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Subject: My idea for the opening of HALO:REACH. please read.

Damn snipers!!!

I have now read the books...

your stupid makes my brain sad

Posted by: PETEYENG
The only things is about Noble 6 talking. He would have a preset voice and not be us. We are Noble 6 so the voice thing would kind of throw us off.


not sure i follow you.
are saying Noble 6 wont talk? MC does..

  • 07.11.2010 2:35 PM PDT

Damn snipers!!!

I have now read the books...

your stupid makes my brain sad

Posted by: spartain ken 15
Good into, I do think Halsey will be introduced in Reach but not at the beginning. She didn't truly know about the spartan 3 project.


youre kinda right but..

1) would it break canon entirely? i dont remember all the details of GHOSTS of ONYX.

2) if so make it someone else...the head of the SIII project?

  • 07.11.2010 2:41 PM PDT

J-H

Posted by: ceebee r
Posted by: spartain ken 15
Good into, I do think Halsey will be introduced in Reach but not at the beginning. She didn't truly know about the spartan 3 project.


youre kinda right but..

1) would it break canon entirely? i dont remember all the details of GHOSTS of ONYX.

2) if so make it someone else...the head of the SIII project?

It would destroy canon. Another thing that would destroy canon would be having a MARINE medic... The only units that took part in the battle of Pegassi Delta were S3s, not Marines. Besides those few things, it's a good read but it might be throwing some of the newer players in at the deep end: "QUICK! FIGHT OFF LOADS OF INVISBLE, SWORD-WIELDING ELITES AS YOUR FIRST 10 SECONDS OF GAMEPLAY!".

  • 07.11.2010 2:47 PM PDT
Subject: My fan-fic HALO:REACH. more on page 2...more to come.

my emblem says how I feel.

Posted by: IExiiLeZz
if bungie aint makin it, i aint takin it.


Link to a michinima artists holy grail:
http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=53904519

tat was beautiful

Edit: story removed 'cause I am not getting ban'd 2day,
nor am I in the mood to.

[Edited on 07.12.2010 1:39 PM PDT]

  • 07.11.2010 2:49 PM PDT
Subject: My idea for the opening of HALO:REACH.....

Just remember that no matter how terrible you feel, or how much you want to let go, there are people who care about you and love you.

Halsey would not have known about the S3s yet but other than that it was ok.

  • 07.11.2010 2:54 PM PDT
Subject: My idea for the opening of HALO:REACH. please read.

Damn snipers!!!

I have now read the books...

your stupid makes my brain sad

Posted by: MasterJh
Posted by: ceebee r
Posted by: spartain ken 15
Good into, I do think Halsey will be introduced in Reach but not at the beginning. She didn't truly know about the spartan 3 project.


youre kinda right but..

1) would it break canon entirely? i dont remember all the details of GHOSTS of ONYX.

2) if so make it someone else...the head of the SIII project?

It would destroy canon. Another thing that would destroy canon would be having a MARINE medic... The only units that took part in the battle of Pegassi Delta were S3s, not Marines. Besides those few things, it's a good read but it might be throwing some of the newer players in at the deep end: "QUICK! FIGHT OFF LOADS OF INVISBLE, SWORD-WIELDING ELITES AS YOUR FIRST 10 SECONDS OF GAMEPLAY!".


thanks for the input.
i see about the marine, but thats easily corrected. i mean there are survivers, so howd they get off planet? my image is ALMOST all spartans in the battle but air support and the likes would still be present. even if it doesnt follow the book exactly,bungie said this game doesnt follow FoR, so why would it have to follow Onyx?

and the "deep end", again good point but i would add some combat on the way to his squad to warm the player up. actually considerd this right after i made it. im going to edit that in now.

other wise i think it fits.

  • 07.11.2010 3:02 PM PDT
Subject: My idea for the opening of HALO:REACH.....

