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Subject: Rate My Story!!
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2 Billion years earlier lurked an evil. An Evil that came from hell. With one sword he took over the world. This demon then meet an angel. They had the ultimate face off, blood everywhere. They killed each other . The angel had no head and the demon was cut in half. The war was over. This was very bloody. 1 Billion years later the demon was reborned and....

Rate my story by 1-10. And if you want tell me what you thought!

[Edited on 8/3/2004 3:36:54 PM]

  • 08.03.2004 3:35 PM PDT
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Kinda Lame. Hmm could be cool. Just need to be more descriptive. In other work is was short. But hey if it was long i probably wouldn't of read it. Also it was to violent. There could be kids reading this. J/K

So i give it a 7 for trying!

[Edited on 8/3/2004 3:42:23 PM]

  • 08.03.2004 3:41 PM PDT
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neagtive= -
Your story equals= Total crap man I give it a -infinte

  • 08.03.2004 3:42 PM PDT
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A perfect 10.

Brilliant!

  • 08.03.2004 3:45 PM PDT
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5

  • 08.03.2004 3:49 PM PDT
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Short and very generic

  • 08.03.2004 3:50 PM PDT
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6....you need to be more descriptive

  • 08.03.2004 3:51 PM PDT