By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.
Aha! Finally got my laptop back to watch this, I was very impressed by the cinematography and the way the camera was used in some shots (especially with the aerial battles and the Ghosts). Plus, the special effects were completely seamless, very well put into the machinima - especially the Phantom, which I can tell a lot of work went in to.
The music wasn't as good though, I liked hearing a track from Steve Jablonsky, but from there I think soundtrack choice was a little poor. I feel there would be better orchestrated tracks to relay the image of loss and destruction.
One thing about machinima I never have high hopes for is the voice acting, however you had a great cast of voice actors which was pulled off nicely.
Overall, a very good job, well done. I am anticipating your next work.