Ohh yeah

I want to hear moar!!!!!
Why don't you write the end??
You are a great writer LOL

  • 07.11.2010 3:12 PM PDT

my emblem says how I feel.

Posted by: IExiiLeZz
if bungie aint makin it, i aint takin it.


Link to a michinima artists holy grail:
http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=53904519

wa bout me?

  • 07.11.2010 3:13 PM PDT

Damn snipers!!!

I have now read the books...

your stupid makes my brain sad

Posted by: Rasconicov
I want to hear moar!!!!!
Why don't you write the end??
You are a great writer LOL


LOL...yea right.. im gonna get out some "moar" just thinking of a topic.

every one save this thread.

  • 07.11.2010 3:17 PM PDT

my emblem says how I feel.

Posted by: IExiiLeZz
if bungie aint makin it, i aint takin it.


Link to a michinima artists holy grail:
http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=53904519

Saved.

  • 07.11.2010 3:18 PM PDT
Subject: My fan-fic for the opening of HALO:REACH. please read.

Damn snipers!!!

I have now read the books...

your stupid makes my brain sad

Posted by: aaahhhoooiiii
tat was beautiful

But here' what I think:

Spartan: 293 jumps out of the helicopter and looks around
it then switches 2 first person
com: 293 get over here! we are pinned down!
you proceed to move over to the way point.
A firefight ensues, afterwhich is another cutscene
carter goes over to the warty and inspects it as he crouches down to take a look at the huge hole now in the side an elite comes out of active cam and lunges for carter.
you being the closest to him attempt to get to him only to be stopped by kat.
Carter finds a nearby sword and blocks it, however he falls to the ground.
you break from kat's grasp and as the elite tries to stab Carter you jump in front of the sword.
you get stabbed, however you in your final moment of glory
pull out a magnum and empty the whole clip into the elites face,
he falls dead, and you begin to stumble
you fall to the ground and only carter rushes to your aid,
the others look on in stunned silence.

the cutscene ends.


cool, is this in addition to mine or alternate?

did noble team have contact with the covenant before reach? i was thinking S-293 died in some other battle with rebels or something. or was it an off planet mission?

  • 07.11.2010 3:21 PM PDT

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nice, although there were no marines on pegasi nor did any spartan 3's have MJOLNIR armor.

  • 07.11.2010 3:26 PM PDT

my emblem says how I feel.

Posted by: IExiiLeZz
if bungie aint makin it, i aint takin it.


Link to a michinima artists holy grail:
http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=53904519

addition/separate uh...
maybe how 293 dies that also explains why carter and kat blame themselves

Edit: And I have no Idea how he dies, I just made this up...

[Edited on 07.11.2010 3:28 PM PDT]

  • 07.11.2010 3:27 PM PDT

Damn snipers!!!

I have now read the books...

your stupid makes my brain sad

Posted by: hal0 slay3r661
nice, although there were no marines on pegasi nor did any spartan 3's have MJOLNIR armor.


book wise your correct, but bungie can/has...danced....around the book canon before. they have MJOLNIR now so what if 312s squad was special in that regards?

also what if this was happening towards the end of the fight and it was an extraction effort.

most people playing havent read the books but they may have heard the pegasi quote. it could be accurate if bungie said it was.

  • 07.11.2010 3:34 PM PDT

my emblem says how I feel.

Posted by: IExiiLeZz
if bungie aint makin it, i aint takin it.


Link to a michinima artists holy grail:
http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=53904519

I am animating my story, I'll post again when done
Edit: nvm I cant animate 2day

[Edited on 07.11.2010 4:18 PM PDT]

  • 07.11.2010 3:47 PM PDT

Damn snipers!!!

