- Canipa09
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Posted by: artist2nv
KILLING AND RAPING MY XBOX DOESNT IMPROVE MY MATHS TEST RESULTS!!!
Can I make some corrections to grammar please?
After a year of wait -> After a year of waiting
A project that involves more than thirty persons -> A project that involves more than thirty people
Finaly comes out -> Finally is released
It's Absolute Necessity -> It's an Absolute Necessity
Apart from that, great job!
Bonne chance!