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Subject: Acceleron Wars (Machinima)

help bring back Generator Defense
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Hey this is a machinima my friends and I are working on please tell me what you think. This is only a Pilot TEST episode it is still a work in progress please no flames respectful criticism is welcome to improve quality but please keep it respectful thank you
All flames on you tube will be removed

Note: this is not the completed episode

Episode story: After a surprise attack on one of their mobile bases in the 'Acceleron' Zone Sandtrap the PDF (Planetary Defense Force) High Command send Zero Prime and Sergeant Corruption to investigate strange energy reading but find something else...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vb9V9qmVLBA

[Edited on 05.30.2010 7:54 PM PDT]

  • 05.30.2010 7:51 PM PDT

How'd you find me?

I haven't seen all of it, but I like the story so far. Some ideas: bring the camera a bit closer and give more up close shots. Like the first scene with the mongooses, do some shots from mid air and up close. And the sword duel could have been cooler if you brought the camera closer. When they're talking, bring the camera up to their faces or gradually zoom in for effect. When they're talking, don't keep the camera at their backs. Still, I like what I've seen so far, keep it up.

[Edited on 05.30.2010 8:07 PM PDT]

  • 05.30.2010 8:04 PM PDT