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Subject: My fan-fic for the opening of HALO:REACH. please read.

R.I.P. Halo 2

Are you sure you that this is a fan-fic? I'm beginning to think you work for Bungie.

  • 07.11.2010 5:12 PM PDT

BAM said the lady

Posted by: Noob off duty
Are you sure you that this is a fan-fic? I'm beginning to think you work for Bungie.


Haha true dat haha, Oh and I help keep this thread alive!

  • 07.11.2010 5:13 PM PDT
Subject: My fan-fic for the opening of HALO:REACH. more on page 2

Damn snipers!!!

I have now read the books...

your stupid makes my brain sad



Again very good haha I loved the relationship you made between Emile and Jun


thats how i see those two...the whole "b.A. barakus and murdock thing from the A-TEAM.

possibly jorge and emile instead.

  • 07.11.2010 5:14 PM PDT

props ; ) You should work for bungie, that stuff was amazing!

  • 07.11.2010 5:14 PM PDT
Subject: My fan-fic for the opening of HALO:REACH. please read.

Damn snipers!!!

I have now read the books...

your stupid makes my brain sad

Posted by: obbsesedwithhalo
Posted by: Noob off duty
Are you sure you that this is a fan-fic? I'm beginning to think you work for Bungie.


Haha true dat haha, Oh and I help keep this thread alive!


i wish...id be playing reach now....lol

but thank you so much for the input.

  • 07.11.2010 5:33 PM PDT
Subject: My fan-fic for the opening of HALO:REACH. more on page 2

"The one that fears nothing, is feared by all."

Just a few problems, but the biggest was that Dr. Halsey never knew of the S-III

  • 07.11.2010 5:39 PM PDT

Damn snipers!!!

I have now read the books...

your stupid makes my brain sad

Posted by: XiS ZXZCesarZXZ
Just a few problems, but the biggest was that Dr. Halsey never knew of the S-III


well i dont remember the details of that book too well, but i think it could fall under the "we dont know that she knows" category. if you follow my meaning.

bungies isnt following FoR, so it could dance around Ghosts of Onyx....imo

  • 07.11.2010 5:49 PM PDT

cool

  • 07.11.2010 5:57 PM PDT

Michael Miller

Nice it was a amazing story

  • 07.11.2010 5:59 PM PDT

BAM said the lady

Posted by: ceebee r
Posted by: XiS ZXZCesarZXZ
Just a few problems, but the biggest was that Dr. Halsey never knew of the S-III


well i dont remember the details of that book too well, but i think it could fall under the "we dont know that she knows" category. if you follow my meaning.

bungies isnt following FoR, so it could dance around Ghosts of Onyx....imo


WHERE IS PART 3??? haha

  • 07.11.2010 6:57 PM PDT
Subject: My fan-fic for the opening of HALO:REACH. please read.

Damn snipers!!!

I have now read the books...

your stupid makes my brain sad

Posted by: ceebee r
....fade in


two falcons carrying noble team race away from the last mission.

jorge;"well that was fun"
jun;"what, you dont like cutting those alien bastards to pieces?"
emile;"hmmph"
kat; comander, why do i get the feeling we're fighting a losing battle?
carter;"when arent we fighting a losing battle,kat?"
emile;"hmmph"
jun;"anyone ever tell you you talk too much?"
emile; stares at jun.
carter; "you got any ideas leutentant?"
kat looks at noble 6....
"tell us more about project SABRE."


falcons fly off into the setting sun...
fade out.

fade in...

the two falcons are seen from an above angle

carter;"you sure this will work,kat?
kat;"as well as any of my other plans."
jun;"well now i feel all warm and fuzzy."

jun and emile's falcon splits off to the left and speeds out of view.

carter;"good luck spartans"
emile;"you too sir"
jun;"do you ever shut up?"
emile; stares at jun......

jorge;" lets go over this one more time...those two geniuses are going the steal some covenant aircraft, slip aboard one of their communication ships, lay out the red carpet for us and we just stroll on board and knock out their comms on the surface?.....
kat;"yup"
carter;"we downloaded enough intel from the Pillar of Autumn's A.I. to be able to decipher the covenant controls and lower the shields long enough for us to get on board.
jorge;"ok...just asking"
we then pick up the mission "Long night at Solace"

here

after you finish the mission to defend the UNSC cruisers, a voice comes over the comm." thanks for the help sabre team" we can handle it from here....im sure you have more important things to do.

kat;"SIX, you should be picking up jun's nav marker, thats where we're headed.

you turn and as kat and carters sabre comes into view, so does a massive covenant comm ship swarming with saraphs and banshees.

carter;"jun and emile are so far udetected....all we have to do is fight our way in close enough and they'll lower the shields, so we can land in the hangar...
jorge;"is that all???"
carter;"once we land, our secret will be out, and we can expect a welcome party.
jorge;"its about time...i hate flying."

more dogfighting.....

