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Do you know the muffin man???
(I don't)
Posted by: D1Mik
Heh, that was pretty cool. I like it :)
As far as suggestions...
What was pointed out earlier makes sence, though i actually liked the intro but perchapse don't talk, describe every action you make eg. Uh Oh an Elite, i'm going to take him out ! could do with out the " i'm going to take him out" part and so on. (i'm sure you'll get better) Also, not sure if you do it already but watch it yourself a few times and forget that You made it... you know ?
Other than that the only thing i would suggest is:
Don't film in forge o_O
rather do it in customs, objects show the little placement markers.
Over all I liked it, good job
I feel the same. It almost felt like a preschooler show because you explained everything. It got kind annoying, and almost a little funny at ti8mes. You need to have a more sense of urgency as well.
Other than that, not bad.