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Here is a thing I made: Linkage
Here is a Leet I made: Link BLARGH
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Posted by: External Memory
The line weight (light or dark and width) all seem the same, with the councilor the plasma rifle appears connected to the leg behind it, not in front of it. Sketching the all the contours lightly with a very sharp 2H pencil first might help avoid this, you can always use a pink pearl to pick up the lines. Don't lean on it or choke up on the pencil too much.
Also, the tone of the different parts should be distinguishable from the tone of the shadows, but it just seems like some parts are a darker color instead of in shadow. You might have an easier time if you start off really light with the tone (Use an F or HB pencil), then build up the shadows with more graphite. Don't go nuts filling in the tone of the paper, just use the side of a softer pencil (a 3 or 4B) if you have one, or go over it with the side of your pencil a few more times if you're just only have a #2. You can always pick up areas of tone with a kneaded eraser, I'd highly recommend picking one up if you haven't already.Thanks for the feeback! I appreciate it... but I don't know anything about pencils. I just used a mechanical pencil.