*check point reached*

\cut scene\.
the two sabres bank sharply towards the covenant ship..a shimmer can be seen around a large opening.

the ships enter the bay and land... the spartans jump out, and level there weapons, scanning the bay for movement....

kat;"comander, movement on the other side of that door.
jorge;"lets do this"

kat moves to the controls for the door.....

carter;"six.. youre on point"

you move to a nav marker at he door.

\cut scene\.
still first persone view....

the door opens... you step foward...a large skull fills your view......you're gun barrel to gun barrel with emile.....

jun leans out from behind emile.......
"welcome"

emile gives you a slight nod as you walk into the room.
carter;" nice work you two, you make such a good team"
emile;"hmph"
jun;"dude seriously"
kat;"you got any more friends on this ship?"
jun;"no...why?"
kat;"then the welcome party is here...."

\gameplay\
your squad takes positions facing a large door... the glowing light around it flickers, and it begins to open.........

more to come i need a break.



cont.....

the large door slides open...

nothing..........

carter;"stay sharp"

"ROOOOOOOAAAAR...WORT....WORT......."

an energy sword ignites in the middle of the room...i moves towards you and you use your evade AA to side step the attack.
noble team opens fire and does enough damage, before the elite rolls away, that his camo flickers out....
then...three more swords light up the hallway leading to the chamber, and they charge...

you fight the elites and win the battle..

*check point reached*

jorge;"i got a feeling those arent the only ones on this ship."
kat;"cortanas intel has the reactor core up two levels, towards the stern of the ship....heres a nav marker"
jun;"there ya go big guy, plenty of dinos to shoot on the way im sure."
carter;"stow it noble 4(?)...lets move out"

you advance through more levels fighting all sorts of covenant.

you get close to the nav point.

\cut scene\
you aproach a large door..
kat;"this is it"
emile;"somethings in there....i can feel it"
jun;"great...the chatterbox has the "heeby jeebys"...
carter;"jorge..youre on point"
jorge;" i thought youd never ask"

jorge takes position in front of the door, leveling his turent at it.
"ready"......
kat opens the door......
from your position on the side of the door, you see jorge step back,"what the......." he opens fire and a second later, a huge hunter steps through and tosses the large spartan to the side with one swipe...

\gameplay\
you combat the pair of hunters, killing them both.

\cut scene/
emile steps over to the hunters carcass on the floor, and gives it a swift kick...."what the hell is this thing?"
jun;"why, you wanna ask it out on a date?"
emile;...stares at jun....

pan over to carter helping jorge to his feet.
"you ok big guy?"
jorge;" ive been hit harder playing grav-ball with ODSTs"
jun;"maybe we shoud've brought some of those guys"
emile;"chuckle"
jorge;"your lucky your so damn good with that rifle"
jun looks at emile....."oh, NOW you clam up?"
carter;"focus spartans....kat, how long to set those charges on that core?"
kat;"long enough for you to take care of the contacts about to enter that door.."

\game play\
you take on a few waves of covenant,defending kat as she sets the charges...

*check point reached*

\cut scene\
kat;"charges are set comander"
carter;"good, now how do we get planet side?
kat;"well its a safe bet our sabres are ashes by now."
jorge;"not enough seats anyhow"
emile;"so....how do we get back to the surface?
"silence".........
jun;"NOW ITS A MISSION"

emile holds his fist out...jun gives it a bump.

kat;" the hangar we landed in was meant for drop ships...thats why it was so empty.
carter;"your point noble 2?"
kat;" there should be a combat hangar towards the center of the ship.......think you guys can fly a seraph?"
*long pause*

jun punches emile in the shoulder..."SHOTGUN".....


you then work your way to the combat hangar, and escape flying seraphs wich fly very similar to sabres but are slightly faster and more nimble.

some dogfighting to get clear of the doomed ship, and...

