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Subject: My First Montage

When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace

Check it out

let me know what you think as it is my first one I would like constructive criticism for it

  • 07.04.2010 12:13 AM PDT

How'd you find me?

There's a bit too much sniping in there, keep it fresh with weaponry and tactics. Still, very good first montage, you did a great job.

  • 07.04.2010 6:56 AM PDT

What a waste....

Really good job man. Might want to have less single kills and more doubles and triples.

  • 07.05.2010 5:30 PM PDT

When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace

Posted by: Tommy16p
sucky song, too slow at the end, no third person shots. and most of all i cant tell if this is supposed to be a teamtage or one guy.


thanks for the contrusctive criticism...

cause im sure you can do better and of course my first montage is going to be the best montage of all time...

  • 07.12.2010 12:04 AM PDT

BLINK IT UP

Overall not bad, personally I feel there should of been less time between clips, also detaching the camera so we see the sticks would have been a cool feature, I do agree some variety would've be nice, and slowing the clips down at the end was unnecessary, but it was a nice layed back montage.


[Edited on 07.12.2010 12:35 AM PDT]

  • 07.12.2010 12:29 AM PDT

watch my Third Goosetage, it is my best.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QAFMvMZ7JyI

The problem wasn't to many snipes (all though there were in a row) there were to many average snipes, not that they weren't nice just, not really anything that special or cool. Try not to use over used songs, I know this is difficult to do without somebody saying that you stole a song from somebody's montage, but just don't use any that are really over used. Clips were nice but never, never, put griff ball or infection clips in a montage, unless its like a super insane hammer a mongoose and it fly's up in the air and splatters a dude 40 seconds later type of clip. Showing all the clips in slow mo did get really repetitive and boring as it dragged out (also really nice tripple mongoose splatter!). But I can't say much because when ever I do a montage I never edit during the montage, usually just the opening then I just sync the song and clips.




Other then all that it was pretty decent for a first montage, like the intro, certain clips kept me entertained through out it. Overall I'd give it a 3.5 outa 5.

  • 07.12.2010 12:51 AM PDT

I sort of agree with gatorboy regarding the song, but i feel a little different about why. When that last song is used in duality it gets quite intense and the clips and editing are perfect, and in yours, the clips dont quite justify the intensity of the music. Other than that my opinion should probably be ignored, because single snipes annoy me, and i can't see them being put in a montage unless they are insane. So i wouldn't rate your montage very high at all.

  • 07.16.2010 2:52 AM PDT

A MAN WANDERING THE WORLD WITH A PURPOSE, HAS NO REASON TO BE WANDERING AT ALL.

Very nicely done!

  • 07.16.2010 4:32 PM PDT

Battlefield 3 MASTER RACE
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I program games, that's all you need to know.

The song wasn't my type but maybe that's just me.

Way to much no scoping. No scoping is something I get in every game.

Little third person takes

More editing

Not enough multi kills higher than a triple kill.

Everything else was okay. You can see my montage trailerhere.


[Edited on 07.17.2010 1:46 AM PDT]

  • 07.17.2010 1:42 AM PDT