I have now read the books...

your stupid makes my brain sad

....fade in


two falcons carrying noble team race away from the last mission.

jorge;"well that was fun"
jun;"what, you dont like cutting those alien bastards to pieces?"
emile;"hmmph"
kat; comander, why do i get the feeling we're fighting a losing battle?
carter;"when arent we fighting a losing battle,kat?"
emile;"hmmph"
jun;"anyone ever tell you you talk too much?"
emile; stares at jun.
carter; "you got any ideas leutentant?"
kat looks at noble 6....
"tell us more about project SABRE."


falcons fly off into the setting sun...
fade out.

fade in...

the two falcons are seen from an above angle

carter;"you sure this will work,kat?
kat;"as well as any of my other plans."
jun;"well now i feel all warm and fuzzy."

jun and emile's falcon splits off to the left and speeds out of view.

carter;"good luck spartans"
emile;"you too sir"
jun;"do you ever shut up?"
emile; stares at jun......

jorge;" lets go over this one more time...those two geniuses are going the steal some covenant aircraft, slip aboard one of their communication ships, lay out the red carpet for us and we just stroll on board and knock out their comms on the surface?.....
kat;"yup"
carter;"we downloaded enough intel from the Pillar of Autumn's A.I. to be able to decipher the covenant controls and lower the shields long enough for us to get on board.
jorge;"ok...just asking"
we then pick up the mission "Long night at Solace"

here

after you finish the mission to defend the UNSC cruisers, a voice comes over the comm." thanks for the help sabre team" we can handle it from here....im sure you have more important things to do.

kat;"SIX, you should be picking up jun's nav marker, thats where we're headed.

you turn and as kat and carters sabre comes into view, so does a massive covenant comm ship swarming with saraphs and banshees.

carter;"jun and emile are so far udetected....all we have to do is fight our way in close enough and they'll lower the shields, so we can land in the hangar...
jorge;"is that all???"
carter;"once we land, our secret will be out, and we can expect a welcome party.
jorge;"its about time...i hate flying."

more dogfighting.....

*check point reached*

\cut scene\.
the two sabres bank sharply towards the covenant ship..a shimmer can be seen around a large opening.

the ships enter the bay and land... the spartans jump out, and level there weapons, scanning the bay for movement....

kat;"comander, movement on the other side of that door.
jorge;"lets do this"

kat moves to the controls for the door.....

carter;"six.. youre on point"

you move to a nav marker at he door.

\cut scene\.
still first persone view....

the door opens... you step foward...a large skull fills your view......you're gun barrel to gun barrel with emile.....

jun leans out from behind emile.......
"welcome"

emile gives you a slight nod as you walk into the room.
carter;" nice work you two, you make such a good team"
emile;"hmph"
jun;"dude seriously"
kat;"you got any more friends on this ship?"
jun;"no...why?"
kat;"then the welcome party is here...."

\gameplay\
your squad takes possitions facing a large door... the glowing light around it flickers, and it begins to open.........

more to come i need a break.

  • 07.11.2010 4:52 PM PDT
Subject: My fan-fic for the opening of HALO:REACH. more on page 2

BAM said the lady

Posted by: ceebee r
more fic added on page 2

....fade in, a blurred image from a spartan helmet comes into focus...the sound slowly fades in from muffled white noise....a marine medic enters your view...."LT....LT..CAN YOU HEAR ME?....you took quite a hit" you notice your in the middle of a battle(pegasi??)"lets check your armor luetentant"...the pre-requisite focus on the spots ensues..."...ok LT,you seem to be ok. your squad is just over that ridge"....

\game play\
...spartan douglas-312 (my name;)..) sprints across the terain towards a nav point marking his squad... you come across a few small pockets of covenant to fight on the way getting the player some combat exp...(grunts jackles and elites)

*checkpoint reached*

..."[com] S-312 i thought that shot you took was it...glad your on your feet"..."get down here, we're about to......[static]....you see tracer rounds pepper the sky in the valley just out of view..."[com] 312...ITS A TRAP! CLOAKED ELITES WITH THOSE DAMN SWORDS"......." THERE'S TOO MANY...GET OUT OF HERE..{SNARL....WORT..WORT}........AUGGHHHHHHHHHH............ ...".

you clear the ridge to see a dozen kill squad elites standing over your entire team,.....dead.

