- Ramen King Jake
- |
- Noble Member
Posted by: Delta 15t
Posted by: Ramen King Jake
Thanks, I'll keep those ideas in mind for future productions.
The concept is good, someone stealing a relic, classic suspense thriller. Just put more thrill into it and develop the story a bit more. Also, put some more mystery into it. Who stole the relic is too quickly revealed.
I understand what you're getting at, and thanks for the suggestion. But the whole idea of it, was that it was stupidly obvious who stole the relic.