"A hero need not speak. For when he is gone, the world will speak for him."
I cannot offer Any advice at all since i never made a montage. But what i can say is i really liked the video, great choice of music. Also You do have my sub now as i am typing this looking forward to future videos Similar to that Montage you just did.
Thanks very much for the subscription, I will be working on a Reach montage when it's released :), so glad you liked it :D.