Papa John.
It has been more than a pleasure reading your work. I am looking forward to entrenched (which I will read right after posting this :] ).
If I were you I would seriously consider publishing. Hell, you must be what, between 18 and 30ish? I'm sure you'd get a lot of hits, I know I'll buy a copy (if it's out where I live, in France)
Remember this: JK Rowling was living on the streets and she made -the gods only know how much- money without thinking it would be such a hit. She's now one of the richest women in the world.
Consider it. :] And the best of luck if you do.
I'm looking forward to checking out the map, AND, when Reach is out I am going to try to recreate it to how I imagined it. (If you want I'll send you a link when I make it :] )
Once again, I loved reading this, I haven't done anything else all morning, Hell, I skipped breakfast for this.
*EDIT*
Saved.
[Edited on 08.16.2010 9:37 AM PDT]