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Subject: Amazing walpapper!

I'm Luis an a video editor, writer, and soon Director.
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This walpapper was made it by me.
the earth is reflected in his helmet, dirty and full of blood.

There is "It was..."

Also has a short poem for the earth, that i made.

This is:
"Our quirks, were our weakness.
Our selfishness, were our undoing.
Our defense, were our self-destruccion.
Our dream became a nightmare.

It was... an amazing planet."

[Edited on 06.12.2010 11:55 AM PDT]

  • 06.11.2010 8:33 PM PDT

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You can do some work on the rendering and lighting, but otherwise I like it.

  • 06.11.2010 8:35 PM PDT

I'm Luis an a video editor, writer, and soon Director.
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I agree...

  • 06.11.2010 8:37 PM PDT

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The reflection looks really good, and I like the way you worked the text into the image. But I agree that you need to work on lighting and cutting your renders out.
Nice work.

  • 06.11.2010 10:39 PM PDT

What a hipster.

I really like it.

  • 06.12.2010 6:15 AM PDT

I'm Luis an a video editor, writer, and soon Director.
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Posted by: COL0NEL SANDERS
The reflection looks really good, and I like the way you worked the text into the image. But I agree that you need to work on lighting and cutting your renders out.
Nice work.


thanks everyone. (:
Next time, i will fix:
1.-"were" and "was"
2.- light's

[Edited on 06.13.2010 4:11 PM PDT]

  • 06.12.2010 11:29 AM PDT

i like you poem. but the mixing of singular and plural kinda throws me off. i understand its a poem so that can just be the way its "supposed to be".
but:
our quirk, was our weakness
&
our quirks, were our weaknesses

both sound a bit weird, i dont maybe its the best the way it is. Anyways it good.

  • 06.12.2010 11:34 AM PDT

I'm Luis an a video editor, writer, and soon Director.
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Posted by: Empire of Minds
i like you poem. but the mixing of singular and plural kinda throws me off. i understand its a poem so that can just be the way its "supposed to be".
but:
our quirk, was our weakness
&
our quirks, were our weaknesses

both sound a bit weird, i dont maybe its the best the way it is. Anyways it good.


I need improve my english...
I use a translator and I forget to singular and plural.

  • 06.12.2010 11:41 AM PDT
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The poem written on it is a little out of place and hard to read.

  • 06.19.2010 5:54 PM PDT
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Nice... I think it turned out really well, but I think you should find another place to place the text. ^_^

  • 06.20.2010 1:57 PM PDT