- kingwrench
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- Noble Member
I haven't seen all of it, but I like the story so far. Some ideas: bring the camera a bit closer and give more up close shots. Like the first scene with the mongooses, do some shots from mid air and up close. And the sword duel could have been cooler if you brought the camera closer. When they're talking, bring the camera up to their faces or gradually zoom in for effect. When they're talking, don't keep the camera at their backs. Still, I like what I've seen so far, keep it up.
[Edited on 05.30.2010 8:07 PM PDT]