\cut scene\ they all turn in unison, and stare directly at you and slowly disapear as they charge.

\pick up play\.. you zoom in with your DMR and focus on the ghosly images working there way to you.
after a few kills... [com] "S-312, this is epic thunder. your team is off the scope...we need to get you outa there"...a nav point apears. "get to that nav marker for pick up". you turn and sprint to the extraction point. a falcon touches down in front of you. as you move towards it, a cloaked elite materializes and jumps up on the cockpit,opens the hatch, driving his energy sword into the pilot,lifting him, and tossing him like a rag doll ...you take him out with your DMR. a nav marker points into the falcon. you get in and take off as directions apear telling you how to control it. [com] "spartan 312, i hope you know how to fly that thing, cause youve got bogeys incoming" you begin a short arial combat mission against overwhelming banshees. after a few kills...

\cutscen\ three banshees come in on your six.. you manuver to no avail...plasma bolts pepper your craft as smoke pours out and you crash into a large body of water.. fade into a first person view as you sink into the darkness...fade to black.....

...fade in.
your in the back of a pelican. "the same medic from earlier comes into view. "we've got to stop running into each other like this LT." you sit up..

"the covenant left you for dead..maybe they dont know how to swim" he places his hand on his ear, and listens for a moment... "roger that.....this battle is over leutentant...your lucky to be alive"..."weve got orders to get you out here....someone wants to see you"....
fade out...

you have contol of you charactor..as an elevator opens,revealing a hallway. you walk down it and can control your view. windows on both sides show that your in space on a ship. you enter the door at the end of the hall and look down into a hanger bay at a SABER with people in lab coats working on it.

\cut scene\ you walk towards a balcony over looking the hanger bay...DR. Hasley is standing there...
"i saw what happend to your squad leutentant.....im sorry"
you hear S-312s voice for the first time...
"me too ma'am...you mind telling me what im doing here?"
"not at all douglas...as you know your mjolnir armor is what kept you from drowning on that planet, its also the reason,along with you, so many of the covenant are dead,you did pretty well for your first dogfight".
"whats your point ma'am?
"douglas, what would you say if i told you that shortly after we perfected that armor, that only SPARTANS like yourself can operate, the UNSC decided it was also tired of getting its ass kicked in space?
"ma'am?"

they both walk to the railing and look down at the SABRE.

"think of it as a space fighter version of your armor. only a spartan in mjolnir armor is capble manuvering this thing...."

douglas 312 leans over a little more...

"how do you feel about space combat leutentant?........."

fade to black


the title apears

HALO:REACH

then the anouncement trailer picks up,you race along in your warthog, and the text reads "three years later" (or whatever it would be) and we see the rest of the trailer/cutscene.....

link to get a better feel

just off the top of my head.

this does several things.

explains the "survive pegasi" quote.
explains the "skill set" coment
gives you the training mission.
gets new players up to speed on thier character.
others?....


That was actually very good.

  • 07.11.2010 4:59 PM PDT
Subject: My idea for the opening of HALO:REACH. please read.

BAM said the lady

Posted by: PETEYENG
The only things is about Noble 6 talking. He would have a preset voice and not be us. We are Noble 6 so the voice thing would kind of throw us off.


Bungie said multiple times recently that noble six isnt the silent type and both male and female actors were cast...

  • 07.11.2010 5:01 PM PDT
Subject: My fan-fic for the opening of HALO:REACH. more on page 2

Damn snipers!!!

I have now read the books...

your stupid makes my brain sad



That was actually very good.


thanks..check out my second installment above....

  • 07.11.2010 5:02 PM PDT
Subject: My idea for the opening of HALO:REACH. please read.

Damn snipers!!!