\cut scene \
the ship explodes as the three seraphs speed toward the planet and it fades out to enter the next campaign mission.

thats all for now...very tired
hope you like it.




  • 07.11.2010 7:25 PM PDT
Subject: My idea for the opening of HALO:REACH.....

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Please spell check man.

  • 07.11.2010 7:29 PM PDT

Damn snipers!!!

I have now read the books...

your stupid makes my brain sad

not an english major, so sorry.

but you are the first one to complain about it.
i went over it and caught a few things but didnt think it was THAT bad.....
Posted by: Elite assassin 1
Please spell check man.

  • 07.11.2010 7:34 PM PDT

Damn snipers!!!

I have now read the books...

your stupid makes my brain sad

edited title.

  • 07.11.2010 7:39 PM PDT
Subject: My fan-fic HALO:REACH. more on page 2...more to come.

BAM said the lady

Posted by: ceebee r
Posted by: ceebee r
....fade in


two falcons carrying noble team race away from the last mission.

jorge;"well that was fun"
jun;"what, you dont like cutting those alien bastards to pieces?"
emile;"hmmph"
kat; comander, why do i get the feeling we're fighting a losing battle?
carter;"when arent we fighting a losing battle,kat?"
emile;"hmmph"
jun;"anyone ever tell you you talk too much?"
emile; stares at jun.
carter; "you got any ideas leutentant?"
kat looks at noble 6....
"tell us more about project SABRE."


falcons fly off into the setting sun...
fade out.

fade in...

the two falcons are seen from an above angle

carter;"you sure this will work,kat?
kat;"as well as any of my other plans."
jun;"well now i feel all warm and fuzzy."

jun and emile's falcon splits off to the left and speeds out of view.

carter;"good luck spartans"
emile;"you too sir"
jun;"do you ever shut up?"
emile; stares at jun......

jorge;" lets go over this one more time...those two geniuses are going the steal some covenant aircraft, slip aboard one of their communication ships, lay out the red carpet for us and we just stroll on board and knock out their comms on the surface?.....
kat;"yup"
carter;"we downloaded enough intel from the Pillar of Autumn's A.I. to be able to decipher the covenant controls and lower the shields long enough for us to get on board.
jorge;"ok...just asking"
we then pick up the mission "Long night at Solace"

here

after you finish the mission to defend the UNSC cruisers, a voice comes over the comm." thanks for the help sabre team" we can handle it from here....im sure you have more important things to do.

kat;"SIX, you should be picking up jun's nav marker, thats where we're headed.

you turn and as kat and carters sabre comes into view, so does a massive covenant comm ship swarming with saraphs and banshees.

carter;"jun and emile are so far udetected....all we have to do is fight our way in close enough and they'll lower the shields, so we can land in the hangar...
jorge;"is that all???"
carter;"once we land, our secret will be out, and we can expect a welcome party.
jorge;"its about time...i hate flying."

more dogfighting.....

*check point reached*

\cut scene\.
the two sabres bank sharply towards the covenant ship..a shimmer can be seen around a large opening.

the ships enter the bay and land... the spartans jump out, and level there weapons, scanning the bay for movement....

kat;"comander, movement on the other side of that door.
jorge;"lets do this"

kat moves to the controls for the door.....

carter;"six.. youre on point"

you move to a nav marker at he door.

\cut scene\.
still first persone view....

the door opens... you step foward...a large skull fills your view......you're gun barrel to gun barrel with emile.....

jun leans out from behind emile.......
"welcome"

emile gives you a slight nod as you walk into the room.
carter;" nice work you two, you make such a good team"
emile;"hmph"
jun;"dude seriously"
kat;"you got any more friends on this ship?"
jun;"no...why?"
kat;"then the welcome party is here...."

\gameplay\
your squad takes positions facing a large door... the glowing light around it flickers, and it begins to open.........

more to come i need a break.



cont.....

the large door slides open...

nothing..........

carter;"stay sharp"

"ROOOOOOOAAAAR...WORT....WORT......."

an energy sword ignites in the middle of the room...i moves towards you and you use your evade AA to side step the attack.
noble team opens fire and does enough damage, before the elite rolls away, that his camo flickers out....
then...three more swords light up the hallway leading to the chamber, and they charge...

you fight the elites and win the battle..

