to know the phonetic alphabet. A= Alpha. B+Bravo etc.


Thank you for very, very good feedback! :P

I've never really thought about that.. I will use the "Over" thing in other videos, that's for sure.. i'll also try to add these other things..

Thanks again, this really helps!

  • 05.25.2010 9:22 AM PDT
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i think it's awesome! :)

  • 05.27.2010 5:52 AM PDT
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i think it's awesome! :)


Thanks.. :P

  • 05.27.2010 11:51 AM PDT
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Heh, that was pretty cool. I like it :)
As far as suggestions...
What was pointed out earlier makes sence, though i actually liked the intro but perchapse don't talk, describe every action you make eg. Uh Oh an Elite, i'm going to take him out ! could do with out the " i'm going to take him out" part and so on. (i'm sure you'll get better) Also, not sure if you do it already but watch it yourself a few times and forget that You made it... you know ?
Other than that the only thing i would suggest is:
Don't film in forge o_O
rather do it in customs, objects show the little placement markers.

Over all I liked it, good job

  • 05.27.2010 2:07 PM PDT
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Posted by: D1Mik
Heh, that was pretty cool. I like it :)
As far as suggestions...
What was pointed out earlier makes sence, though i actually liked the intro but perchapse don't talk, describe every action you make eg. Uh Oh an Elite, i'm going to take him out ! could do with out the " i'm going to take him out" part and so on. (i'm sure you'll get better) Also, not sure if you do it already but watch it yourself a few times and forget that You made it... you know ?
Other than that the only thing i would suggest is:
Don't film in forge o_O
rather do it in customs, objects show the little placement markers.

Over all I liked it, good job


Thanks for good feedback! :)

  • 05.29.2010 3:13 PM PDT
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Posted by: D1Mik
Heh, that was pretty cool. I like it :)
As far as suggestions...
What was pointed out earlier makes sence, though i actually liked the intro but perchapse don't talk, describe every action you make eg. Uh Oh an Elite, i'm going to take him out ! could do with out the " i'm going to take him out" part and so on. (i'm sure you'll get better) Also, not sure if you do it already but watch it yourself a few times and forget that You made it... you know ?
Other than that the only thing i would suggest is:
Don't film in forge o_O
rather do it in customs, objects show the little placement markers.

Over all I liked it, good job


I feel the same. It almost felt like a preschooler show because you explained everything. It got kind annoying, and almost a little funny at ti8mes. You need to have a more sense of urgency as well.

Other than that, not bad.

  • 05.29.2010 5:45 PM PDT
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Hehe, okay :P

  • 05.31.2010 8:33 AM PDT

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Yeah, there was a bit too much explanation in that video, and some dialogue was unnecessary, but I liked the story and characters. I expect more great videos. BTW I subscribed to your channel. I'm R&N2010 on youtube.

  • 05.31.2010 10:00 AM PDT
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Yeah, there was a bit too much explanation in that video, and some dialogue was unnecessary, but I liked the story and characters. I expect more great videos. BTW I subscribed to your channel. I'm R&N2010 on youtube.


Thank you for subscribing! :) - I am in progress of making the next movie now, but i still need a voice changer.. So i'll have to wait for that.. Anyway.. i will soon make some other movies.. (not related to Halo CoTM). Just some small comedy movies.. but i'm still looking for some voice actors.. so.. yeah :P

I'll probably upload a little video soon, where i'll explain more..

Kris

  • 06.07.2010 6:00 AM PDT

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If you're looking for voice or video actors, I could do it. I have an Xbox Live account, a Skype account(Skype could be used to record voices for people who can't come to your house) and a lot of time on my hands.

  • 06.07.2010 1:12 PM PDT
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Posted by: kingwrench
If you're looking for voice or video actors, I could do it. I have an Xbox Live account, a Skype account(Skype could be used to record voices for people who can't come to your house) and a lot of time on my hands.


Okay, just send me a message on Xbox Live, and just talk a little, so that i can hear what you sound like..

My gametag is Kris Eike

  • 06.08.2010 6:01 AM PDT