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Well, 3 out of 3 people so far think it's mediocre at best. I mean, the most dramatic music can't help your exposition if it's just a single shot of a guy pointing his gun around by a river followed by some text.
All the teaser of the shot relies entirely on the text for story telling. If you're going to make any kind of narrative video, read some tips from a book or online first.