*check point reached*

jorge;"i got a feeling those arent the only ones on this ship."
kat;"cortanas intel has the reactor core up two levels, towards the stern of the ship....heres a nav marker"
jun;"there ya go big guy, plenty of dinos to shoot on the way im sure."
carter;"stow it noble 4(?)...lets move out"

you advance through more levels fighting all sorts of covenant.

you get close to the nav point.

\cut scene\
you aproach a large door..
kat;"this is it"
emile;"somethings in there....i can feel it"
jun;"great...the chatterbox has the "heeby jeebys"...
carter;"jorge..youre on point"
jorge;" i thought youd never ask"

jorge takes position in front of the door, leveling his turent at it.
"ready"......
kat opens the door......
from your position on the side of the door, you see jorge step back,"what the......." he opens fire and a second later, a huge hunter steps through and tosses the large spartan to the side with one swipe...

\gameplay\
you combat the pair of hunters, killing them both.

\cut scene/
emile steps over to the hunters carcass on the floor, and gives it a swift kick...."what the hell is this thing?"
jun;"why, you wanna ask it out on a date?"
emile;...stares at jun....

pan over to carter helping jorge to his feet.
"you ok big guy?"
jorge;" ive been hit harder playing grav-ball with ODSTs"
jun;"maybe we shoud've brought some of those guys"
emile;"chuckle"
jorge;"your lucky your so damn good with that rifle"
jun looks at emile....."oh, NOW you clam up?"
carter;"focus spartans....kat, how long to set those charges on that core?"
kat;"long enough for you to take care of the contacts about to enter that door.."

\game play\
you take on a few waves of covenant,defending kat as she sets the charges...

*check point reached*

\cut scene\
kat;"charges are set comander"
carter;"good, now how do we get planet side?
kat;"well its a safe bet our sabres are ashes by now."
jorge;"not enough seats anyhow"
emile;"so....how do we get back to the surface?
"silence".........
jun;"NOW ITS A MISSION"

emile holds his fist out...jun gives it a bump.

kat;" the hangar we landed in was meant for drop ships...thats why it was so empty.
carter;"your point noble 2?"
kat;" there should be a combat hangar towards the center of the ship.......think you guys can fly a seraph?"
*long pause*

jun punches emile in the shoulder..."SHOTGUN".....


you then work your way to the combat hangar, and escape flying seraphs wich fly very similar to sabres but are slightly faster and more nimble.

some dogfighting to get clear of the doomed ship, and...

\cut scene \
the ship explodes as the three seraphs speed toward the planet and it fades out to enter the next campaign mission.

thats all for now...very tired
hope you like it.






Loved it! the relationship you have with Jun and Emile hahahaha, keep it up! Ill bump it tomorrow... and then type some more...

[Edited on 07.11.2010 9:57 PM PDT]

  • 07.11.2010 9:57 PM PDT

Damn snipers!!!

I have now read the books...

your stupid makes my brain sad

Thanks

  • 07.12.2010 2:16 AM PDT
Subject: My fan-fic for the opening of HALO:REACH. please read.
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LOl ummmm... I made a short story just like you and posted it yesterday... it kinda started out the same way too. Not saying you copied cuz yours is different good job tho. Message me if you would like to see mine.

  • 07.12.2010 2:51 AM PDT

Damn snipers!!!

I have now read the books...

your stupid makes my brain sad

Posted by: lilfuzz
LOl ummmm... I made a short story just like you and posted it yesterday... it kinda started out the same way too. Not saying you copied cuz yours is different good job tho. Message me if you would like to see mine.


Cool, post a link.

  • 07.12.2010 4:14 AM PDT
Subject: My fan-fic HALO:REACH. more on page 2...more to come.

Damn snipers!!!

I have now read the books...

your stupid makes my brain sad

more fic added on page 2

....fade in, a blurred image from a spartan helmet comes into focus...the sound slowly fades in from muffled white noise....a marine medic enters your view...."LT....LT..CAN YOU HEAR ME?....you took quite a hit" you notice your in the middle of a battle(pegasi??)"lets check your armor luetentant"...the pre-requisite focus on the spots ensues..."...ok LT,you seem to be ok. your squad is just over that ridge"....