I have now read the books...

your stupid makes my brain sad

Posted by: obbsesedwithhalo
Posted by: PETEYENG
The only things is about Noble 6 talking. He would have a preset voice and not be us. We are Noble 6 so the voice thing would kind of throw us off.


Bungie said multiple times recently that noble six isnt the silent type and both male and female actors were cast...


this

  • 07.11.2010 5:02 PM PDT
Subject: My fan-fic for the opening of HALO:REACH. more on page 2

BAM said the lady

Posted by: ceebee r
....fade in


two falcons carrying noble team race away from the last mission.

jorge;"well that was fun"
jun;"what, you dont like cutting those alien bastards to pieces?"
emile;"hmmph"
kat; comander, why do i get the feeling we're fighting a losing battle?
carter;"when arent we fighting a losing battle,kat?"
emile;"hmmph"
jun;"anyone ever tell you you talk too much?"
emile; stares at jun.
carter; "you got any ideas leutentant?"
kat looks at noble 6....
"tell us more about project SABRE."


falcons fly off into the setting sun...
fade out.

fade in...

the two falcons are seen from an above angle

carter;"you sure this will work,kat?
kat;"as well as any of my other plans."
jun;"well now i feel all warm and fuzzy."

jun and emile's falcon splits off to the left and speeds out of view.

carter;"good luck spartans"
emile;"you too sir"
jun;"do you ever shut up?"
emile; stares at jun......

jorge;" lets go over this one more time...those two geniuses are going the steal some covenant aircraft, slip aboard one of their communication ships, lay out the red carpet for us and we just stroll on board and knock out their comms on the surface?.....
kat;"yup"
carter;"we downloaded enough intel from the Pillar of Autumn's A.I. to be able to decipher the covenant controls and lower the shields long enough for us to get on board.
jorge;"ok...just asking"
we then pick up the mission "Long night at Solace"

here

after you finish the mission to defend the UNSC cruisers, a voice comes over the comm." thanks for the help sabre team" we can handle it from here....im sure you have more important things to do.

kat;"SIX, you should be picking up jun's nav marker, thats where we're headed.

you turn and as kat and carters sabre comes into view, so does a massive covenant comm ship swarming with saraphs and banshees.

carter;"jun and emile are so far udetected....all we have to do is fight our way in close enough and they'll lower the shields, so we can land in the hangar...
jorge;"is that all???"
carter;"once we land, our secret will be out, and we can expect a welcome party.
jorge;"its about time...i hate flying."

more dogfighting.....

*check point reached*

\cut scene\.
the two sabres bank sharply towards the covenant ship..a shimmer can be seen around a large opening.

the ships enter the bay and land... the spartans jump out, and level there weapons, scanning the bay for movement....

kat;"comander, movement on the other side of that door.
jorge;"lets do this"

kat moves to the controls for the door.....

carter;"six.. youre on point"

you move to a nav marker at he door.

\cut scene\.
still first persone view....

the door opens... you step foward...a large skull fills your view......you're gun barrel to gun barrel with emile.....

jun leans out from behind emile.......
"welcome"

emile gives you a slight nod as you walk into the room.
carter;" nice work you two, you make such a good team"
emile;"hmph"
jun;"dude seriously"
kat;"you got any more friends on this ship?"
jun;"no...why?"
kat;"then the welcome party is here...."

\gameplay\
your squad takes possitions facing a large door... the glowing light around it flickers, and it begins to open.........

more to come i need a break.



Again very good haha I loved the relationship you made between Emile and Jun

[Edited on 07.11.2010 5:07 PM PDT]

  • 07.11.2010 5:07 PM PDT

Cool Story, Bro.

Its a Trap!

  • 07.11.2010 5:09 PM PDT

BAM said the lady

Don't let this one die guys we got a winner...

  • 07.11.2010 5:10 PM PDT

BAM said the lady

I want to hear more... hurry up and type!!!!!!!!! haha

  • 07.11.2010 5:11 PM PDT

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