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Ive been working on this Jackal sketch for the past hour or so. and im about halfway done. The jackal isnt 100% true to what they look like, but I was bored so i decided to make some "alterations". I have the legs done in faint pencil just for an idea of what i want the legs to look like. (so i dont screw it up when i do it in pen)

Tell me what you think.

http://groups.msn.com/Catastrophic/counterpartconceptsketches .msnw?action=ShowPhoto&PhotoID=237


  • 05.01.2004 4:25 PM PDT
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Which one is it?

  • 05.01.2004 4:26 PM PDT
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woops, fixed the link so it doesnt show the rest of my work.

heres one solely of the jackal

http://groups.msn.com/Catastrophic/jackal.msnw?action=ShowPho to&PhotoID=238

  • 05.01.2004 4:28 PM PDT
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Looks like an elite with an shield to me ! He's just got a plasma pistol thats all
Well done!

[Edited on 5/1/2004 4:33:13 PM]

  • 05.01.2004 4:32 PM PDT
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for some reason i didnt think of it that way lol. but i think ur right now that i look at it harder lol.

  • 05.01.2004 4:34 PM PDT
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I think it looks good. I like that shield, but the face is what people like me call, "Different."

  • 05.01.2004 4:36 PM PDT
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should i make changes in the legs?
or should i keep it like that? except put more detail in it with the pen?

  • 05.01.2004 4:41 PM PDT
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bump

  • 05.01.2004 6:17 PM PDT
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keep the legs, make changes to the upper body and head, looks too much like an elite up there

  • 05.01.2004 6:20 PM PDT
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Nice work, but it does kind of look like an Elite's head...

Oh well, it's WAY better than anything I could do.

And, Lazy Link

  • 05.01.2004 6:20 PM PDT
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Arrrgh! Don't bump! I think the best thing to do is to change the back, it looks kinda hunched

  • 05.01.2004 6:24 PM PDT
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i wish i could change it. its done in pen and then scanned. it started out as more of a doodle rather than "trying" to make it look like a Jackal.

But thanks for the comments.

  • 05.01.2004 6:28 PM PDT