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Subject: [Story] A Story of Redemption. (Please help with title)

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"It's Afghanistanimation!"

NOTE: I will be posting more and more chapters of this story based on popularity until it is finished. Please leave comments about what you thought of it! And keep them clean and civil! No need to be mean :D VOICE OVER COMMING SOON!

DAY 2: 4 HOURS TO DEADLINE.

He stood still. The street light hanging above him coated his body with a ominous glow. Looking down at the package in hand, he loosened his grip upon it. His mind was telling him "you're going to die". After numerous deep breaths he tightened his grip on the package and continued onward; completely oblivious to what lays ahead.
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2 DAYS EARLIER.

Fear overcame his mind. Holding the two cubed shaped objects in hand; he told himself "just one last roll". The spectators that surrounded him stood in silence. His legs grew week, his stomach churned. It was his time. His time to roll. With all of his determination, and all of his will he tossed the dice! From one end to the next he built anticipation, his adrenalin pumping. A spectator screamed "if they land on his numbers, he wins half a million"

They stopped rolling. He is on the verge of tears from the anticipation. The dealer screamed out "two fives". Exactly what he had hoped for! The crowd erupted into shouts of applause. The man climbed the table and began to dance. Two giant looking men grabbed him. One arm on each one of their hands. They dragged him away. All the wile he shouted "let me go, where are you taking me". Nobody dared touch the two men. For they where "made men". They dragged him into a darkly lit room, with a chair sitting under a lamp. Picking him up and setting him in the chair they made him swallow a few pills. Slowly he began to fall into a sort of slumber. Within minutes he was unconscious.



[Edited on 05.27.2010 1:38 PM PDT]

  • 05.27.2010 12:44 PM PDT