\game play\
...spartan douglas-312 (my name;)..) sprints across the terain towards a nav point marking his squad... you come across a few small pockets of covenant to fight on the way getting the player some combat exp...(grunts jackles and elites)

*checkpoint reached*

..."[com] S-312 i thought that shot you took was it...glad your on your feet"..."get down here, we're about to......[static]....you see tracer rounds pepper the sky in the valley just out of view..."[com] 312...ITS A TRAP! CLOAKED ELITES WITH THOSE DAMN SWORDS"......." THERE'S TOO MANY...GET OUT OF HERE..{SNARL....WORT..WORT}........AUGGHHHHHHHHHH............ ...".

you clear the ridge to see a dozen kill squad elites standing over your entire team,.....dead.

\cut scene\ they all turn in unison, and stare directly at you and slowly disapear as they charge.

\pick up play\.. you zoom in with your DMR and focus on the ghosly images working there way to you.
after a few kills... [com] "S-312, this is epic thunder. your team is off the scope...we need to get you outa there"...a nav point apears. "get to that nav marker for pick up". you turn and sprint to the extraction point. a falcon touches down in front of you. as you move towards it, a cloaked elite materializes and jumps up on the cockpit,opens the hatch, driving his energy sword into the pilot,lifting him, and tossing him like a rag doll ...you take him out with your DMR. a nav marker points into the falcon. you get in and take off as directions apear telling you how to control it. [com] "spartan 312, i hope you know how to fly that thing, cause youve got bogeys incoming" you begin a short arial combat mission against overwhelming banshees. after a few kills...

\cutscen\ three banshees come in on your six.. you manuver to no avail...plasma bolts pepper your craft as smoke pours out and you crash into a large body of water.. fade into a first person view as you sink into the darkness...fade to black.....

...fade in.
your in the back of a pelican. "the same medic from earlier comes into view. "we've got to stop running into each other like this LT." you sit up..

"the covenant left you for dead..maybe they dont know how to swim" he places his hand on his ear, and listens for a moment... "roger that.....this battle is over leutentant...your lucky to be alive"..."weve got orders to get you out here....someone wants to see you"....
fade out...

you have contol of you charactor..as an elevator opens,revealing a hallway. you walk down it and can control your view. windows on both sides show that your in space on a ship. you enter the door at the end of the hall and look down into a hanger bay at a SABER with people in lab coats working on it.

\cut scene\ you walk towards a balcony over looking the hanger bay...DR. Hasley is standing there...
"i saw what happend to your squad leutentant.....im sorry"
you hear S-312s voice for the first time...
"me too ma'am...you mind telling me what im doing here?"
"not at all douglas...as you know your mjolnir armor is what kept you from drowning on that planet, its also the reason,along with you, so many of the covenant are dead,you did pretty well for your first dogfight".
"whats your point ma'am?
"douglas, what would you say if i told you that shortly after we perfected that armor, that only SPARTANS like yourself can operate, the UNSC decided it was also tired of getting its ass kicked in space?
"ma'am?"

they both walk to the railing and look down at the SABRE.

"think of it as a space fighter version of your armor. only a spartan in mjolnir armor is capble manuvering this thing...."

douglas 312 leans over a little more...

"how do you feel about space combat leutentant?........."

fade to black


the title apears

HALO:REACH

then the anouncement trailer picks up,you race along in your warthog, and the text reads "three years later" (or whatever it would be) and we see the rest of the trailer/cutscene.....

link to get a better feel

just off the top of my head.

this does several things.

explains the "survive pegasi" quote.
explains the "skill set" coment
gives you the training mission.
gets new players up to speed on thier character.
others?....

[Edited on 07.11.2010 7:39 PM PDT]

  • 07.11.2010 11:05 AM PDT

my emblem says how I feel.

Posted by: IExiiLeZz
if bungie aint makin it, i aint takin it.


Link to a michinima artists holy grail:
http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=53904519

Hey guys,
maybe we could all put a single story together
and it expands the whole game and beyond!

(please tell me that was on topic)

That was pretty good

[Edited on 07.12.2010 8:15 AM PDT]

  • 07.12.2010 8:09 AM PDT

I know you may have received a lot of praise in the Reach forum, but here, we're a little harsher.

Firstly, it's great that you decided to write this. Motivating yourself to do that is something that endears you to me greatly.

The main problem I have with this is that you write it like a poor script. Except it's not a script. You've created some weird, horrible hybrid of a script and story.

