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Subject: Check out what i made...

First Attempt
Second Attempt
Third Attempt
Comments of all kind(compliments/insults) are welcome
First attempt was in Windows Paint, second attempt was in Adobe Fireworks CS3.

What do you think of it? how could i improve it?


[Edited on 07.14.2010 4:49 AM PDT]

  • 07.12.2010 8:08 AM PDT

@JosephBiwald
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Per Audacia Ad Astra

It's interesting, but is very vague. There is really no lighting effects and the piece is only comprised of a screenhsot and text. But I do like the concept, good job.

  • 07.12.2010 8:24 AM PDT

Third attempt up, is the new look for better or worse

  • 07.14.2010 4:50 AM PDT

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Third attempt is unique, but it's a bit hard to see edges. I prefer second attempt.

  • 07.14.2010 7:49 AM PDT

Reach for Halo!

what is font for second one
the second was byfar the best

  • 07.14.2010 2:05 PM PDT

what is font for second one
It's Arial
and yeah i liked the second one as well, but im trying to get a unique look to it that suits it

  • 07.15.2010 12:26 AM PDT