For example, you wrote:

....fade in, a blurred image from a spartan helmet comes into focus...the sound slowly fades in from muffled white noise....a marine medic enters your view...."LT....LT..CAN YOU HEAR ME?....you took quite a hit" you notice your in the middle of a battle(pegasi??)"lets check your armor luetentant"...the pre-requisite focus on the spots ensues..."...ok LT,you seem to be ok. your squad is just over that ridge"....

If it is a story, then it should be:

The Spartan walked into the room, noting a marine medic entering his field of vision. His ears rang and his sight was blurred.

"Lieutenant? Lieutenant, can you hear me?" the marine demands. The Spartan nodded wearily. "You took a quite a hit."

Gunfire echoed around him, accentuated with the screams of his dying brothers and sisters.

I'm still at Pegasi Delta, the Spartan realised as his mind began to clear.

The medic further ducked down, and crawled to the Spartan., before telling him, "I'm going to check your armour for damage and breaches, sir."

He poured over the torn SPI armour, and began to tut slightly.

"You're pretty torn up, but you'll live I think. Alright, I'm giving you the green light. Your squad is just up on that ridge, try not to strain yourself."



Your grammar is attrocious (sorry, but is is) and your spelling needs work also. Paragraphing is definitely a major issue, and your dialogue could do with a bit of improvement.

Try and put more description into the chapters, and decide if you're writing a script or a story.

I hope I helped. Welcome to the Gallery forum, by the way.

  • 07.12.2010 8:34 AM PDT

I'm someone you knew, maybe even were friends with.....but from another time...another place.

The Mayans were the most epic trolls EVAR.

Posted by: Wolverfrog
I know you may have received a lot of praise in the Reach forum, but here, we're a little harsher.

Firstly, it's great that you decided to write this. Motivating yourself to do that is something that endears you to me greatly.

The main problem I have with this is that you write it like a poor script. Except it's not a script. You've created some weird, horrible hybrid of a script and story.

For example, you wrote:

....fade in, a blurred image from a spartan helmet comes into focus...the sound slowly fades in from muffled white noise....a marine medic enters your view...."LT....LT..CAN YOU HEAR ME?....you took quite a hit" you notice your in the middle of a battle(pegasi??)"lets check your armor luetentant"...the pre-requisite focus on the spots ensues..."...ok LT,you seem to be ok. your squad is just over that ridge"....

If it is a story, then it should be:

The Spartan walked into the room, noting a marine medic entering his field of vision. His ears rang and his sight was blurred.

"Lieutenant? Lieutenant, can you hear me?" the marine demands. The Spartan nodded wearily. "You took a quite a hit."

Gunfire echoed around him, accentuated with the screams of his dying brothers and sisters.

I'm still at Pegasi Delta, the Spartan realised as his mind began to clear.

The medic further ducked down, and crawled to the Spartan., before telling him, "I'm going to check your armour for damage and breaches, sir."

He poured over the torn SPI armour, and began to tut slightly.

"You're pretty torn up, but you'll live I think. Alright, I'm giving you the green light. Your squad is just up on that ridge, try not to strain yourself."



Your grammar is attrocious (sorry, but is is) and your spelling needs work also. Paragraphing is definitely a major issue, and your dialogue could do with a bit of improvement.

Try and put more description into the chapters, and decide if you're writing a script or a story.

I hope I helped. Welcome to the Gallery forum, by the way.


Some advice, dude? Listen to Wolvers.

Other than the script-story thing, good work.

  • 07.12.2010 10:11 AM PDT

my emblem says how I feel.

Posted by: IExiiLeZz
if bungie aint makin it, i aint takin it.


Link to a michinima artists holy grail:
http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=53904519

post removed 'cause I'm not in the mood to get banned today.

[Edited on 07.12.2010 1:36 PM PDT]

  • 07.12.2010 10:50 AM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

Posted by: aaahhhoooiiii
Is it my turn to write a story?


Not here, it isn't. post in a seperate thread. Sort out your paragraphing and grammar first.

  • 07.12.2010 11:30 AM PDT

my emblem says how I feel.

Posted by: IExiiLeZz
if bungie aint makin it, i aint takin it.


Link to a michinima artists holy grail:
http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=53904519

won't that lead to a bunch of spam-like threads all: Halo reach story?

  • 07.12.2010 11:41 AM PDT

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